Have you ever asked yourself, "What would it be like if your life was in some ways like a video game?" I didn't, and it's a lot more complicated than to press a button to win
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~Nice chapter. I'm glad Star isn't writing Celestial out of his life. So far, she's my favorite character behind Star and the GAME.
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I couldn’t have said it better my self, wish I had a better way with words
This has been an awesome story so far.
Gentle Touch is just an MVP Mom and by far my favorite character in this story. Just the mental image of Celestia getting the bucket treatment was 10/10.
I like how you handled the verbal beatdown, normally celestia would simply become evil to justify the mc from leaving, but you have made it so there can be development for both parties involved, either way good chapter
An amazing climatic end to this chapter, loved the verbal beatdown sunbutt got.
i take it you gonna put time skip part on next chapter...?
God damnit. Sure, we finally hit the climax, but now the problem is, we have to wait for the next chapter
Why must make your chapters so good, yet so fleetingly short!!
(Says me as the chapter is literally 8k words long while I myself have a minimum of 2k for my own chapters. The horror, the horror, and hypocrisy!)
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When the story is good, it does not matter how many words there are. It all ends too fast when having fun.
As a reader, the sorrow of cliffhangers is a close companion.
I’m a little bit teary eyed from this chapter.