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JujubeLand
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Yes...
Holy shit. A new clopfic thats written... REALLY well.
YOU GET MUSTACHEZ!! 
Nice!
Very different and very nice! This story doesn't follow the beaten path. A very welcomed read!
You know....this could have been totally normal....weird.
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That was different
Interesting style and pairing, and expertly done.
Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!
YOU ARE A GOD!
I like the new writing style, you pulled it off brilliantly!
Brilliant
A bit different, but I liked it
you get my green thumb
Truly a work of art!
You sir, are an excellent writer and your stories will probably be featured in the future if they aren't clopfics. Good luck to you.
This was quite nice.
1449772
Haven't you noticed that quite a few clops make it to the feature box?
1445532>>1445573>>1445665>>1445790>>1446338>>1446575>>1446879>>1447191>>1450773 Thank you, thank you, and thank all of you!
1446079 Normal as in non-clop? Probably, but I tried to make it more romantic and less "dirty," as it were.
1446165 And is that a good thing?
1446552 As much as I appreciate your positive feedback, I am nowhere close to being a deity. I do thank you, though.
1449772 I hope that one day they will. Thank you for the uplifting words.
^^ I actually really liked it, even though I'm a fan of Apple Bloom x Pipsqueak. HAVE SOME MUSTACHES
1455411 Thanks! Personally, I pair Apple Bloom with Chowder, but meh, ships are ships.
1454495
Damn, AnonponyDASH wasn't lying about your skill. That and you totally preyed on my easily piqued Sweetie x Pipsqueak fetish. Bravo damn you, bra-fucking-vo.
1473115 Even the strongest soul crumbles before the might of Sweetie Belle x Pipsqueak. Thanks much for the read and the compliments!
Hrhm. Cute...but kinda hawt? Ill study this more.
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I mean it! Seriously, what was the prompt for this one, writing clop without any actual clop or a newlywed couple's first time? (I don't follow the Sexty Minute Ponies prompt, not that have anything against it, just never have made attempt to find out where it is or write for it.) You managed to take something that I think would've gypped people off possibly (labeling it as Sex, when there's no ACTUAL sex), and turn it into something that's AMAZING.
Another one I read some time ago, when first came out, but didn't comment cause was again, stupid. 
Their relationship was so cute, so innocent, the way you described it (even if you did make them anthro, not that have anything against that, just not sure why); I couldn't HELP but love it. Even if did get a little bit perverted past a certain point, when each mentioned the way they see their first time playing out and playing with themselves. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Sweetie_Belle_lolface.png But it was STILL cute and a delight to read. Please don't stop writing anytime soon! You have a talent and it must be shared with us! Hope to see a new one soon!
1566728 Thanks for the long, positive bit of feedback!
The prompt for this one was two simple words: "The dance." I can't remember what the previous prompt was, but based on that one, I'd written an anthro story involving Apple Bloom and Chowder sneaking away during the reception of Sweetie and Pip's wedding to have a bit of fun. After the prompt for this one came up, it just felt right for me to set it in that same storyline, so that's why I kept it anthro and had the couples the way they were. Everything just kind of fell into place.
I think that the tender, sweet, and innocent love of newlyweds is one of the most beautiful things that can ever exist, and with the "flash forwards" in this story to their first time being intimate, I tried to capture that feeling of both excitement and uncertainty. I attempted to not make it dirty or raunchy, rather focusing on what will probably be going through their minds when they finally cross that line together. More than anything, I was trying to be realistic. During the wedding, which is obviously a major event in their lives, the characters are very likely to dwell on the past (how they met and got to this point), the present (what it's like to have finally said "I do"), and the future (what their first night together will entail), and I tried to give each section its due diligence.
Again, thanks for the positive comments!
Stumbling around the internet, I found this fic. I'm not a clopper, but from people telling me that the way you write is awesome, and the fact that I'm a sucker for romance, I had to read this.
I'm glad I did.
2031858 Allow me to express my most sincere gratitude to you, good sir or madam. I am most thankful that you enjoyed my little story, and it makes my head swell with just a little bit of pride that you were referred to my works by others.
By all means, feel free to peruse my other works as well. There should never be erotica without romance, I say; otherwise, it's just pointless, self-indulgent fluff that makes the real writers look bad. (Not to say my stories aren't pointless, self-indulgent fluff, mind you...it's merely pointless, self-indulgent fluff that gives my readers the "feels"...but I digress.) Again, thank you very much for both the read and the positive feedback! 
3989705 Well thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
There's already an Anthro tag you know.
This story was absolutely, irrefutably, beautiful
Thank you for writing this <3 so damn wholesome!!