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I wonder if it'll be a girl or a boy. For that matter, a pony, a human, or a centaur?
Yes I love this story keep going
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Maybe a pony version of a Satyr
hopefully with a pony like bottom
Woo your still writing.
Tough night for both.
Great story about the pranking.
Love seeing this again. Great chapter and adding some suspense for me making me really want to read the next chapte.
I can't blame him for freaking out. While he's still dealing with the trauma of everything's he's gone through and struggling with alcoholism, he finds out that the mare he loves is multiple months pregnant. I understand it from both of their perspectives and they both have been kinda dumb.
D'AWWS
Max is a better person than most people I know. I know far to many that would immediately jump to cheating... But I guess with they current way of things, such conclusions are inevitable.
He will be a good father, if his behaviour from the previous story is any indication.
not the panic reason I expected, but max has once again proven himself to be a strong individual, except giving himself credit where it's due
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haven't seen really any fics explore the centaur side of things, would love to see it, max would probably be the one who could pull it off.
So like....he noticed that she was getting plumpier and Max being a bro and a good boyfriend/husband didnt mention it cuz she still loves Twilight even if she's fat and mentioning her big belly could've killed him hahaha
He's a very cool dude, I'm sure both of them will figure it out how to be parents
Welp. Cadence was wrong about one thing.
This... was Twilight's fault.
Not the fact that it's a forbidden union or anything, but because she had been lying by omission about what was going on with her.
Unfortunately, with the way Cadence was trying to talk down Max (Twilight wasn't unfaithful/Twilight didn't do anything wrong) I doubt she will make that connection fast enough to prevent another argument.
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Twilight was probably just being Twilight, and tried to prolong the inevitable until she acquired either enough information or courage to tell Max... I can only empathise with the poor filly as I'm just as prone to freeze by overthinking.
Now I wonder how everyone else will react? This is going to be big news.
Aw this was a great chapter!
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So am I, unfortunately, with the overthinking.
Equally unfortunate, I dislike dishonesty, especially when it's about health. This might be the physical therapist in me, but... lying about personal health is dangerous, you know?
There are few things that aggravate me more than someone pretending everything is perfectly fine until after the situation has reached critical mass...
Max is no less guilty of this, too; I'm not discounting his own problems.
I dunno, maybe it's because Max has been getting his licks about his own bad choices and Twilight has been getting away with her own that is making me more inclined to be irritated with her.
Ohh… wow. Blindsided like that ya id panic too.
Right, it's been so long I forgot he has PTSD. His freakout makes sense. I'm glad he didn't even consider the idea that Twilight was unfaithful. That's a bit of drama I wasn't interested in seeing.
Oh, how I missed this....
Heh, there’s a blast from the past. Had to read back a bit to refresh my memory but the story is still compelling. Thanks for coming back to it!
I will say, I had pretty much the same reaction as Max did when my child was born. It's pretty heavy...
Now let's see how Twi reacts
I Fukin Love it so far! I miss the longer chapters though.😁
So is this were anthro ponys come from?Is this the beginning of a New Would and the end of the old world? Hahaha hahaha hahaha hahaha hahaha hahaha ~~~~~!
Brief, but focused. This is the first of what I presume to be many parental freakouts. I look forward to Twilight being more open with her animalistic hormonal behaviors as our favorite one-eyed idiot grows increasingly comfortable with the idea, until he starts teasing her for it. And oh, how will her friends take the news? Also, because everyone here is kind of an idiot, how long before someone takes the time to really think about Twilight giving birth to a new draconequis?
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I'm sure that's exactly what's going on. However, this is a HUGE failing of Twilight's. She did the same thing when it came to telling Max how she felt. I really wonder how many times she has to be 'punished' for this behavior for her to correct it herself. Because this? This wasn't even her telling Max...not really. This was really Cadence letting it slip.
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Perfectly valid reasoning. I agree with you completely. But I'm unfortunately the type of person that look at all the viewpoints as much as possible... Which is why I can't just stay upset at Sparkle-Butt.
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I fully agree. Twilight needs to work on that 'little' problem of hers. But, unfortunately for the poor filly, just correcting this herself isn't going to be enough. She may need ACTUAL help with this, before she does something she will REALLY regret.
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Until she suddenly tells him what's going on immediately after it happens, even to the point of being awkward and uncomfortable.
The fact that Max didn't think for a second that Twilight was unfaithful (because you don't see human/pony hybrids walking around everywhere) is incredibly naive and Cadence saying that she's been faithful is irrelevant because you know who's the last people to tell you that your girlfriend is cheating on you is her chick friends. This also isn't going over the fact that their kid will be treated a little better the a second class citizen when they see who the father is. Remember even when the main 5 found out that Max was intelligent they still treated him a little better then a pet, so how do you expect "normal" ponies to treat a human/pony hybrid.
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This is all assuming that the foal will be a visible hybrid (a centaur or a faun/pan type) and not just a full blown pony.
And the main reason (in my eyes at least), why the other of the mane 5 treated him like a eq-human for the first several chapters, is because they lived their whole lives treating humans like that. You cannot change your behaviour in such a short span of time by interacting with only one individual.
Dolphins are among the most intelligent animals on our planet, yet I don't see humans treating them as anything other than a passing interest you normally give a animal in the first place.
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I do not think you have need to worry, if Celestia was willing to send the earth humans to likely doom to protect her vision of Equestria then she will have no problem making certain that the baby will be compliant with the said vision.
Finally someone who does Cadence’s character well. Not even the show did her correctly.
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Both groups got dropped off near civilization. They're fine.
Damn, this is good stuff. I loooove this series!
Well that was a fun read.
Would you look at that it’s alive!
I'm kinda frustrated with Cadance here. She saw him suffering, and looked at it through the lens of "how this affects Twilight". I mean, she came around when he explicitly spelled it out for her, but I thought that his self-loathing was pretty blatantly apparent.
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I suspect it'll be a unicorn foal, probably an alicorn. Hybrids are excruciatingly rare, although once started, they tend to be self-propagating (kyrin, griffin, etc). This is based on the assumption alicorn DNA is dominant over all other forms.
Pretty sure once the news gets out, mom will swoop down from Canterlot along with the Princesses because, you know, grandfoals...
Should be bend
I'm in this chapter and I don't like it.
Just keeps reminding me a bit of this
Now they have 'the talk'. Funny how many 'the talk' is actually covering...
God damn man, hard hitting this one. Depression comes in waves and sometimes shines brightest in moments like this.