6-Meeting The Family
Chapter 6
Meeting The Family
Onyx woke up this morning with the need to play with Twilight again. Last night when Celestia had explained to him that she would now take the young unicorn under her wing, Onyx was happy with this news, because it means that she will come to the castle everyday to learn from Celestia, and play with him. Since he still needs to get revenge on her, and defeat smarty pants. She had won, when she had thrown Smarty Pants in his face, and hid his commander Philomena until he gave up.
Onyx was so lost in his thoughts, he did not see his cousin until he bumped into him.
“OUCH!... Hey Blueblood, what are you doing here?” Onyx asked, before he took a quick look at him. Usually Blueblood would have a clean mane, it was like as if Nightmare Moon herself was running after him.
“Get out of the way!!! And if you see my sister, tell her that you never saw me!” He screamed before he started to run away again. Onyx was troubled, his cousin never came near his room.
“BLUEBLOOD COME BACK HERE!!!!!!!!” Yelled a angry pink alicorn with... with a green mane..???
“Cadence..... why is your mane gr-”
“DON’T ASK!! DID YOU SEE WHERE BLUEBLOOD WENT!?”
“He ran that way.” Onyx answered back, pointing in the direction Blueblood had ran.
Cadence and Blueblood were never playing him. Usually Cadence is too busy with her homework in her royal school, and Blueblood... Well, he just never wants to be with him. At first, Onyx thought, ‘Maybe because I’m was too young?’ (Blueblood was 12 years old and Cadence is 16 years, so Onyx was younger than them both.) later on, he realised that Blueblood just didn’t like him.
“Well, I think I should go eat, before mom eats all the pancakes... Again” He thought out-loud.
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Celestia was sitting in the dining room, and the only thing that restrained her from throwing herself into the big pancake mountain in front of her, was that she’d just finished brushing her mane, and she didn’t want to redo it again. So she just had taken 3 pancakes and started to eating them slowly, that was, until her son came in.
“NOOO! Mommy, don’t eat all the pancakes, somepony had put poison in them!!” Onyx yelled. Celestia immediately stopped eating them.
“And what is this type of poison?” She asked smirk, knowing her son only wanted the pancakes to himself.
“It’s a type of poison that only works on ponies, so I will need to eat them all for your protection.” Onyx said with a killer pokerface that a child his age shouldn’t have.
Celestia pushed her breakfast away, then took some bread with her magic, deciding to amuse her son. Onyx, who was smiling, like if it was the most wonderful day of his life, had sat down at his seat, then placed all the pancakes onto his plate. They both started to eat silently, until Cadence, still with a green mane, and Blueblood... who had a strange red mark on his cheek, came in. They both sat down at their respective places, even if Blueblood was now more closer to Onyx than her sister.
“Auntie Celestia, why does Onyx have all the pancakes?” asked Blueblood, Celestia had left her son to answer him.
“Because they have poison in them and I’m the only one who is immune, is me!”
“If only you weren't immune to them.” Blueblood whispered to himself, buying in to the lie, but Celestia heard him and gave him a stern look, that said ‘Bitch, fuck you, thats my son motherfucker’
They all started to eat, the room was calm, and the only noise in the room was the one, of somepony eating, until Onyx stopped and turned himself to his mom.
“Mom... why haven’t I started school yet?” he asked. Celestia choked on her orange juice, not expecting that answer. Blueblood and Cadence just waited until she regained herself.
“Why *Cough* why would you ask such a question, Onyx?” she questioned.
“Well, yesterday, Twilight was telling me, that she will start school now, and she’s 2 years younger than me, so I was wondering, why I haven’t started it yet.”
“Well, because... I was thinking about it not to long ago, but because you never asked to go to school. I was guessing that maybe, you don’t want to go there now.” Onyx was looking frustrated.
“But I WANT to learn, I want to know how things work here and share it with Twilight when she comes and meets me again.”
Celestia sighed, she did not like the idea to send her son off to school, but she had no choice.
“Well, okay then. What do you think, if we go get you registered this afternoon?” Onyx ran up to Celestia and hugged her.
“Thank you! Thank you! Thank you mommy! I’m gonna go tell Shadow Heart now!” He said before he ran out of the dining room. Celestia looked at him with a smile... until she couldn’t see him anymore.
