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JujubeLand
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JujubeLand
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This is...Beautiful.
oh god why...why mr, and mrs.cake fics, i hate them, but i will read this, I SWEAR
Mmm.....that's hot. I'm surprised Pinkie Pie didn't pop in.
That was very well written.
A like for you
wonderful clop friend
good work
Hold on, there wasn't a single mention of either of their names in the story. I tabbed out and tabbed back in, and I forgot who this story was about. That's... something that could be worked on.
You need to add the Human tag to the story. That's all I can say.
1115762>>1117044>>1117210 Many thanks!
1115877 That's because far, FAR too many fics featuring the Cakes make them out to be swingers at best, and at worst unfaithful cheaters or horrible perverts. None of that is in this story. I will NEVER write the Cakes that way. They are a functional, loving, faithful, and all-around adorable couple, and more people need to treat their relationship as such. Ahem...now that I'm off my soapbox, I hope you enjoy the story.
1116044 Yeah...not gonna happen. Thanks for the read!
1118668 I think I'll keep it the way it is, considering that if you click on the story link, you've likely read the description and have therefore been informed of who the players are. I also did it that way on purpose; I feel it grants the intimate moment more accessibility, letting the reader picture his or her self in the story a little easier.
1119206 Good call. Can't believe I missed that! Thanks.
This was absolutely delightful, and I wish the author to know that this is indeed the finest cloppy thing I've read in a while.
Heterosexual, consensual, totally realistic sex between a Married couple? That my dear friend is a breath of fresh air most welcomed!
The episode may have jokingly produced doubts, but in the genuine love and care I see between the Cakes and that which they hold for their offspring, I truly can't imagine the result having come from infidelity, not in the least. A situation that is so real-feeling and more than probable, you gave us a clop from the perspective of a female, but instead of a mindless, lust driven mongoloid, we read of a loving wife and a doting husband revelling in the pleasures of each other. This was no isolated, one night stand to be forgotten in favor of the next conquest; this is but a single chapter in a long tale of two living beings enmeshed within each other's minds and hearts; one that will continue for many more a year unabated and undilluted.
Bravo!
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I completely agree with this. When you can see a loving couple for what they are as well as get in the mindset to offer such great description as well as respect the characters all the while, that is a sign of great work.
Seal of approval on this story as well as this comment!
1130273 I, sir, have been rendered speechless. You've described exactly what I was hoping to convey in this piece, and it truly warms my heart to see that people are deriving that message of true love and commitment from it. Thank you, thank you, and thank you.
1131491 And again I must express my gratitude for your positive feedback.
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No problem, good sir! You completely and totally deserve it, and I want you to never think otherwise
Also, I forgot to like and favorite this'n when I read it earlier. Problem: SOLUTIONIFIED.
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1140623 Pretty much. Thanks for another fave!
I....I envy you so much.
You just have a way of writing clop that is not only descriptive, but tender and, dare I say, beautiful. I will never, ever, ever, ever, not in a millenia, be able to write something as great as this. My clop is so poorly written, so simple, so childish, that I'm surprised people even like it. Your stories are so...so perfect.
That's it, you are definitely going on my watch list.
1143208 I have two things to say in response to this comment.
1) Thank you, from the bottom of my heart. I'm honored and humbled by such lavish praise, and it encourages me greatly whenever someone shows their appreciation for my work.
2) One of the major downfalls of artists is that they serve as their own worst critics; I know that I fall into this category myself. When I compare my stories to others on this site -- such as SleeplessBrony, TAW, or Crowley, for example -- I'm often tempted to feel that my work falls horribly short of theirs. Over the years, however, I've learned that the right attitude to have towards authors you admire is not envy or jealousy, nor even depression at thinking that your stories will never measure up. Instead, I approach their stories with a mind that's eager to learn and thoroughly study their works so that I can learn from what they've crafted. Are they perfect? Of course not, nor do I expect mine to be so (although I try to make it the very best I can), but for them to have achieved success, they must be doing something right. Don't be overly harsh and critical of what you've written; instead, do your best to learn from it and from what others have done. Experiment a bit; change your angle of approach, maybe try a different perspective or tense, and see if you can find a certain point of view that suits your style best. If people don't care for it, don't be depressed; ask them why! Proper reviews are key for an author's success. And above all, have fun! Enjoy yourself!
There I go again, standing on that box of soap.
But seriously, thank you very much for the watch, and please, don't stop writing. You won't get any better by stopping.
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I'm too overly critical of my work sometimes.
1143758 Me too, but I'm trying to learn not to be.
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Thanks, what you said means a lot coming from you.
Perhaps I should take a few pointers from your work.