THIS IS A REMAKE OF NIGHTGLIDER SHIMMER'S STORY One Mistake Can Lead To Pain! I MEAN NO HARM AND PLEASE LET ME KNOW IF I DO ANYTHING WRONG! THANK YOU!
Ok that's out of the way, I absolutely love these stories and (even though this was about 2 years ago) I would love to rewrite them and fix errors. Also I want to finish the second one. Anyway, on to the description:
After Rainbow and Soarin went on another date, Rainbow started getting severe stomach pains. When she goes to her friends to ask if they have an idea of what could be happening to her, what they tell her is to shocking, so she goes to the nurse at school to find out if it is true. What the nurse tells her makes her heart shatter into a million pieces. Rainbow will have to now go on an adventure called pregnancy. And how will Soarin react to Rainbow telling him that he is going to be a father?
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Well since this is the first story I can't really make huge changes. I'll make a couple of big changes but most will be a few small ones and fixing the grammar as much as possible.
Soardash= MY OTP
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Mine too. I do read other Dash ships but none come close pt SoarinDash as my favorite!
Well some one is arrested
well she was punched so hard the baby got a sibling
There goes Soarin's home life...
Huh, that happened.
I remember this story it was really good
WHEN I FIND SOARIN'S PARENTS TARTARUS WILL SEEM LIKE A PARADISE!!!
I like the storyline, but the actual story is a bit choppy. It was kinda hard to follow along.
well, crap. dash and soarin are screwed now.
Soarin’s dad is a BITCH
What happened to soarin’s dad though
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Whoa whoa whoa, how does he know
I have a hunch that it was the little necklace that Gilda was wearing
AHHHHHHHH FLUFFLE PUFF WAS IN THIS STORY
I remember reading this story before and found it very interesting to deal with because it's really hard to be a pregnant teenager. Not the best thing.
Rainbow Dash: “Aw, kitty litter, here we go.”
For some reason this one bit was out of a totally different TV series. Something serious is going on and some adult “Aren’t you a little young to...”
And the rest of the story was NOTHING like the show I mentioned.