“You both still need to explain to me why you, Cadence, your mane is in a color like that, and YOU nephew, we will need to have a talk about how you reacted with Onyx.” Celestia said those words, dripping with toxic venom. Blueblood gulped and started to pray for a miracle that will let him get out of this situation.
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Onyx was in his room, and had packed some stuff for this afternoon. He was taking his favorite pencil, some sheets of paper, an eraser, and finally a backpack that Cadence had given him when she had visited him a little while ago. She had said that it was an early birthday gift, the backpack was black like his hair, and with a picture of the sun and the moon, on each side. When Celestia and Onyx came back from the school for the inscription, she had give him a list with many things to buy for school, and now the last thing he will need, is to prepare the lunch for tomorrow.
Onyx was in the royal kitchen, preparing a peanut butter, and jelly sandwich for the lunch for tomorrow by himself. When the door opened and Blueblood come in.
“Hey, cousin, what are you doing here, do you want to help me? I can’t reach the peanut butter.” asked Onyx, but instead of Blueblood answering him, he slapped him.
“Listen to me you junk, by your fault, Celestia cut the money I receive every week! So don’t ask me to help you, or be your friend. I’m only friends with PONIES. You monster. How can you think, you can have friends if you are not one of us?” Then seeing that Onyx had left his backpack on the floor, Blueblood opened it, and started to stomp on it. Onyx was in tears, at each stomp of Blueblood, he could hear the noises of the things being broken inside, but the only thing he can do, is watched him.
“That was for telling my sister where I was this morning.” then he walked away, but before he went out, he gave Onyx a look of disgust.
“And don’t you dare, try to go cry to the legs of your mommy. I know where you are, and I know where you hide your stupid plushies.”
“NO! Please don’t do that!” Cried Onyx. Alone on the floor in the kitchen.
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Amazing, as always
And Blueblood will burn in hell
Blueblood you d***!!!! also great fic keep up the great work
short chapter every day.
Cadance
griffin
and I dont know how to do the last one.
BLUEBLOOD!
I kinda like the short chapters, but give us a long chapter for special events in the stories, like an event from an episode.
Short story every day plz
1985658
send me pm with the description of your OC and if i like it, i add it into the story
It doesn't really matter; Griffin, Griffon, and Gryphon are all correct ways to spell the word. The word 'γρύφων', (which is Griffin in the original greek) becomes Gryphon when using the roman alphabet but any of the three is correct. So to answer your question, it's Griffin, Griffon, or Gryphon.
short chapter every day
cadence
griffin
and I'll pm you.
....O.o wow...cant say I didn't see it coming but...blueblood needs to be acquainted with the back of someones hoof...wait that would hurt less... the FRONT of someones hoof, seriously he saves celestia from the pancake assassin and you still hate him
Actually, the roman (and most widely accepted when involving mythical terms) translation for the spelling for the creature is Gryphon. Cadance, and finally, can we punch Blueblood later? AND I SHALL FINALLY UNVEIL AN OC!
Hey quick question, since i fail miserably at keeping time. How old is Onyx?
1985391
"Your a wizard, Onyx."
1985816
7 years old
how about a medium chapter every three days
1) short chapter everyday or big chapter everyweek. Big chapter
2) cadance or cadence Cadance
3) griffin or gryffin. Gryphon
It's Cadance and griffon.
Also, good update!
don't care, Cadence, griffin.
I always see her name spelled as Cadance
I vote for short chapters.
Griffin
Candace
And sorry but I don't have a Oc to offer, but I know one think, Onyx maybe will not tell Celestia what happen but she will find up eventually and Blood will really going to get it then, je this looks like a job for Candace, she maybe occupied with her studies but I bet, she will be more than happy to teach some thing to Onyx and blueblood never said anything about tell anything to his sister.
Also Celestia has a weakness for pancakes? Why I have the felling that as soon Onyx learn how to cooked, he will give her a tower of banana flavor pancakes with sirup and a little ice-cream in bed, to celebrate mothers day? I can only imagine what Celestia will tell him…between sobers, because I image her holding tears
1) short chapter everyday.
2) Cadence
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But then again.... as many knows, Celestia's equivalent was pink.
3) Gryphon, or griffin.
