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Nice first chapter!
Huh, so a super-slow poison in the detergent so that it isn't all that worrisome that it actually causes them to panic...or she's just done this so many times that they know there's no need to rush if they catch it this quickly?
I take it Max still doesn't know about Twilight's "condition"
... Wut?
Are Max and Twilight going to have super sexy funtimes soon?
I can't quite remember who the girl is, but hilarious nonetheless. Alpha made me crack badly
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I believe she's one of the first equestrian humans to attach herself to Max in Canterlot, and ended up showing back up to their home at the end of the last story.
MOARRRRRRRRRRRR
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she just ate proto-tide pods my dude.
its a bit past that.
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I learned about a birthday cake flavored energy drink on Sunday.
I drink a 24 oz Monster most days and that was a blech! moment for me.
So boo.
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Yes, she met him in Canterlot, then went all the way to Ponyville during the Human estrus season to mate with him, helped him in the final confrontation and finally followed him back to Ponyville in the epilogue of YHaY.
Oh for the love of... she ate the detergent? This is why you can’t have nice things. Time to child proof the treebrary!
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Wait, what condition?
It's been a while since I read YHaY, so I might need to do some remembering.
Is it the, uh, chaos contamination-esque thingy that made her very... sexually forward? That's the only thing I (vaguely) remember that fits.
So, women ask me this sometimes, so I'll ask you.
How long is it?
To clarify in this context; is this gonna be another epic of epicness and epic proportions that'll take me four days to read? Please say yes, and that you're almost done with it, actually, and it'll be daily updated until completion so I have a reason to imagine my phone vibrating for no reason in relation to this as I anxiously await each chapter.
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It's funny, because it's true~!
Hahahahaa, oh lawdy.
Good show Maxi Pad, good show!
This is turning out pretty swell so far, so good job.
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Well, at least Max and Twilight will have some experience before the arrival of their child :)
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Only the fact that she is pregnant, courtesy of the tree of harmony.
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If it's anything like confessing her feelings, she'll be giving birth before he finds out.
This feels right, the whole first story felt like the opening arc for an anime that would last for years lol and it’s time for the next arc you’ve got this friend!
Poor Pyresteed. Hopefully she'll learn...
9790903 9790911 Headlines next day.
MARE UNAWARE SHE WAS PREGNANT UNTIL SHE GAVE BIRTH
FATHER SHOCKED
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nah the condition portrayed in the cover photo that should have been impossible yet they forgot about Max's different physiology
That lass can swallow a lot! Must be magic influence on the body much like pinkie pie
"He's a Wombat, and he's okay! He sleeps all night, and he works all day!" ~ Monty Python's Flying Circus
Again, I will ask. There was a chapter where twilight turned human in the previous story, WHICH ONE IS IT!
You set up this whole thing about Sparkleass wanting to be human, but it doesn’t ever happen from what I can find.
Please, someone, tell me.
...oh, and great first chapter by the way. Can’t wait to read more.
Still a smartass. I like.
I was so happy when a friend told me of this, thanks for more great story to come!
Jesus Christ I am so happy that you have decided to continue this amazing story. After reading, and loving, it multiple times I was so disappointed when it ended so abruptly. In my spare time I would occasionally wonder how the story would have continued and thought up my own sequel. I’m so glad that you’re doing the story justice by finishing it properly.
woah, hold up a sec... Max uploading again so soon? right after just one chapter is out? somethings not right here, are you okay? Did you get high or something? I'm actually worried cause this never happened before. Jk lol, keep up the good work.
yo my man max is back!!!!!!!
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oh em gee Mocha, you can't just ask an author about their length, you'll give them performance anxiety... plus it's usually longer than the author thinks it'll be. Just enjoy the ride.
9791379 Geez, calm down, son. It was Chapter 49, if I remember correctly.
9790851 Well, it's about i have no idea long. Or so I'm told.
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Oh, thanks!!!
I feel stupid now.
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But I need to know the length! I know it's gonna be thick with intrigue and pulsing with excitement of all forms, the depth will be just enough: But how long it is really does matter for how long it'll last and how long we all have to take on this ride before we get off and wait for the next big one to take its place.
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I'd bow to that comment but I'm afraid at what would happen if I bent over... whew, well done.
Wut?>!@#$)*$#%#!
Apparently I need to read again. Off I go!!!!!
I get that the prologue probably sets up the mystery of whatever the new foe will be, but this was a much more solid opening. Scene set perfectly, adequate details on setting, the exposition isn't too heavy, quick and clever establishment of character relationships (I smiled at how he coerced her to end an annoying habit by sleeping on the couch), good prose, and very few typos.
Batch?
be toO humiliated
No typo, but this was a sinful act in need of pun-ishment.
Pretty sure its PYResteed.
suppose that'S as
Oh yeaaaah... a rather large part of what went into the Equestrian human makeup was Diamond Dog wasn’t it. That would certainly explain this.
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Never tried MtDew flavored frosting but I did once try to spike my 2lt of Dew with NoDoze tablets once... to give it a kick since I was working 3rd shift at the time. I figured, NoDoze tastes like mints and it'll make the Dew stronger!
It was stronger alright, think I was having heart palpitations for most of the shift that night but the worst part was it made the Dew taste like raw Alka-Selzer. Oh god that stuff was vile! But I drank it anyway. Never waste Dew! Blargh...
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You related to Cleetus Mcfarland by any chance?
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I tried a energy drink called BANG which was my first energy drink I've had in years and it made my heart skip two beats and I had to call off of work early because it gave me bad headaches. I'm 24 and I will never touch another energy drink again.
Pyreseed eating soap almost made me puke. Not an easy feat.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
Ok, pancakes, daddy likes. Continue.
Yep, starting to sound like some quality food porn.
That's right, talk dirty to me~
And you lost me. Real Maple Syrup or GTFO. I know you got local maple trees, get back to me when you got the good stuff, Ebony.
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Feels weird man.
Interessting chapter. Common sence is still not Equestrian human strength...
Can Max understand them still?
Human pregnancy last 9 month, Pony 11 months.
Wonder what the child will be? Also i wonder if its always the same result or like a pony ( 30% change become a unicorn/pegasus/earth pony , 10% winged unicorn/unicorn with wings )
Slice of life is nice. The next huge adventure will be fatherhood