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Seems like Twilight will be getting the help she needs. Still, I wonder if it'll do any good for her.
Anyway, great chapter! Rarity's realizing that actions have consequences and Pinkie's... well, she's Pinkie. Nothing more to add to that. Can we get some Applejack next chapter?
2491203 Thanks! There will be some AJ stuff down the pike, so don't worry!
An update? Good, good, everything is coming according to plan...
Mmm, nice cover art, if a bit grotesque. Perhaps that is what has been scaring readers off? I'm guessing not many people fancy seeing Twilight in unbearable agony with her body actively mutating into an insane fly-esque pony hybrid. Hmph. Their loss. They don't know what they're missing out on.
And so Twilight finally accepts help... If it'll do any good at all. I hope something doesn't make her snap during her stay at the castle, otherwise, there will be blood spilled. Oh yeah, and Dash didn't see a lot of action in this chapter, did she? Because everyone knows who is best pony. Which is strange, because I normally look down upon arrogance.
Met the voice actor of Fluttershy and... Pinkie Pie (?), huh? I never get to go to any of those conventions, must be really grand.
If I were to hazard a wild guess as to what happens next, they'll find the cure, but the transformation's already complete, then everyone will go on a wild fly-pony hunt, pin her down and/or incapacitate her after a little battle scene, and then inject whatever 'magical mystery cure' that they've concocted into her, thus rendering her cured, Twilight and the Elements will make up, Twilight becomes an Alicorn, and they all lived happily ever after! The end...
Man, I love making far-fetched guesses.
2491805 Haha, yeah, the pic is a little wild, but it actually hasn't been around that long. I think I put it up around chapter 9 or something. Also, it just fit so well! I tried looking for other pics I could use, but when I saw this one, I was like, "YES! This is perfect for the story!" So I e-mailed the artist and the artist gave me the ok to use it.
Haha, sorry, not a lot of Rainbow Dash in this chapter. I think I've explored her character pretty well throughout this fic, and there will be some more stuff with her down the pike.
So far I've been to 2 cons for MLP. I went to Bronycon this past summer and the Big Apple Ponycon last month. Both were really nice, although, I could have gone without the fire at Bronycon. I didn't get to talk to a lot of people at Big Apple, but it was still nice, and I did get to meet Andrea Libman, so that was nice.
Nice theory for where the plot can go. I hope you keep reading to find out if you're right!
Ha! Serves you right, Rarity! Now go into a corner and wail in self-blame (although I sincerely doubt that Twilight's transformation was caused by the damage received from Rarity; but we'll never know...)
If I had to take a guess, I'd say that the scientists working on the telepods would need a volunteer for some more advanced experiments. And guess who would be inclined to make amends for her past transgression? At least she could offer something more to her bookish friend than a generous beating.
Heh, I wonder what kind of twisted monstrosity will come out of the telepods this time
*beep *beep*
I have detected two errors on my radar!
"he" should not be capitalised
past
2494717 Haha, yes, Rarity sure has a lot to think about, doesn't she?
I thought that after a question mark or exclamation point in a sentence with quotations, the next word should start with a capital letter, not a lower case. Am I wrong on that?
I can fix the other error no prob. Thanks again!
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Yep, you are.
http://eznguide.rogerdodger.me/#Said-tags
The guide above is actually linked in the tips when posting a new story on fimfiction. But I guess you haven't posted any new ones recently
Anyway, it's not that big of a deal, for me at least; but you will please those who are allergic to even the smallest grammatical mistakes. One year ago, before I started reading fanfics in English, I wouldn't even bat an eyelash at this little error.
edit: I hereby claim the last comment spot on this page
2495226 Haha, ok then! I haven't taken an English class in a VERY long time, so I don't really remember a lot of these little grammar things. I know it might sound bad, but I honestly don't care that much about such things. It's fanfiction, I'm not trying to write a novel here! (Although at this point, it'll probably be about as long as a small one when I'm finished!) Basically, unless its like "Huked oon Fonicks wurkd fr mee!" I don't really care. With that said though, I'll keep that in mind for the next chapters I write. Yay learning!
I just figured out a simple solution. When Twilight said before. (in twifly 1) that it registered them as 2 different beings, all they need to do is reverse the configuration. have it read them as 2 beings, then babaam! fixed!
oops meant 1, srry