4) Sent an Gryphon OC over PM since I suspect he'll go to the interspecies school.
1985822 Thanks! Also, SUBMITTED MY OC FOR YOUR CONSIDERATION!
1. Doesn't matter to me.
2. Either one.
3. griffon, griffin, or gryphon
Another great chapter. Keep up the good work!
The only thing that irks me are the occasional grammar mistakes. But, you informed us that english was not your first language so I'll not hold that against you.
Also, Blueblood is a *******!
Every day!b
-Short chapter
-Cadence
-Griffin
-I'll PM an OC if I come up with anything.
-Sturrn
1. Doesn't matter to me.
2. Cadance
3. Gryphon.
A) both please
B) Cadance seems to be more accepted, but you're the writer, screw the rules!
C) Same rule (or lack thereof) applies to Griffin.
on a personal note:
Blueblood now has a lovely apartment prepared for him the next time i see him... it's a nice enough place far away from my sweet little Onyx, and the sniveling brat can never complain about it being too cold for him. Especially since i'm going to send him INTO THE HEART OF THE SUN FOR THE NEXT CENTURY FOR MAKING MY BABY CRY!
well its official (grabs a gun) blueblood is going to die
Mind if we join you Celestia?
My Dragon/ Pegasus hybrid character.
1) doesn't matter to me
2) Cadance
3) Gryffin
4) question about the OC, does it have to be a specific race of pony? cause i remember you mentioning him most likely going the earth pony school so i wasn't sure if he could meet other races of ponies in that chapter. not sure if i'll actually submit something, but i figured it wouldn't hurt to ask the question in case others were wondering the same thing.
a couple of questions: Did Ponys change teeth? and in some part of the future did Onyx will star wearing a cape or a crown?
1. short
2. Cadence
3. Gryphon
4. I don't have a character but I would prefer him to get a griffin friend.
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1. Big chapter as my vote.
1986131
i think you have miss read because he will go to the inter-specie school, so its can be a griffon, diamon dog, pegasus, a blob or whatever you want
So, could we at one point see Onyx beat up Blueblood? Pretty please?
1986394
oh that's right! i was wondering why the earth pony school didn't sound right. but, figured you'd let me know if i was wrong or not. anyway, thanks for clearing that up.
Great Chapter!
Chapter every week.
cadence
gryffin.
:)
no wonder erryone hate u, Blublood.
wait wat Twi is only 3 years old? o_O
well, i don't speak English/American as my first language, but i don't feel like that comma should be there.
on a totally unrelated note.
RUSTY SCREWDRIVER. TO. THE GUT. REPEATEDLY. Maybe some biogenic amines on it. They're really easy to make
blueblood is a massive douchebag, no wonder Rarity reamed him a new one at the Gala last time she went
i dont get why everyone's so focused on guns to go and kill blueblood with, to me it seems to be giving him the easy way out.
what we should do is start by putting bamboo under his hooves and play mental games with him, and finally pump acid through his veins before unveiling him to the whole population. It seems a lot more effective and fun way to get revenge on blueblood
This story is just so cute.
1) As long as the chapters keep coming, I will be happy.
2) Cadance
3) either, your choice
4) Still working on mine
So, uuuh, will you be getting a proofreader/editor or what? This is starting to become a bit painful to read, which is a shame considering it's an interesting enough premise.
Oh one question, did Onyx will get a pet in the future? And just wondering, did he get along with Philomina?
1.- dont care I just want moar
2.- Cadence
3.-Gryffin
4.- SPIKE IS HERE!
If long chapters give you more time to check grammar and spelling, then I vote for longer ones weekly. This is getting painful to read. The tense switches mid-sentence several times throughout the chapters, Shadow Heart's name is inconsistently spelled in two or three chapters, and the punctuation needs a little work.
Cadance
Gryphon
Onyx, hide your plushies in a different location, then tell your mother about Blueblood's behavior. Might he retaliate? Yes, but Celestia will be more vigilant, catch him in the act and then kick the prince out of the Castle.
1988684
well your no tthe first to asked to change my grammar so here some answer:
!) im a quebecois (we speak french) so my english is bad
2) i have "hired" a proof reader so i will send it to him before i post my chapter
3) no, making longer chapter will not help the grammar