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Gojira123


I'm just a guy from Jersey who likes MLP fanfiction

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And all the mares say she's pretty fly for a Twiligh(t)

This is getting interesting...please keep going....I want to read the first story but can't seem to find it. :flutterrage:

1180393 Thanks! The first one is based off of the movie "The Fly" by David Cronenberg and starring Jeff Goldblum and Geena Davis. I will see if I can send it to you, but it should be searchable. I'm glad you like this one so far. :twilightsmile:

1180393 Haha. Well played, sir. :trixieshiftright:

And so it begins... again.
Thanks for the head's up, I wouldn't want to miss out on this story.

1182225 Thanks, man. I hope it meets your expectations. :twilightsmile:

were is spike and how did he tack news of twilight's death?

1184744 I'll be getting to Spike, probably in the next chapter or 2.

Glad to see a sequel. I loved the first one and I can't wait for more. :twilightsmile: Also, I'm guessing that since this is still called Twifly, Twilight is going to come back.

1200137 Thanks! I'm glad that you liked the first one. It was my first fic, so I was a bit worried about the reception. I don't really fancy myself a fiction writer. I had the idea for a sequel before I finished the first one, so I thought I would give it a shot. As for Twilight coming back, you will just have to stay tuned!

1233274 Haha. Thanks again for pre-reading this! As far as making Pinkie cry, don't worry, others will be joining her soon enough.

I'm kind of imagining Discord bring Twilight back as a more perfect fusion, like in the Fly 2. Well, perfect may not be the best word to describe that thing but I think you know what I mean.

Great chapter though, I loved Discord's little field trip. Especially Celestia's part.

This is not going to end well. :twilightoops:

Excellent characterization.

1271258 Thanks! Glad you like it! :twilightsmile:

1271258 Oh, believe me... The fun has only just begun...:pinkiecrazy:

1271258 Thanks! It ended up being longer than I wanted, but that's a good thing. Gives it more substance.

So it's being implied that Twilight went to hell?

...cool! :pinkiecrazy:

1362055 Haha. Glad you like it! :twilightsmile:

1362224 Damn, Dr. Who! Yous a cold bastard! Kinda reminds me of my man, Megatron...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qR42bkaqY-0

1367077 Ah, ok, thanks. That's odd, I didn't have to do that the last time I posted a You-tube comment. Oh, well, thanks for the heads up! :twilightsmile:

1365773 Haha, I'll get into that in later chapters! :twilightsmile:

ooooohhhhh nooooo!!!!!!!!!! its happenning all over again

I somehow managed to miss the previous chapter, I think. Oh well.

This one was great, I like how everypony's reacting so very differently to what happened.

does really closes well to the first part and the tension and the urge for more, is also strongly felt :twilightsmile:
Very well done until now, I'll hope for more heartbreaking reading fun :twilightsheepish:

1473845 Thanks! i started thinking about it, and after re-reading the first story, I was able to make their reactions more diverse.

1475008 Oh, believe me, things are going to get much darker down the pike. I'm really trying to take my time with the set up, but when things start to go down, it'll be going into some really dark places. So, enjoy!! :twilightsmile:

1479701 this sounds *SOOOO AWESOME* :rainbowkiss:.
take your time and it will be the best Story ever, i bet :twilightsmile:

Sandy? Damn, hope you stayed safe during the storm.

Great chapter, seems like some of them are at least trying to get past what happened before. I wonder what Twilight's up to with Rarity, though I think it's not gonna be pretty :pinkiecrazy:

I hope Twilight realizes at some point that all of the old symptoms of her transformation are recurring soon. You'd think she would after going through that once already.

Great chapter. Keep it up. :ajsmug:

1651127 Thanks, man. Yeah, we lost power for 10 days, and I had to co-opt any gas can I could get my hands on just so i didn't have to wait in too many 2-3 hour lines. I'm lucky though, compared to other parts of the region. Things are pretty much back to normal for me though. As for the chapter, thanks again for the good review. As for what Twilight is up to with Rarity, well, you'll just have to stay tuned! :twilightsmile:

1652079 Thanks, man! I'll do my best! :twilightsmile:

finally the next chapter has arrived. :pinkiegasp: :rainbowkiss: :pinkiehappy:

This chapter was one of the most intense, of the Twifly stories. how you brought Tatarus in and the fact that Twilight was punished down there, just awesome and I didn't find any Errors even after the third reading I did. I just can say you did more than a great job with this fiction ( Twifly I and Twifly II ) both are very VERY well written and I hope that you can keep this level of story writing.

