Have you ever asked yourself, "What would it be like if your life was in some ways like a video game?" I didn't, and it's a lot more complicated than to press a button to win
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Always good to see an update
Very good chapter
Its nice to see an update, and especially know that the story isn't dead too!
Great chapter can’t wait for the next one👍👍
Good chapter!
Good chapter
It's pretty cool seeing Star get to interact with the battlecorns from the past. I wonder where they're going to and what Silver went to deal with.
Thanks for the chapter
Oh man, now i will spend however long before another update pondering how he remained himself after turning into a nightmare.
Intriguing. There's more to this than even the Game knows.
I can’t wait to see where this is going
What a cliffhanger
And I thought I had left on a cliffhanger, only to come to binge a cliffhanger... Oh well, still a great story. Sugar Drop is... Well, adorable cute but bordering the line of obsession with Star
Interesting times ahead for the two of them, silly and awkward alike.
I've been looking forward to reading this again for ages. Especially since my tracking didn't tell me about the previous update. Both chapters were great.
For the chapter 4 Bittersweet, I loved seeing what our little bug thought of Star's disappearance, while also showing a perceived deeper relationship between the two. I'm glad Gentle Touch was given a message from Star as well, she deserves to know he's okay, unlike Celestia.
For the current chapter, wow, Star is probably as unrecognisable as I thought he was going to be. I can't wait to see the reactions of everyone back at his home. Part of me thinks Celestia would be incredibly freaked out about his new form.
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For all those wanting to see the MC's appearance here:
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The author did say it was remarkably similar.