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dirty little secret


I tried so far… and got so hard… but in the end, it didn't even matter at all. (Direct Support)

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Looking at this, I immediately think of this:

9281217
Heh, I should have used that line: “I wasn’t asking.”

Open up your flies

This was a nice read now if only there was a an alternate time line where she is still in charge of equestria that would be great.

9281264
I do for my Patreon supporters! :twilightsheepish:

9281317
Is her pesky defeat preventing you from demanding a sequel?

Been a little break from last fic, how's it been DLS?

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I wonder how awkward the post-reformation meeting with those guards would be if she didn't.

"Open up your thiiiiighs!"

9281583
Unfortunately yes, I like Dom Tempest and loved the idea that she collected toys for herself, especially married stallions that the clams as her own.

Yay, my second clopfic, and this one doesn't have an abundance of blood. Crimson's Cutie Mark, if you like that level of twisted. Also, think we could get a sequel, dealing with Tempest meeting the guards she raped. And is it weird that this felt cute?

Will there be a sequel?
Like an alternative timeline in which Tempest won?

9281860
Oh, I’ve been back in school lately, which slows down my production a bit.

9281915
Now that could be a sequel ... when her apology turns into them asking for another round, but this time, they’re in control, using her however they please. ^.^

9281941

"Open up your thiiiiighs!"

And serve the mare before you now~
I won’t be a virgin~
When this tale is done~
Open up your thiiiiighs!

9282323
At this point, cute rape is kind of my specialty. :facehoof:

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Not planning on that now, but if my Patreon supporters ask for it...

9281941
Well played, good sir.:moustache:

Elu
Elu #15 · Nov 9th, 2018 · · 16 ·

Hm, I don't think I've seen rape stories from you before. Hoped you were decent-enough not to do it. But oh well... To the blacklist of writers you go!

I it bad I want her to bump into them after her reformation and just give them a "not a word of what we did" look at them as twilight approaches

Open up your thi-i--ii-i-iiighs!
See my hole from where you stand.
Me with my dripping pussy.
Your dick is hard and staaaands!
Open up your thi-i--ii-i-iiighs!
Give me your sweet stallion semen.
It's time to give me a good ride.
Come on, gimme some.
Open up your thighs.

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lol, 17 of my 50 stories are labeled non-con. That’s roughly 1/4 of my stories.

9283000
Yes ... and then they have fun alluding to it in roundabout ways as she sweats it out. Meanwhile, Twilight is completely oblivious to their hints and innuendos.

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Open up your thi-i--ii-i-iiighs!
See my hole from where you stand.
Me with my dripping pussy.
Your dick is hard and staaaands!
Open up your thi-i--ii-i-iiighs!
Give me your sweet stallion semen.
It's time to give me a good ride.
Come on, gimme some.
Open up your thighs.

Missed the rhythm in a couple spots, but B+ for effort. :twilightsmile:

This was amazing. Hoping for a sequel where they reunite post movie and have another fun encounter.

Elu
Elu #21 · Nov 10th, 2018 · · 8 ·

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Haven't noticed it before, then. Gives me the more reasons to blacklist you and to ignore anything you write. Fetishising rape is certainly not okay.

9283686
>weird edgy smut fanfic clearly labeled as such and delivered in a way that shouldn't be offensive due to cartoon characters and the fact that it's fictional
>Still gets offended

Good job you special fucking snowflake, taking offense at something so stupid it shouldn't even be worth the effort to be offended...
...but then again, the progressives don't need much incentive to spend effort and get worked into an outrage-induced uproar.

I'm an actual rape victim, so if anyone should be offended, it's me; I'm clearly not, so fuck off with your gaslighting and strawman-justified ideologue views.

On a different note, reading the comment section of smut-fics is always fun, I recommend it. Also I made it match the rythm better 9283110

Open up your thi-i--ii-i-iiighs!
See my hole from where you stand.
Me with my moist pussy.
Your dick is hard and staaaands!
Open up your thi-i--ii-i-iiighs!
Give me your sweet cream.
It's time to give me a good ride.
Come on, gimme some.
Open up your thighs.

~Crystalline Electrostatic~

Elu
Elu #23 · Nov 10th, 2018 · · 7 ·

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Yeah, yeah... piss off. I know this is fiction, and therefore it's harmless in a certain way. However, it doesn't mean I must like it or avoid saying that I heavily dislike it. I'd be very glad if knighty introduced tags like derpibooru so I could block this shit from appearing in my view.

What you said also doesn't mean that rape fics are okay. Fetishising rape is just plain wrong no matter what. If you claim otherwise, well... Can't help you.

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The problem is the fact that rape gets used for fiction either because the author is into domination, or because the reader likes it for whatever reason. This stuff is hardly worth getting outraged over, and I don't see a mob mass down voting or making baseless comments with the only context of hating the story.

Writing about a rape at the view of it somehow being morally acceptable is a big nope, but I do not have the same issue with domination sex as long as it's consensual. Consent in my opinion is vital for sex, fiction or reality.

Writing it with the view of the victim, and then creating a sort of drama where they try and find ways of dealing with it is fine, because it's not being made for the sake of sating some desire of dominating someone forcefully against their will.

@dirty little secret,

Would you volunteer first to take Tempest Shadow's virginity, if you 'self inserted' yourself as a human who was also captured? 😋

9283670
I will never escape the horror of sequel demands... :raritydespair:

9283937

the progressives don't need much incentive to spend effort and get worked into an outrage-induced uproar.

