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JujubeLand


Behold! I bring you the written word! ...That is all.

Comments ( 32 )

Haha, you've done it again! :pinkiehappy:
10 for the story, 10 for dat fellatio.

Ah, such a lovingly detailed blowjob scene.

Great job.

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Thanks everyone! Glad you enjoyed it.

Great read, thumbs up. :moustache:

i can't find a score high enouf so ill say its one of the best Clops i have ever read.

1104252 Appreciate it!

1107157 :twilightblush: Thanks a ton! I'm glad you liked it so much.

1108609 This must be the new "Pinkiegasp Rating System" I've heard so much about. Thanks!

1109057
I know this is a Sexy Minute Ponies story... But.....
Could you...
Maybe.......
Continue this?

1109156 Unfortunately, I have a lot on my plate at the moment...there are simply too many short stories that people want me to extend! I'm sure that in the future, there will be further exploits featuring this couple, but as far as this story goes, it looks like it will remain a one-shot.

:applecry:

Now, now...don't be sad...

Damn it, I'm all hot and bothered again. Way to go JuJu

1112109 ...You're welcome? I think? ...Glad you liked it.

Now that's what I call a story. The fundamentals of narrative have all been mastered here. Very very good. Rare to find a fanfic this good... Let alone a clop. :pinkiehappy:

D'awwwww, that is a really cute clop. :pinkiehappy:

1263997 Thank you very much! The sheer adorableness of Sweetie x Pipsqueak is nearly impossible to satisfactorily describe with words available in the English language.

1359675 I appreciate the comment, as well as the faves. Thanks!

Is it weird that I was hearing Queen's "Get Down, Make Love" while I read this?

1641852 It's never weird to hear Queen.

NEVAR.

can you do Spike x Rarity next

You know, I would like this story a lot more if it weren't for the fact that apparently Sweetie Belle of all characters has a blowjob cutie mark.......just seems wrong and not in the good way either. Besides that, this was good.

2374756 That's the thing; she doesn't, at least not blatantly. The way I see it, her true talent lies with her singing, but she also possesses a skill that only she and Pip will ever benefit from. It's kind of like their little secret; every time somepony else sees her cutie mark, they'll know it represents her vocal prowess, but whenever Pip sees it, he'll be reminded of that and so much more. :raritywink: That's my justification, at least. I'm glad you enjoyed the story otherwise.

2375252

Nice way of looking at it and it makes sense and now I have to cut this short because I have to respond on the other story.

I love the way you gave more insite to pip in this story, you made one heck of a story and the deeper meaning to it is amazing thank you for all of your hard work into all of your story's I look forward to reading more! :twilightsmile:

3006321 And thank you for the positive comment! I'm glad you enjoyed the read, and I hope my stories continue to entertain you in the future.

3008874
With some clops, writers just make the characters go hooves and genitalia first and end it quickly. I like this, because you actually bothered to put some character development and a short, believable story to go along with it.
Good on you.
I think you have earned it. I award you...
A MOUSTACHE!!!!! :moustache:

3469500 What is a story without story? A travesty, I say! And thank you for the fantastic moustache. If you like clop with story, feel free to check out the rest of my library of fics. Thanks again!

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While I don't clop, I enjoy a good read. And I may take you up on that suggestion. Many thanks.

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