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Nice, really digging a lot of the pieces in this.
The crystal castle cannot come soon enough for Max and Twilight. Plus I cannot wait to see all the snarking Max is going to get in when he sees it.
So humans and ponies can understand the same language now? I'm not sure if it was ever made clear when that happened.
Max cozy.
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It was, multiple times in fact
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Harmony spirit fixed the humans so they can talk
Yup, just like children
9842054 They can kind of understand each other. tl;dr version is: the magic that helps them understand each other is relatively new, so it's still learning. They can understand certain words and phrases, but most of the time it's guesswork. Think of it like going to a foreign country and only knowing like 100 words total out of their language. You could piece together what's being said, but the general conversation would be lost on you.
If only he knew...
I like how every time its updated its immediately put on the featured list.
Yay, always happy with these!
And yes Max, almost like foals. Don't you wonder how that is?
Interesting tip I'll relay it to my brother to use for kids
Up until this chapter I had figured that Twilight had already told him. That she hasn't yet is rather surprising. Won't that just be a bombshell. Pinkie will probably have a spontaneous baby shower for Twilight and that is how Max will learn.
When I saw the title of this chapter, all I could think of was Max grinning from ear to ear, and randomly singing "Bohemian Rhapsody" by Queen in the middle of the Ponyville town square while other ponies look on with expressions of "What the %#@$ has he been smoking?" on their faces.
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Same here
For some reason I really liked this. It was quite heartwarming when I read it.
Probably 'cause I like Twilight and I'm imprinting a bit.
Thunderbolt and Lightning
Very very frightning me!
Also, magic taste like cotton candy AND metal?
So, how much roentgen is Max getting?
Here we go! Up to date now. Just finished rereading your human and you. Now I remember everything I had forgotten.
I can remember being frightened of thunder and lightning as a child but it was around the pre-teen years that I finally got fed up with it all and started getting angry back at the storm, taunting it, "Is that all you've got?!" Daring it to be louder and so forth. After that I wasn't scared, just annoyed at the noisy storms when they came back and kept me awake. (A second pillow put over my head helped too)
It'd be a fun silly chapter if he could get both Spike and Pyresteed to get angry/annoyed at the storm rather than scared. A bit like Giggle At The Ghosties... only with a human twist. (Raaar! Yes, that's it Pyre, you tell that thunder you're not scared of it)
9843260And not just singing it, but singing it loudly.
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Not sure why you were surprised, as Twilight has a history of not telling Max important things of this magnitude. She didn’t let him know she was in love with him until after she tried to bang him when she went into heat.
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That's what happens after you've been featured for the first time. The bottom three slots are for previously featured fics that have just been updated.
Who want to take bets on if he find out on the day of the baby birth
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"I'm having your child" kind of on a whole nother scale of "this is important"...
... Twilight hasn't told anyone who doesn't already know that she's pregnant, has she? Even though this is kind of an important thing she really should be sharing, especially with Max of all people?
*sigh* Well, Mr. Bones, it looks like you were right. The ride never ends.
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well yeah, i know that, but it doesn't automatically put it there, it has to have a certain amount of people reading the new chapter in order for it to be featured again. if it was like that, the bottom three would change every like, millisecond or something. I'm pointing out how good the story is by stating that EVERY update it has, its put straight onto the featured for the bottom three.
Been raining a lot recently for you Max?
And here i thought i was the only one who was pone yet acted cat! ... I'm probably safe from my lifemate finding this out. He will very much use it to validate that he's right about me being an arfing kittypone.
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Well, it was several times made clear that it's gradually happening and we can expect it to continue improving.
OH MY GOD SHE HASN'T FUCKING TOLD HIM
YOU ABSOLUTE MONSTER MANIAC MADLAD HOW COULD YOU
...Dis gun b gud.
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I'm happy to see that the Equestrian Humans are continuing to grow. I wonder though if Max has explained their true origins to anyone yet. I'd imagine he'd have told Twi & Lyra at the very least. Twi really needs to mare up and tell Max the good news. It's going to be a shock and I hope he takes it well. I'm sure he will. Thanks for the update. I look forward to reading the next one.
Max is going to lose his damn mind. And then immediately cover up his anxiety with MASS amounts of snark.
the book with flurry heart on the cover has a interesting title on it
stayclassy
Twilight.... seriously you need to hurry up and tell him. Before he finds out on his own. Because it could actually be the straw that breaks the humans back.
Regarding the baby, it's basically a given at this point that it'll be a draconequis as that just seems the inevitable reaction of Equestria harmony magic and Earth chaos magic. While the baby will most certainly be loved regardless, I'm reminded of the series Charmed. There they had a baby who was so powerful that he caused an awful lot of problems. Powerful children in general are a hassle once they figure out that they're strong enough to defy their parents before being taught proper discipline. It's like how Bright Burn, despite being bad, is technically a more realistic portrayal of how a kid with Superman's powers would interact with the world. Back to the charmed comparison, there was a lot of talk about sealing away the baby's powers until he was old enough to use them responsibly. Any chance of something similar happening here? Because Twilight really needs to start making the preparations.
Daww I love it, very cute
So I take it Twilight hasn't told Max about the Healer saying that she's pregnant? Why does she have to do this to herself? So what is she going to wait until she is showing to tell him?
Twilight Jane Sparkle! Have you not told Max that you're preggers yet?! Oh, this is going to end so, so horribly...
Damn... She still didnt tell him or Celestia? Cadance will be angry... Her mother dissapointed
Nice chapter. Love your wholesome stuff
They need a bigger Bed. Also a foal bed... Canterlot would be better and safer to raise a Alicorns foal...
Perhaps its time to upgrade Ponyville hard in defensive buildings and guard details...
Hm... If by any chance Max and Pyresteed had a child... Would it be a clone of Max? I mean Harmony basicly copy & paste his DNA into every Equestrian Human.
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Especially since we know Canterlot will rise a Circus ones they know a human banged and fertilized a Alicorn ( god / demigod ).
Did Luna & Celestia ever had foals?!
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So many hidden pieces. Replaying it ones is by far not enough.
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Since the Elements of Harmony are the CHILDREN of the Tree of Harmony... What is the Castle of Harmony ?!?!
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It was. Harmony had a conversation with Max.Basicly:
Max DNA POTENCIAL get copied into all Equestrian Humans ( immun system, life span, mental development etc.) So far only there minds get upgrades. In 3-5 generations there body get to Max levels.
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Max is most cuddly human
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Simply yet genius. If it works? Dont change it
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O fuck me... Its 1 foal not 2... Or ?!
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Knowing Max luck i think some nobel will attack Max out of spite to have impregnated basucly a demigod...
Perhaps hire a Griffon to hide it...
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Every snuggel/cuddle and pet chapter is extra awesome ♡
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Knowing Twilight? Probably someone put her in danger and she tells Max she cant get hit / hurt or...
Someone needs to help Twilight & Max to get ready...