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“Excuse me, sir, but you wouldn’t happen to be the Anomaly, would ya?” he asked.
“Maybe,” I said slowly. “Who’s asking?”
Reaching up, he tipped his cap to me. “I’m First Lieutenant Cloud Stacker, sir. And congratulations on the new foal."
"Huh?"
I'm drawing a blank on how many...Corps? of guards there are, and if the battlemages were the only Corp that Discord co-opted. So I find myself a bit curious why guards met Max, and what sort of backlash their failure in the Canterlot Kerfuffle might have had in the intervening weeks/month.
I do remember that Max's guard quit their posts to transfer to Max's guard proper now that he's a...noble? Twilight's Fuckboi? Father?
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More of this, please. More chapters outside of Max to focus on the changing social dynamic.
Well, he stepped out of line of sight of his so-called guards for more than five seconds. Now the inevitable trouble befalls.
At least Maxs arm didnt turn a strange colour as it emptied of blood.
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Or the blood turning a strange colour in the vial.
Gotta check on poor Sunny!
Just give em time.
So do sanguinarians I hear.
Damn it, Luna, you can't just force patients to take medicine without consent! Patients have rights!
9953086 You make a good point, but that's also why I'm taking this story slow and writing 2k chapters instead of 12k. So that the chapters aren't years apart. And the standing plot points were resolved in Your Human and You; maybe not to your standards or to a "100% complete" standard, but they were resolved to an extent. Nothing is ever 100% fixed, so nothing is going to be resolved completely. And you are correct; they were written kind of quickly, but that was because there was nothing really more to do in Your Human and You and I didn't feel like dragging the story on longer than it already had. As for the impact of the ending; if you don't like how it turned out, there is very little to nothing I can do about that. The ending is as it is—how I wanted it to be.
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LOL! Hot damn you're right! I've been spending too much time in the land of greens lately.
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I do fine good sir, and you?
As always this was a great chapter! I really enjoyed the world building around the changing social dynamic and would love to see more chapters dedicated to it in the future! The plot of the original story may have concluded but now we’ve got all the great social aspects to read about.
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That’s exactly what I thought! The world building is one of the many things that I live about YHaY.
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I agree with this to a certain degree but I was lucky enough to find this story a couple of months before the final chapter was published! The ending did feel rushed but if the way it ended was how the author intended then we’ve got to respect them for that. Even if the ending did feel rushed we can still appreciate that MadMaxtheBlack did finish the story which is more than can be said for a great deal of other fanfics.
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Sunny, or perhaps Defender. He always seemed to be somewhat unique when it came to the humans we've seen in Equestria.
This was a good chapter. I can't wait for the next one
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Finally caught up. Good stuff as always. Looking forward to this coming reunion. It think it's been a little while since they've seen each other.
Hey Stacker returns! Wonder what he been upto since his ordeal in YHAY.
I don't have a problem with needles, most of the time. In fact, I'm one of those people who watches the stick. Every time. Well, almost every time. There is one exception, and that's when I get my Mediport accessed. Awkward, slightly-pain-in-the-neck angle aside, I have no interest in watching someone shove a 3/4-inch piece of curved steel into my chest.
You read that right. A mediport access needle is not straight, like an IV. If you don't believe me, you can try looking it up, though I don't know where, and I'm too lazy to look for myself. So long as you're not squeamish.
Nice to see Max no longer get from one 'almost killed to almost not survived' event.
Yes! Sunny would be happy to meet Max again. Dont think Max knows her situation
I wonder how long is Twilight pregnant yet?
Celestia & Max still dont know
Wonder if Lyra ever got Bon Bon back...
How is Applejacks farm running? Breeding humans must be a lot more complicated this days...
Wonder if Mac Griffon still studies the terran makeshift armor. Hope the Lings a perfectly feed...
What happend to Twilights stalker? Is he still in the dungeon?
Incoming very sad chapter