If I could I would upvote and fave this Story 10 times more. :twilightsmile:

1656112 Thank you so much for the kind words. I'm much more comfortable with writing now than I was when I started Twifly. I really hope that I continue to meet everyone's expectations. Also, I haven't been doing this alone. Krushnazag has been my pre-reader from chapter one of Twifly, and he's been great. Thanks again! :twilightsheepish:

1653764 1656726 so then I think my kind words should go to both of you huh? :rainbowhuh:

well, aaanywaaaay... :pinkiehappy: you both did awesome work on both Twifly I and Twifly two. :rainbowkiss:
As I said I hardly found any Errors and at the time I read Twifly I the forth time, I found nothing...

you both should be proud of your work and thats all I can say. :twilightsmile:

1657142 well, you both worked together, sure he wrote it and maybe you didn't do much but how said it a certain pony:

"It's like... Apple Pie, you can have amazing Apples and you can have an amazing crispy crust, but only TOGETHER you can have a perfect Apple Pie." :ajsmug:

:twilightsmile:

1657196 I already have this in my Read later list and also started on the third chapter today :pinkiehappy:

and yes I love Darkness, also Love Blood/ Gore, Sad and Tragic, everything that let normal people freeze in awe "mwuaHAHAHAHAAAA" :pinkiecrazy:

PS: sometime Comedy is also fine though :rainbowlaugh:

1657232 nah... I don't think so, I read the whole Twifly I ( just a sample) in less then three hours.

But maybe you're right I mean, Buisness is Boomin sure is a little longer than Twifly, let me think a moment...

I guess I will need, 10 hours maybe 12 if I get a bit lazier than I already am.

*Rainbow Dash's voice from the Background: *Egghead* :twilightblush:

1657232 You did alot more than you think, man. I've been around awhile and I can tell you, things have changed ALOT since I started reading fanfiction. I was pretty intimidated to start writing, let alone put anything out there. I would NEVER have put Twifly out without having someone pre-read it. It's that validation that gave me the courage to post it in the first place, and for that I'm thankful. I'm especially proud of how Twifly II is coming thus far, and I have alot more planned.

1661833 awwww, I think it's time for free Group-hug.... :rainbowderp: or maybe not :rainbowhuh:

:rainbowlaugh:

1663722 Awww, I love you guys too! :twilightblush:

Uh, I would just like to be sure of one thing before you put out the next chapter...

Twilight isn't going to, like, you know... rape Rarity (in the literal sense), right? Because the last time Twilight had those "urges", minus her increased aggression, she fucked a stallion. I'm just hoping that won't be the case here, because at this point in the story, sex would seem incredibly out of place (well, it's always out of place to me when it comes to MLP -- I hate clop -- but you know what I mean).

1733199 Haha. Honestly, I haven't decided yet. Stuff is definitively going to go down. How far I'm going to take it, I really don't know yet. I write with a lot of flow, so I kinda just shoot from the hip. Personally, I think I've done enough set up to get to a bit of action, so I don't think it would be entirely out of place, and I'm toying with a few different ideas right now. I understand what you mean by going a bit too far with it. I still want it to be tasteful, but I also want it to start exploring some darker places. It's a fine line, but honestly, that's the best answer I can give you right now.

1734371 I understand. I just think that based on what we've already seen, you're more than capable of pulling off a great action and suspense filled climax for this situation without having to resort to cliched quasi-clop material.

1788360 Thanks for the compliment, friend! :twilightsmile: I'm about 1/3 through the chapter now, and I've pretty much decided on a course of action. I do know that I want to be more cerebral with it, and focus more on character motivations rather than just strait clop. I don't want to reveal too much, but I will say that this is going to be a scene in a much larger tapestry, so I do ask that you give it a chance before dismissing it, although I would understand if you do, I'm guilty of that as well. (The Fluttershy stare thing annoys the hell outta me sometimes!) Basically, I'm trying to use the actions to explore deeper issues that the characters are dealing with. I don't want it come off like a "Sweet Apple Massacre" thing. Anyway, I should be done soon, and I hope you enjoy it!

well we pretty much discussed this back in Fanfiction.net, still no changed opinions about it. Just happy your on here.

Poor Trixie... three legged pony monster? :trixieshiftleft:

Also, there are no brakes on the rape-express :raritydespair: It seems as if Twilight has picked up some tricks while in Tartarus.

1853535>>1853086 Haha. Well, it's nice to be appreciated!

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