Secrets Hidden and Told

Rainbow Dash has been hiding a big secret from her non-biological sister and is scared to tell her the truth. Will their relationship stay the same? Also, will the ruler of the pegasi/ queen of Cloudsdale return and reclaim her spot on her throne? In addition to that, who is that queen?

Chapters (7)

Chapter 1: The Start Of A Search · 5th Jul 2020 · 307 words
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Chapter 2: A Talk With Rainbow · 5th Jul 2020 · 471 words
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Chapter 3: Fear · 23rd Jul 2020 · 994 words
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Chapter 4: A Mother and Daughter Reunion · 25th Jul 2020 · 1,806 words
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Chapter 5: Cloudsdale Part 1: The Castle · 30th Jul 2020 · 826 words
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Chapter 6: Cloudsdale Part 2: A Talk With The Wonderbolts and A Surprise From Friends · 13th Aug 2020 · 2,239 words
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Chapter 7: Cloudsdale Part 3: Morning Sickness and An Interesting Visit From Friends And The Princesses · 27th Aug 2020 · 1,529 words
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Sudrian Engineer

Sudrian Engineer #1 · Jul 25th, 2020 · 3 · 1 · Chapter 4: A Mother and Daughter Reunion ·

I have... MANY questions...

Don't get me wrong, it is a good story, but... confusing

Zigrth

Zigrth #2 · Jul 25th, 2020 · · 1 · Chapter 4: A Mother and Daughter Reunion ·

I hop you continue with this story

Zigrth

Zigrth #3 · Jul 27th, 2020 · · 1 · Chapter 4: A Mother and Daughter Reunion ·

When will the next chapter come out

My Rainbow Dash

My Rainbow Dash #4 · Aug 13th, 2020 · · · Chapter 6: Cloudsdale Part 2: A Talk With The Wonderbolts and A Surprise From Friends ·

Chapter 6 is out. No worries. More is coming.

My Rainbow Dash

My Rainbow Dash #5 · Aug 13th, 2020 · · · Chapter 6: Cloudsdale Part 2: A Talk With The Wonderbolts and A Surprise From Friends ·

I have time for questions.

THERDSTORYWHISPERER

THERDSTORYWHISPERER #6 · Aug 14th, 2020 · · · Chapter 6: Cloudsdale Part 2: A Talk With The Wonderbolts and A Surprise From Friends ·

Great story so far!

Is Rainbow going to tell her Scootaloo about her father? Are we going to find out who Scootaloo’s father is as well the father of Rainbow’s upcoming foals?

Are going to see the rest of the Princesses soon?

THERDSTORYWHISPERER

THERDSTORYWHISPERER #7 · Aug 27th, 2020 · · · Chapter 7: Cloudsdale Part 3: Morning Sickness and An Interesting Visit From Friends And The Princesses ·

Great chapter!

Dis Celestia and Luna healed Luna or no?

My Rainbow Dash

My Rainbow Dash #8 · Aug 29th, 2020 · · · Chapter 7: Cloudsdale Part 3: Morning Sickness and An Interesting Visit From Friends And The Princesses ·

No. She just needed rest. That’s what everyone needs when they’re sick.

KittyrinnAiko

KittyrinnAiko #9 · Sep 1st, 2020 · · · Chapter 7: Cloudsdale Part 3: Morning Sickness and An Interesting Visit From Friends And The Princesses ·

The rape thing just suddenly popping up was kind of pointless. Also - tag the story if your going to include it.

My Rainbow Dash

My Rainbow Dash #10 · Oct 11th, 2020 · · · Chapter 7: Cloudsdale Part 3: Morning Sickness and An Interesting Visit From Friends And The Princesses ·

This is like my second story so seriously, relax. My mind is already exploding because I’m writing two stories at once. I shouldn’t really be doing that.

LightningChaser04