A Bisexual Pegasus with a talent in writing and singing. I can also do magic-long story. Also, Luna is best Princess and the Wonderbolts are awesome. Change my mind, I dare you.
Spitfire and Fleetfoot have been best friends with each other and Soarin for as long as they can remember. Soarin and Rainbow realize the signs of crushes after a day at the bar and give the two the push they need. These are their little adventures together
*Some of these chapters may contain violent actions, but they are kept at a minimum, I will include a warning if they contain violence
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And this was fun! I'm a little unsure about writing out Fleetfoot's lisp in her dialogue; it feels a bit mean highlighting her speech impediment every time she speaks, but on the other hand it's ridiculously, absurdly adorable and I just want to cuddle her
I will be tracking this and looking forwards to more!
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i'm not trying to be mean when I wrote Fleetfoot's lisp, it's just that whenever I think of Fleetfoot, i think of her talking with her lisp. It's just a part of who she is, and it seems like she's not afraid to speak with it. I do have a theory that if she were to ever sing anything; her lisp would disappear when she did, because it's found that most people with a speech defect tend to lose it while they sing. I also think when she has thoughts, her lisp doesn't affect how she says things in her head. Thanks for commenting though, I hope you like the story
story alright I just don't like the lisp
9796457
please refer to my reply to For Bloody Summer's similar comment (not being rude, just being lazy)
9798791
I have no clue what you mean but sure
This was really good! The only thing I have to add is that Spitfire doesn't seem like her bossy self in this.. but otherwise
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don't worry, in the chapters where they train, she'll be her usual self. I just imagine that's a show for the fans so they think she's a bossy maniac. in this story, she normally lets her soft side show, but that's so she and Fleet can have fluff scenes
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Oh okay. I love her soft side just as much as her bossy side
This was good! I'm not a big fan of the ship, but that's on me and not on you or the story. Was written nicely, and yes, the last paragraph was pretty cute
why does fleetfoot pronounce all the s letters as th?
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If you pay attention in the scenes she's in, you will notice a slight lisp in her voice. I included that here because whenever I think of Fleetfoot, i think of her talking with her lisp. It's just a part of who she is, and it seems like she's not afraid to speak with it. I do have a theory that if she were to ever sing anything; her lisp would disappear when she did, because it's found that most people with a speech defect tend to lose it while they sing. I also think when she has thoughts, her lisp doesn't affect how she says things in her head.
Loving this story already my friend. And that's as an excitement sleep over for the Wonderbolts. But I wonder what curse words did Spitfire say from that time?
Keep up the 20% awesome work pal.
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I meant that she heard them, but yes, she does curse sometimes. Just imagine all the words you'd hear in a shady area of town and go with those
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Yeah I'd rather not think or say any of those words. But good idea for a sleeping over. Sounds like the wonderbolts had a fun,funny,sweet time.
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That's precisely why I didn't mention those words. I myself also don't curse, and can't fault you for doing the same. For the sleepover, I just thought 'what is my idea for a perfect sleepover?' and worked from there (minus the mentions of drinking)
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Well I think it was great. And I'm also glad they didn't chose "sweet or whatever that was called" also have fun with this my friend.
9898252
not sure which game you meant, but that's okay. and thanks!
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The one that Rapidfire said after he said truth or dare.
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ohh, yeah. like I said in a earlier chapter, Rapid is the Wonderbolts' resident 'mind-in-the-gutter' pony
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Yeah I know that one and some of them too. Have fun.
This makes me a little nervous... This story is going to end, right? I don't like reading stories that don't end.
It will, when I write about them having their first kid. It's going to be soon, I'll be updating at least twice a week...which reminds me, I have to publish another chapter soon
There should be a violence tag then, just in case. Please respond to this comment.
9937257
Okay, I'll add it, thanks for letting me know
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I freaking hope so, that would be the perfect way to end this story.
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What kind of love story would this be if there wasn't? But as a warning Soarindash will probably get married first (because I have Soarin's proposal to Dashie mapped out, and Fleet and Spit have roles in it before they're married)
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Just so it's clear, her birthday is not actually December 20th in this fic, I'm going to put an author's note in
This is very similar to a certain Princess’s birthday scenario. Cough Frozen cough.
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Yes, I am aware of that. I was going to wait until I completed Frozen Friendship for it to be a filler chapter, but I changed my mind. You'll also notice I skipped the song and the sneezing out snow things.
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Can fleet even do that? Sneeze out snow?
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She could, in Frozen Friendship. It's another one of my stories. But I admit, it's weird. (I mean, it makes sense in Frozen Fever, but I don't think it'd work for ponies)
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You too!
So would this fall between frozen friendship and frozen family? Or does this run concurrently in universe?
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This continues on the same timeline as Fleetfire, just in CHS.
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Oh, no. Sorry, I meant the story in general not this specific chapter.
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Oh. Completely different timeline. (or universe, if that makes more sense for you)
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It makes sense either way. Thanks for clarifying.
PS
I finally got around to frozen friendship, it’s amazing so far. Cheers mate.
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Thank you
The amount of times I’ve re read this is unreal 😂
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Heh, well, I'm glad you're enjoying it
You should put the warning in the chapter title as well as an author's note. Please respond to this comment.
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I'll make a note of it
Ahhhh so cuteeee
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Heh, thanks
So is this book done?
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Yeah, pretty much
It’s a great story! I love this ship. I needz moreeeeeeee
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Heh, thanks
Eeeeeee!! So cutieeeee