Ah, that is something they never tell you about when owning a human, the crunch crunch, the thing that will horrify all mortal beings.

Damnit, Pyresteed. Someone get the stomach pump! No, not that one, the bigger one!

Psyched to see the update! It's good seeing Max and Co again.

Lmfao

Damn it, Pyresteed.

Good to see an update to this! Hope we don't have to wait too long till the next one.

11305765 Yes.

Damn nearly forgot about this one, glad to see a new chapter!

Finaly a Update
More humor
More hope for future chapters
Waiting again for a new glorious chapter...

“Let’s see here…” I muttered, fingers dancing across the book spines. “Ah, good. There’s one. And here. And… yup, there’s one too. Excellent.” One by one, I pulled the books free, the stack in my arms growing with each new addition. Despite being scattered about the library, they all had the same theme. I read each title out loud as I grabbed them. “ Expecting a Filly? That might be useful… maybe. One in the Oven , yeah gonna need that one. Big Book of Baby Biology and Basic Birthing . Check. An Egghead’s Guide to Pregnancy … yeah, that one too. Mothering is Loving Foals . A little weird, but eh… what the hell. Mommy’s Little Mistake? ” I paused, staring down at the book in my head, the cover of which depicted a confused-looking pink unicorn foal with a curly purple-and-cyan mane. After a moment, I shrugged. “Eh, couldn’t hurt.” And it joined the pile

. At the end is missing.

Yay, update!

I wanna see what Twilight and Max's foal looks like.

Will she be quadrupedal or bipedal?

Which traits will be dominant, human or pony?

Will it have the large Equestrian pony eyes or will it have the small Earth human eyes?

They were all spread out around the sitting area because Twilight and Cadance had gossiped and pursued her album until the wee hours of the morning.

Should be perused.
Looking forward to reading more - I wasn't expecting to fall in love with this series, but I have.

Whistling a happy tune to myself, I picked up where I left off with the hearth. At least, until I heard something disturbing coming from the book return box. Slowly, I turned my head to stare at Pyresteed’s bouncing posterior. “Are… are you eating something in there?”

Man Twilight's going to be pissed.

It lives

Insert I'm in danger meme here

Glad to see you update again keep it up man

“Alpha, mount? Mount rump?”

I wonder if he’ll ever take Pyresteed up on that offer I’m pretty sure twilight wouldn’t mind

FEED ME SEMOR FEED MEEE! MORE PLEASE?

Woooo! New Chapter!
Going to have to re-read from the start to remind myself what was happening!

11313000
Probably not anytime soon.

Ah good to see you back. Keep up the good work mate

Now that's a proper nest, by the way I love Mommy’s Little Mistake

Looool Pyrasteed is a mess!

So glad this updated, even if in doing so you've only stoked the fire for more chapters

Sooo…it Pyresteed gonna have Max’s baby too one day or what?

Ah, excellent, pyresteed is going to vomit all over the freshly cleaned floor

Step-bro… help!

EEEEEEEEEE!!!!!! The Nesting scene in the past 2 chapters has gotta be my, hands down, most favorite part of these books. Absolutely adorable!!! What a way to break the news too. I was desperately hoping that Max wasn't gonna disassemble the nest and I'm elated that he decided to help add to it instead.

Max becoming more sensitive and caring with time is an amazing character development. I really like the person Max is turning into. You can see him grow up quite a bit through the series

Thanks for this update Max, your many hours of fingers clacking away at the keys don't go unappreciated!

11313465
I hope not, monogamous max is best max

11312673
I honestly hope it's almost entirely fully a pony. But then again I hold out hope that max will eventually turn into a pony too so I'm a bit biased
(Consolidated my 2 other comments into this one because I didn't realize deleting my other ones would leave a big yellow ugly banner :| )

11314471
As someone that hates with a passion when the human MC gets turned into a pony for anything other than a temporary plot point here's hoping on my end that Max stays human. I read HiE for the "H" in the "E", every time they turn them pony it completely kills it for me.

11314706
Completely valid viewpoint, thanks for sharing it!

A cheerful well placed change of pace from the last one.

11312440
Nah, activated charcoal will probably be enough, no need to get forceful about this.

Alpha's casual dismissal of Pyresteed's plight, and especially borrowing her butt, was hilarious and cute.

Pyresteed had somehow, through some unknown means, gotten herself stuck in the book return box. Her entire upper half was cramped in the box’s slot up to her waist. Which didn’t physically make any sense. The slot was smaller than both her head and breast, but somehow she had managed to squeeze herself in up to her stomach, the narrow opening squishing her chub. Only her butt and legs were free, her shirt pulled down to expose herself to the open air. She kicked her legs frantically, all while whining. “Alpha! Alpha, help! Stuck! Stuck, Alpha, stuck! Help!”

She can lift a heavy ass couch like a plushy... I guess as long she don't cut herself, she can basicly bend the return box in shape to fit in...
Equestrian Human can dig trough earth and stone so I guess metal is possible since its only refined earth?

Pyresteed is great