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Behold! I bring you the written word! ...That is all.

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Applejack/Soarin', huh? Never seen that one before. I guess he would do it for the pies, though. :trollestia:

hmm... I honestly do think that this ship of Soarin/Applejack works, Pegasi don't have to always be with other Pegasi. on fimfiction.net it seems that writers only pair him with rainbow dash and spitfire. I honestly really like this pair.

Well...that is it I can't take it anymore! I must write a romance fic with this ship! Argh!:trollestia:

Really nice writing! :)

1002147 Oh, he does it for the pie...if you know what I mean. :trollestia: Thanks!

1002214 These two together makes much more sense than people give it credit. Thank you for the read and comment!

1002274 Thanks much!

1002759 :ajsmug:

If any of you are interested in seeing a longer fic involving these two, check out "Where Earth and Sky Meet" from my story list. Thanks again for the views and comments!

1002147 Never seen Applejack/Soarin?
You must be new here.

I really like this one, and it was cool how you gave a little shout out to some other pairings you haven't written yet. I though that was a nice touch. Very nice through and through.
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1004543 Sounds like someone's looking forward to a Twilight x Time Turner pairing. :pinkiehappy:

1004629 ...Maybe. :twilightblush:

They all sound interesting, though.

Have any ideas for Rainbow? The only ones I could think of is that RD fanboy (you know, that one guy who wore that RD shirt), maybe Thunderlane (unless he's taken by Blossomforth), or one of those idiot bullies (ugh), or that one guard that RD was making faces at, (I bet you could make it work), unless you're going to use that OC from before. I think it would be cute if you played on her insecurities a bit more, but whatever. I'm sure you've got a better plan.

1004522
Been reading fanfics for like 4 months. Even in that time of browsing through everything.

1004875 And you've never seen SoarinJack?
I'm truly baffled.

1004875>>1006697

Bronies, bronies, please! The important thing to remember is that the best SoarinJack is MY SoarinJack.

Wait, what?

1004694 Plan? Who said anything about a plan? I'm just making this stuff up as I go. :pinkiecrazy:

Nah, but seriously, I'll figure something out before too long. All these fics are making me come up with a headcanon universe where all the ponies are paired; I just need to iron out the "how" and "why" of it all.

Wow you're really good at writting passionate stories :ajsmug: I'll be watching you :pinkiecrazy:

this is by far my favorite shipping pair... other than of course vinyl scratch and my self... BUT THATS BESIDES THE POINT...anyways i love the fic and i noticed a little " like our first time on that cloud" did you write a fic about that

1069391 I certainly did, sir...take a look at Where Earth and Sky Meet when you get the chance. Thanks for another positive review!

friendo i read that before i had an account...this is hawkward...i loved your fics before...so...AWESOME

1002147
Wow. Really?
SoarinxApplejack is a very common shipping

I strongly favor this kind of writing structure for clop: short, to the point, and easy on the filler dialogue.

Nice one here! I normally love SoarinDash or SoarinFire, but I think there's a lot of potential to SoarinJack. :ajsmug:

1215649 Thanks! If you like this pairing, you should check out Where Earth and Sky Meet, my longer and more detailed SoarinJack piece.

After reading these three stories, let me give credit where credit is due. Your stories are mechanically superb, your syntax is quite pleasant, and your characters are spot-on. Individually, all of these stories have been fantastic.

Taken together, though, they are somewhat lessened. Luckily, this is not in a story-wrecking way; in fact, I liked the overarching story between this story and WEaSM. It's just that certain similarities emerge. In each of the three stories I just read the "joined by a thin string of saliva" line popped up in only slightly changed forms. Also, the "separating from her with a soft, wet pop" felt a bit recycled from WEaSM.

This leaves me with a good deal of cognitive dissonance. On one side, I really do like these stories, and, as such, I have been thumbing them up. On the other, though, I don't like the — in my mind — glaring similarities between them. I mean, I suppose that the "pop" thing could be a form of a callback, but I just don't feel that to be the case.

I am honestly sad that I won't be giving you more than a few likes, and I'm also more than a little intimidated. You've written a lot of this stuff, and maybe this type of repetition is actually unavoidable. If that is the case, then I am even more sorry about not watching you, as it's not your fault. Bringing in further cognitive dissonance — and please don't take this the wrong way — I do hope that it's just a slip-up on your part. Otherwise, there isn't a way to keep it fresh, and that would be an issue to me, an entire genre-spanning issue. I hope that doesn't exist... But I also hope you aren't failing.

Huzzah, I have confused myself...

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