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CeasarTwain31


"If you have an idea, that you genuinely think is good, don't let some idiot talk you out of it." -Stan Lee

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In an alternate Equestria, The Wonderbolts and The Shadowbolts are two organized groups that began as friends, but over the years, a feud between them has grown into a nearly all-out war between them. But when one of the sons of the Shadowbolts leader, Soarin, falls in love with a Wonderbolt, Rainbow Dash, the feud is challenged, and leads to even further conflict. Will the feud be put to rest, or will the lovers face the same fate as another famous tragic couple?

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Comments ( 36 )

So basically the plot of Romeo and Juliet

I looooove it :)

OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOH!
Things are getting gooooooood! Imma grab my popcorm! *grab it*🍿

I'm exicited what is going next!:pinkiehappy:

OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOH-

I see where is going now 👀

"He looks familiar, who do you think he is?" Fluttershy asked. Blaze shrugged.

"Probably a stallion who's a billion times better than Fire Streak." Blaze said looking over at the Streak twins, who looked very angry.

Yeah, hahahahaa I agree with Blaze here he us better then the Streak Twins, plus they are horrible at flirting with Rainbow and Blaze. And this is getting good between Rainbow and Soarin (even though they don't know they are different Bolt teams or they're faces....yet😏😋) loving it, and ready to see the big BANG💥 that will happen at the party if the Shadowbolts get cote. And see what happens between Rainbow Dash and Soarin Skies.

Uh-oh:fluttercry: I sense trouble conning form the Streak twins, and this is not good, if her family finds out she'll get in Bbiiiiiiiiigggggg trouble! :twilightoops: but her friend Blaze does make a good point of advice, do what makes her happiest, and choosing between the Wonderbolts and Soarin is a tuff one, something she doesn't want to do. But I do not like them Streak Brothers, they are SOOOOO in for it now.:twilightangry2: and they're. Going. To. GET FLANK BUTTED!!!:flutterrage: ( what do you think of my Fluttershy scream neat huh?)

Im loving it alot my friend awesome job on this, hay i bet something might spicy things up a bit between Soarin and Rainbow Dash.:ajsmug: also what is this kind of disease sexually transmitted disease that makes them sick?
Anyways lots of awesome good luck to you my friend.:heart::pinkiehappy::raritywink::rainbowdetermined2::twilightsmile:

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Thanks for the support! About the disease, I left it Ambiguous, but I will say that the idea was that she died due to HIV/AIDS, or whatever an Equestrian equivalent would be.

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Oh I see, so that's what it was, thanks for the answer, and your welcome.:twilightsmile:

Oooohhhh I bet it's going to be bbiiiiiggggg!!! (:twilightangry2: that Lightning Steak is SOOOOO going to PAY for this!!) and this is just THE! WORST! POSIBLE! THING!!!:raritycry: (with do you think of my Rarity panic attack?:trixieshiftright:) what will they do now, will they give up, or will they run away, or....will, they, find a way to make things right?

Let find out and see my friend. Lest see.:ajsmug:

Why make the leader of the Shadowbolts Soarin? Why not make it one of these guys?

When is the next chapter coming out?

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Hopefully July 1st, I've been busy with both my real life job and my 2 other stories. Word of the wise, never work on multiple stories simultaneously, I've learned the hard way. Thank you for reading!

When is the next chapter coming out

Comment posted by CeasarTwain31 deleted Nov 20th, 2019

Why didn't you respond to my comment?

Oh no!!! How will Rainbow and Blaze even get out of escape and get to Soarin, will Dash Soarin and they're friends run away, will they try and stop the war and come to terms, will the princesses stop the war, HOW WILL THE WAR BETWEEN SHADOW AND WONDER BOLTS EVEN COME TO ENDS?!?! :twilightoops::pinkiegasp::fluttershysad:

This is SOOOOO epic, so romantic, so dangerous, so sad and happy, so tragic, I love it so much I could just read it more and more!!!:pinkiehappy::heart::heart: Keep this up and we will see how this sweet and tragic story comes soon my friend.:rainbowdetermined2::raritywink: Lost of awesome good luck to you my friend.:raritywink::rainbowdetermined2::pinkiehappy:

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Sorry if I didn't, though I did see it, and thank you.

When will the next chapter coming out

this story keeps on getting interesting

Romeo and Juliet stuff is about to go down.

Didn't you mean Jocks for the Wonderbolts?

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eh, Kinda.
Have you ever read the book The Outsiders? Or seen the Movie?

I've got a bad feeling about this. Other than Lightning, what if Thunderlane was also watching?
Also Rumbloo.

Finally, following behind them all was the only mare among them, with a purple coat and pink and white mane.

"Starry Skies."

Wait...is that Soarin's mom?

This looks to be a good action/drama/romance driven story. :pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by Ccleecia deleted Jan 8th, 2022

Well it is like you said only time will tell when it might or will happen soon. And i hope this whole blood feud ends someday soon, Rumble would make a good captain one day too, one day they'll see eachother again and hope for the good of equestrian as wel. Can't wait to read more new story's soon. And I loved this story ALOT.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💝💝💝💝💝💝💝

Lots of good luck to you my friend, :twilightsmile: and stay Awesome. Seya.:raritywink::rainbowdetermined2:

Then, the straw that broke the camels back, was when Swift Shadow set up a meeting with Sun Spot to possibly end their conflict. But, it was a trap, and Swift Shadow killed Sun Spot, stabbing him 28 times with a switchblade.

https://youtu.be/iS_Afdh84h0

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