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Oh Time Turner you...or The Doctor, whoever you are...you are very lucky indeed.
Magic hands...fascinating. But don't let Lyra catch wind of this.
This is intriguing I've never seen this pair before, TimeTwi? TwiWhooves? Well I'll definitely have to read it.
This is a great quickie. Thumbs up
Not bad at all. Not... bad... at all.
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That is all. Really can't think of anything else to say.
1049302 Oh, Lyra...you and your obsession with hands. Thanks for the read!
1049761 I prefer "TimeLight," even though that sounds like some sort of fundraising organization or something. I hope you enjoyed the story.
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1050840 A thumbs-up and a mustache? This is a good day. Appreciate it!
1051312 Then let me say: Thank you for the read and the positive feedback.
I really enjoy your stories, and this one is special
Doctor who is a nerd show...doctor whooves is the doctor...and twi is a nerd. PERFECT PAIRING ....BLOODY AMAZING STORY
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1147726 Interesting train of logic, but it makes sense. Thanks for the read!
not bad, no plot but not bad none the less
Not bad....though I prefer Derpy/Time Turner/Doctor Whooves personally.(Then again, I'm trying to write a Derpy/Big Mac fic myself) And for some stange reason, I imagined the hand as way too realistic and it made my reading of this a bit ...disturbing
Ah well...
But, as always, this story is really good, though not as adorable as some of your other work. It was still top notch though.
Okay, I liked this as well, but a couple things jumped out at me. One was that you semi-reused the "a thin string of saliva still joining our tongues" from "Where Earth and Sky Meet". Being really new to this and not really knowing what I'm doing, I don't really know how many different ways you can go about writing how a passionate kiss ends... I really have to give that a pass, as I don't know a better way to go about it.
The other thing was this one section:
It seems to contradict itself. He seems to be worrying about losing his erection as he's still getting harder, and that seems a bit off to me.
Otherwise, this was a fine little story. I think I will have to check out your other fic that references WEaSM to formulate a final opinion.
could NOT
3489197 "Could NOT" you say? TO THE BAT CAR!
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I agree with you in 100% so "I could agree more" as I do it completely!
5070712 I remember when ponies were discussed on 4chan, that was yesterday.
this was crap