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MidnightShy21


If 'I love you' is a promise, would you break it if you're honest?

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Pinkie pie and rarity get send to wonderbolts headquarters to solve a friendship problem. What happens when they find out it's about Rainbow dash and Soarin? Will their friendship be gone forever? Will Pinkie pie and rarity be able to restore it?

This story is NOT a sequel to any story/stories of mine.

Request by one of my best friends who would like to stay anonymous.

If you don't like it, would you mind telling me what you don't like about it?

Warning: Contains some bad grammar.

I HATE this story. This grammar is even more cringe then my current grammar. -12-12-2017-

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 23 )

I LOVE your story book my friend, love it. :heart::heart: The friendship problem was a great idea. :raritywink: If you add it together it would be called Friendship-love problem. :twilightsmile:

thank you for writing that story, and don't forget to always respect women

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Would you mind saying the part after “that” one more time, I can't zoom in far enough to read it.

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 story, and don't forget to always respect women

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And don't forget to always....?

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It says thank you for writing that story, and don't forget to always respect woman

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Oh thank you:twilightsmile:


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Yes that is true, I'm sorry I couldn't read it before.

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No problem BTW loves the story you should make more

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Awwh, thank you so much:heart:

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Are you serious?! Thank you so much!:heart:

I loved it!! It was a really good story

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Thank you! I personally hate it:twilightblush:

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What its a good story line though

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OMG THANK YOU❤❤❤❤
But of coarse you can write a story like this! Everything you write is amazing!!!

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Yas it is❤❤❤💕💕

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❤❤😍💕❤💕

I love it!! :duck:

Mach bitte eine fortsetzung bitte😊:pinkiehappy:

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Ich bin mir nicht sicher, wirklich. Ich könnte. Ich werde Sie auf dem Laufenden halten und Ihnen sagen, ob ich eine Fortsetzung mache. :))

I like this story! Though from the premise, I expected more! What if their developing feelings for eachother were sabotaging their friendship and they all were frustered around eachother and then romance drama (but no love triangles okay) and then the two realize they are in love with eachother and Rainbow Dash blushes at Soarin and Soarin still thinks of her platonically and then he realizes as well he likes her as more than a friend and Pinkie and Rarity would smirk at eachother, saying this was a VERY interesting "friendship trouble". Hahah more like romance trouble!!! Hhaha. Remember the episode "The end in friend"? It could be like that!!!

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