After Rainbow and Soarin went on another date, Rainbow started getting severe stomach pains. When she goes to her friends to ask if they have an idea of what could be happening to her, what they tell her is to shocking, so she goes to the nurse at school to find out if it is true. What the nurse tells her makes her heart shatter into a million pieces. Rainbow will have to now go on an adventure called pregnancy. And how will Soarin react to Rainbow telling him that he is going to be a father? i give credit to the person who drew the original picture as the cover art :)
edited by :RaylanKrios
and Spectrum Destiny pre reads the chapters and corects anything that was missed
Chapters (8)
You just spoiled the story in the summary...
4890358
you could just wait for the rest of the story to be out 
theres more to the story than just that i meant to do that
Isn't it supposed to be lead not led? Since led would be past-tense.
4890701
Alright, but then title is still wrong.
4890609
thanks for pointing that out i have a really shity key bord so it can lead to some mistakes and i also have dyslexia
4890717
Don't worry about it. I hope you have this story succeed.
4890708
sorry i saw what you meant right away i never mind about that othe comment i changed it
4890726
Yup, I saw. Good luck with your story.
4890724
so yeah you could say im hapy with how my story is going
it got more favorets on the first day then my other story
4890736
thanks
4890740
Well that's good, try to keep above a thousand words with your other one.
4890742
Your welcome.
From the description:
They may sound alike, but there's a difference between "peace" and "piece".
4891031
i know its just i have dyslexia and i can get letters confused and stuff but i will change it
OMG!!
I NEED MORE!!
4890358 leave my friend alone! There is a reason why they are called summaries! Back off!
4890428 rainbow are you ok?
4891793
he was just not paying atention to detail and how amazing this story is doing
i think he is just jelus 
this story is geting more likes and favorets faster than the other one is i dont get why people dont like my other story i ges they asome its a cupcake story that involves all the gore and stuff but it doesn't 
im fine
4891793
and this is kind of ironic cus that guys pic is spiderman i just watched the 2 spider man movie it was pretty good
Damn... just.... damn.... can't say anything else
4892582
do you think its bad
4892615
Nope. You got a thumbs up from me but still, holy shit he got violent.
4892628
Oh you blue sky trust me i have something planed out for that
I love it cx one of your best
4891793 encrypted-tbn1.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQUMr2dl11Jg9bjcHNCoJkTLJhKG2pg76WchNXuyu5sEdlYmaZ-
I'll bash u head off m8!
4892086 Are you twelve? Cuz are acting like one.
4895545
leav spectrum destiny alone
FUCK YOU
4893115
thanks
4895601 just read your story and this is my review.
The grammar is horible. The pace is too fast. Sometimes on the story you give useless description of the characters or none at all. I'm not a editor or proofreader so this is all ai can say.
Also by your comment you really must be twelve. Have my dislike.
4895748
like i sead in my blog post My disorder I have dyslexia i try to write as fast as i can so i can try to make myself look less stoped
4895748
and if you have seen my other blog posts you would now that im 24 and geting married to my beautiful fiance and i am a lesbian so if you would have goten confused there is your awncer
4895748
there's a difference between being constructive and being an ass you know
There is only one complaint that I have with this chapter alone:
I'm pretty sure you can't do an ultrasound that early on into the pregnancy. The fetus (or fetuses, in this case) would be much too small to see, and not even fully formed. I'm sure it wouldn't even have legs yet. This is especially true in this case, since Rainbow could be having twins, and twins are generally born very tiny, unlike most people's presumptions that the mother would be twice the size in pregnancy. A small error, but one that annoyed me A LOT. I can't say that every word of this is gospel, since I haven't ever been pregnant, but this fetus is about A WEEK OLD. IT'S FREAKIN' TINY.
4895748
i'm not trying to get on you for giving a dislike... but you could've left it at that
"you must be twelve" really that was unnecessary
4895802
if you haddent told me i probably wouldnt have notesed thanks
i know and i meant to change that but i forgot thank you so much for pounting that out i will be sure to change it
4895788
Oh, God!!!! I'm sooooo sorry!!!! I was just giving a little criticism!! I'm so sorry I offended you!!! *drops to knees* FORGIIIIIVE MEEEEE!!!!
4895826
thats Ok its Spiderman here being mean you where giving criticism that could actually help me improve and change my mistake
by the way which chapter did you see where it said Rainbow was 1 week pregnant i cant seem to remember or find it
4895812
Damn, I replied to the wrong comment!!!
4895846
I'm not sure, I think it was the last one. Thanks for not being pissy!
4895748
Rude much? Why are people on FimFiction like this? Just messed up! Encourage them! Not HURT them.
4895622
4895846
Sorry, make that fourth. She says it's a week since she found out, and you normally find out around seven weeks after... stuff happens. Also, if your getting sick of people whining about grammar and that rubbish, I would edit for you, if you want?
4895893
and i already have an editor well two editors for this story 
thanks
4895903
Okie-dokie!
4895788 what the fuck is an awncer? Is it some type of new cancer?
4895864 I'm rude to people that are rude to me.
4895949
ANSWER its supposed to say ANSWER i told you i have dyslexia
4895966 You better have some great proofreaders then.