Rainbow Dash has tried and is finally recruited into the Wonderbolts, but will jealousy among everyone stop her? Or will Dash fly through it all?
Thanks to everybody for believing in me and thanks to Magic and Foxxy for inspiring me and helping me out with this story.
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Off to a good start!
Thanks, I felt like everybody always thinks Rainbow Dash is annoyed by Scootaloo I never think that about her though
Sweet Story
Thank you all expect another chapter tomorrow or Thursday!
Oh and also Scootaloo does play a major role in this along with everybody else, Im not gonna center it around RD
good so far...
Thank you all, I still can't believe the story has been up and all the positive comments make it awesome! It's amazing that this story started out with a bedtime idea (as in I fell asleep thinking of ideas for stories) and has become so much more!
Well I must say that you pulled off buckshot and applejack's accent without a hitch and silvers character was quite on point. Good job and I'd like to see more!
-Magic
Hah, thank you! oh trust me you will see more I have a whole shipping line worked out, can you guess it?
Hah! Wow its amazing 100 views already, thanks so much!
I really like how you tried to put a fight scene into the story. It makes sense that Foxxy (excuse me, Silver) would have at least one rival.
Magic
Hah, I thought it would be fun, wait until Buckshot's date
I made sure not to through in something bad, I dont think I could for that matter.... To weird for me
That was amazing! But really weird… How did you know that with my personality, I would ask a girl 50 times if she was sure? That part kinda freaked me out but then it clicked, we just want to make girls happy! Another great chapter and it is now my favorite!
-Magic
It was an assumption, having been on dates before a guy always asks me, "are you sure" and it makes me laugh, I applied it to you because you seem like a person who cares alot about wanting to make somebody happy
906731 aww i see whats hapening you and magic should go out.
NO! NO NO NO! Dude sorry, but as it happens I have a boyfriend! Sorry to snap....
Oh god damn it, I messed up on Vinyl I said her eyes were red! Whhhhy! *banishes self to moon*
Drunken Applejack is funniest Applejack
Thank you, I threw in the Equestria Girls for a good laugh, I really do like writing the ponies when they are drunk, and it was awesome doing Buckshot's character as well
I AM THE NEW QUEEN! CIDER FOR EVERYPONY!!!!!!!
Two minutes later...
*snore*
-Magic
Eeeyup, oh trust me the next chapter is going to be... interesting, interpret that how you want....
"Scootaloo was stuck in a hospitla" Replace a with e
"W need a way to get her mind off of it" You forgot an e
There we go all fixed, thanks for pointing that out!
Its so wavvy, anyways thanks for the favorites and likes and all the supportttt!
Its so awesomeee
Hahaha! Thanks!
Here's a secret for all my friends, that what if paragraph was what I told myself when I was having a really bad time and was planning to do something I would have regretted, always remember there is always somebody there no matter how dark the world seems.
Little grammar correction it's 'addition' not 'edition' towards the end of the chapter.
Thanks for pointing that out, all fixed!
D'awww
It may be over but there may be sequels or something along the lines of that, but even so if you've been reading my blog, you know what story I'm doing!
907240 LOL That wouldn't work out so well. My girlfriend would flip out!
-Magic
The fact that I have a boyfriend doesn't work to well either... So ya....
Nice.
Bravo sir. Bravo. I'm dying to see a sequel to this xD
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I actually do believe I'm doing that, it's going to be one with Scootaloo
1131858 fantastic, I'll be keeping an eye out for that :)
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BOYYYYYY, WHY YOU GOING THRY MY OLD WORKS? THEY AIN'T NEARLLLLLY AS GOOD AS MY NEW ONES!
Nahhh, but this was my second fic and I'm not extremely proud of it. Oh and it killed me to type the first two sentences... I can't live without proper English...
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HE'S GOT SWEETIE! HE'S GOOD! Nahhh something's bound to happen.... Evil ideas forming....
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The stallions are OCs of two of my friends, they aren't actually in the show. People know about the ponies from Ponyville, not Canterlot. Most of the stuff has been in Ponyville, therefore ponies don't know about them.
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Once again, Discord attacked Ponyvilee not Canterlot, he did get rid of the maze but didn't do much else there. And with the wedding... Huh... Maybe the ponies have short term memory loss...
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"OH HEEEEEYYY YAAA YOU WERE THE MARE WHO MADE THE MOST AMAZING FLYING TRICK IN HISTORY!"
...Fuck you Spitfire....
can you do a sequel where the mare that caught the flower (I think it was Scootaloo or something) will get married? that is if you want to.
