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Sweetie Belle and Rarity have once again been fighting. Sweetie is tired of Rarity always being mad at her, so she decides to take a small trip...What could go wrong?

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Sweetie is starting to question her life, is she different? Is she even a pony?

When exactly did this moral dilemma show up? :rainbowhuh:

Not badly written, but the story itself needed more substance. It seemed way too short, and ended too suddenly. Keep writing! :raritywink:

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It happened from her getting yelled at by Rarity wayyyy to often, how would you feel constantly getting yelled at by your sister who you look up to?

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It was short because this was a realllly short one-shot I wanted to do, my stories are usually longer. :derpytongue2:

it ended a little abruptly, but it was good

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It ended abruptly cause I'm extremely lazy... :twilightblush: Sorrrry

Haven't read yet, but by the description, I felt the pressing need to say this:
No, she is not a pony. Sweetie Belle is robot =D (MLP: Friendship is Witchcraft reference)

Short, rushed and pointless.
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Favorited.
:moustache::trollestia::scootangel:

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You have no idea how tempted I was to make her a robot! :rainbowlaugh:

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That's how most my stories are! Hope you like!:pinkiehappy:

:D I LOVE THIS STORY! :heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::raritystarry::raritystarry::yay::yay::pinkiesmile::pinkiehappy: We need more Rarity Sweetie Belle sister stories :D

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Oh my... Those hearts.... Anyways! Thank you! I really like making short fics like these (because I'm lazy) so I may make more like this :twilightsmile:

1074613 :D Please tell me if you do! I have Rarity and Sweetie Belle stories too XD I just uploaded my second one today :D :pinkiehappy::heart:

Misleading description, but still a good story. Made me, "Awwww...":rainbowkiss:

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Heh, sorry about the description... I sorta forgot to change it after I had written the story... Oopsies :twilightsheepish:

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Ya Sweetie is just about the most realistic pony in Ponyville... Shes still a filly, give her some credit :rainbowlaugh:

I know about the description, it made me wanna chuck my computer at a wall when I realized my mistake... I ARE SO SMARTTTTT :derpytongue2:

Ok there, I think I fixed the description so I don't look like a total idiot! YAYYYYYYYY! :yay:

4 Dislikes?


I liked it anyhow, great job.

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Awww how sweet of you! I made this in like an hour :rainbowlaugh:

I suspected Opal was the culprit and I was right.

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