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I have to say, I love how you're using the first story is his report/memoirs. It's not something I've seen done very often without the sequel also being another volume. I also absolutely love Twi's and Maxes dynamic its absolutely adorkable! Keep it up!!
Max you cheeky b@$+@&€, you just did an epic prank on Twilight. I wonder what Celestia and Luna would think about it and which one would try and pull it on the other first.
Mea culpa, Twilight. Mea culpa.
He doesn’t even need to inherit any discordian powers; he’s ALREADY a god of chaos!
This is such a perfect candy-coated chapter. No Great Deeds, not even great literature, just a fun little slice of life at home with the characters we already know and love. It brightened my day, so thanks!
I love their chemistry, they are perfect for eachother. I can't to see Max's reaction when Twilight reveals that he's gonna be a father. Hell, I can't wait to see Celestia's.
I want to use that prank at some point.
Oh that’s priceless, though I wander how much toothpaste it took.
I love the interactions between Max and Twilight, keep up the good work.
...a tube of popcorn...
I'm an avid popcorn fan....and tubes of popcorn don't do it for me. I don't care what porn i'm watching
oh boy nice work, that prank xD
and she should rather talk to the resident vamp pony about the blood bag xD
i wonder how twilight would react to that part in the report by proofreading it
... it's actually rather easy to get toothpaste into the tube... if you know how.
You just couldn't pass up another opportunity to talk about writing the last book, could you?
Somehow this managed to avoid being put on my fav/YHaY lists. I just thought Max was taking his time with the chapters. But no, here he was, cranking out the chapters, AND I MISSED IT! Oh well. Of course, now I've lost a few hours of sleep binging everything. I feel like yelling at Max about it, but that's just punishing someone for doing a good job, and I'm not a corporate manager. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the great work. Deus tecum.
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Suddenly, porn.
Ah, don't call Twilight a bitch! I have to defend her on principle, and I don't have the brainpower right now!
Twilight is a wonderful mare bla bla bla you shouldn't call her such things babble babble babble you should be better than that nitwit blubber oddment tweak I know you don't mean it why am I even doing this randomword randomword randomword.
The Meta complaints from Max are pretty entertaining, and that definitely wasn't tears on that book... Bleh...
Also...I thought he would have PTSD'd over being silenced forcibly, again.
I love their back and forth.
I missed reading this keep going and get the groove on
That trolling, right there? That's true love. Let's hope Twiggles knows how to recognize that
This guy is a comedic genius
You know...I’m kinda wondering why Max doesn’t go out yet from the library.....nah, the dude’s probably lazy
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I think that would earn him an honorary rank of Royal Prankster with the added benefit/hazard of becoming a legitimate pankable target.
(Secretly wishing he catches Celestia trying to sneak in the house and refill supposedly endless products)
*you're
Also I'm sensing some projection from Max's spiel about only being able to write when in the mood... Haha, I'm the same way. Just wish I'd been in the mood at all for the past couple years...
Oh, yes, I couldn’t stop laughing my ass off. Keep up the good work, man.
She's gone mad with power! Someone really ought to overthrow this brutal tyrant before things get worse.
Me thinks a better name is called for, something that encapsulates the absolute cluster eff that was a seemingly mindless species rising in revolt while a flipping kiju ran amok.
I actually get the mood thing. While I have a means to work around it, there are mornings I wake up and go "Yeah. I think I can break 7,000 words today."
Soooo. Max doesnt know about the bun in twilights oven right?
9830519 Well, when each chapter is 2k instead of 13k words in length, it's rather easy to keep to a regular update schedule.
9830660 That's a good idea, but he was never traumatized by being mute; just inconvenienced. Plus, it probably helps that Twilight is the one doing it.
9831685 Nope
You know I realize now that if the humans from Earth ever found a way back to Equestria, i'm pretty sure Max would be quite the criminal, if any of the people survived, and especially if his ex survived. Justified or not Max's "im choosing the colored tiny horses over my own species" would do him no favors in an American Court., especially since he's not there and they can exaggerate all they want.
And if Celestia was to keep him from being tried that would most certainly spoil inter dimensional relations quite a bit. Imagine if the first time you had official contact with a new country they forbid extradition of like the one guy you wanted.
I hope you write about Celestia asking Vinyl about Riddick.
i love this story so much can't wait for the next chapter
I love the dialog and the back and forth you manage to write in with the characters. It really gives them a personality. Really makes it hard not to love them, too.
I love it, please give me M O A R
Just finished reading the last series up to chapter 69 and I have a question. Will we get clarification on Megan Williams in this series?
9840135 Possibly. I've given a few clues as to impact she'll have/had, but we'll just have to wait and see.
Slice of Life content and silly married (or close enough) couple interactions. I love it!
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Absolute mad lad
“How many have you written?”
“Oh you know, just...uh, a couple of hundred of them.”
“Couple of what of them?”
“Couple of hundred of them.”
“Wat?”
“C O U P L E OF H U N D R E D O F T H E M!”
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Name one crime he committed in AMERICAN jurisdiction. Any of his potential 'crimes' would be in Equestria, it would be up to them to prosecute.
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Ah yes, a fellow man of culture, how do you do?
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Jurisdictional dispute is precisely where extradition agreements come into play.
Ph, oh shit this is hilarious!
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That's not how extradition works. Extradition is when one county asks permission of another (usually the one whom the accused is a citizen of) for the right to try them in their courts - i.e. where the crime took place. If the country agrees, then they will be sent - extradited - to the country requesting the extradition. As an American citizen, I do not have to fear breaking (for example) European Union law, while in my home country, because I am not under their jurisdiction.
E.g. Max is safe, so long as Celestia doesn't feel like pressing charges.
I see you you sly little whovian;)
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Pretty sure that's a reference to The Time Traveler's Wife. It's a book from, like, 2003. Cheesy romance. It's an okay story.
Hahaha! Poor Twilight
This made me chuckle openly, thank you
I love Max Smartass & Jackass moments
I would totaly have had a dairy made ones the smart human thing was out.
Only problem is to hide it so Purple Smart dont get it in her hooves...
Experiment of the best kind
HA-HAAA! I LOVE Max toothpaste prank
Tomatoes hmmm...
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Thats when the great prank war started
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Never a dull day
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Damn... Something new learned
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The Toothpaste company was like: "Is Princess Twilight Sparkle trolling us?"
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The humor is the best part of the sequel
Rainbowdash is probably bored because his wounds prevent Pony Wrestling.
Spike most be bussy cleaning up after Max
What is Max dreamguard doing i wonder...
I love how this implies Max actually wrote the first "Your Human And You" story, really clever.
In a world of magic this prank is simply genius...
Because there is probably a magic way to do it...