Hey, don’t put that shit on progressives!
I’m a progressive, and I wrote the damn thing.

Progressives care about wealth inequality and making sure everyone has opportunity. Identity politics and the PC police are more on the mainstream liberal side.


9283686
It just seems weird to me that you’d write off 33 consensual fics because the same author also wrote some non-consensual fics.
And yes, Fimfic could really use a site-wide tag filtering system ... but nobody is forcing you to read the story after you see the ‘non-con’ tag on it.


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That’s a ... weird question.
First of all, I don’t think it would work out that way -- Tempest wanted ponies because she’d been separated from them for so long and she wasn’t into any kind of creature at the Storm King’s place. I don’t think she’d give some random human a second glance ... just another weird creature she isn’t into.
Assuming she would want to... Eh, I guess. Out of all my stories I could be inserted into, this wouldn’t even be in my top 10, but I guess it would be enjoyable enough, and worth it just to be in Equestria.

9284441
Now that you mentioned it. I can just picture Tempest Shadow laughing at the poor human, only to execute the poor person with a vile beheading. Preforming it, in front of those poor stallions.... 😦 My imagination today is pretty messed up.....

9284441
The price of success my friend. Do as thou wilt. Loving your work.

Elu
Elu #29 · Nov 10th, 2018 · · 5 ·

9284441
I have a no-tolerance policy regarding anyone who writes non-con. Sorry, but that's how it should be.

Also, that person who called me progressive in a bad way is sure more of a special snowflake than I am.

9283110

I was aiming to keep the tune and meter of the original song.

9284561
Eh. To each their own. But you've written some pretty screwed up stuff, too, mate.

It's all just fantasy, here (at least some of it bloody well better be...:rainbowderp:), which hurts nopone and if you don't like it, just tune it out.

9284561
If rape is such horrible way to go about a story why write at all? Could it be that a lot of people are just wired differently a have fetishes. I likes rape fics when particaly no consent is had. I hate when it’s not “dark” because I feel what’s the point of it then if it’s trying to make something horriable just seem like some lighthearted porn. But I know that some just like it that way and there’s no changing them. Nor are people is evil for liking rape porn or witting something in which consent isn’t had. In fact I’m probably more against rape and hate people who do it in real life more then anyone because I know what it can do to a person after reading so many. Just because something evil as rape exists doesn’t mean it can’t be used.

Elu
Elu #33 · Nov 11th, 2018 · · 5 ·

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I never intended any of my messed up stuff to be perceived as something to masturbate to, so the comparison falls flat.


9285370
People are evil when they like rape in a fetish sort of way. If they find it arousing, they certainly are evil.

I have no problem with people who write about rape victims and what they go through to fix their mental trauma, as well as to bring the rapist to justice. What I don't like, what I hate is when it is fetishized.

I don't care how fictional it is. It is plain wrong to be aroused by rape of any kind. And I don't believe people who state that their fantasies will never become reality. If you fantasize about something, you want to do it. If people could, they would rape despite how they said they separate real life from fantasy.

Anyway, I probably shouldn't have commented here since those I address won't change their ways and neither I will ever agree to rethink on my position on such a horrible thing.

Comment posted by Fanatic-Heretic-101 deleted Nov 11th, 2018
Comment posted by DaWarWolf deleted Nov 11th, 2018

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You're confusing uninhibited fantasy for intentional imaginary excitement. Not justifying anything actually evil here. But the difference is that one enjoys the world and fantasy without inhibitions and no consequences while the other has actual enticement and attraction toward the real subject and wishes to perform it. Also thoughts don't make you evil, actions made on those thoughts do. Believe want you want to believe, but don't group people who are excited by a an imaginary setting with a kink with the people who actually commit atrocities.

Elu

9285710
I'm pretty sure that last sentence you made describes you perfectly well. Or any other wannabe rapist, for that matter.

Also, thanks for clearing up that you are one. You belong on my blacklist as well now. Feel proud... if that's what suits you.


9285891
I've heard it a million times and I disagree. Wanting to rape someone is evil, no matter if someone actually does it or only fantasizes about it. Just as being racist is evil, no matter if you go around killing people of different color or not. It might not be the best analogy since racism manifests in plenty more ways, but I digress.

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Fucking trash

9285943

that last sentence you made describes you perfectly well. Or any other wannabe rapist, for that matter.


:unsuresweetie: Maybe you guys would prefer to take this to PM’s if it’s just going to devolve into name-calling?

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Not really calling him trash really. Just calling out his trashy opinions. It’s not even worth it since he’s willing to call me a rapist of all things. Like really.

Sorry for cluttering comments on a otherwise fantastic story but it’s bound to happen anyways. Just as the sun is bright your comment sections dissolve to shit evey time.

9285943
I quite literally just said that. People who in real life fantasize and want to hurt people are jerks and messed up but that haven’t done anything yet only make them jerks not evil since the evil action hasn’t taken place. And again in regards to things like rape and racism the part where it becomes evil doesn’t happen until it’s put into play.

Example: say there’s this guy who inwardly hates all black people and wants to rape this black woman. That’s horrible, but he never in his life acts on or indicates to others that he does or wishes so. He’s a creep for thinking these things but since he has never spoken of these things or acted upon these feelings he has done nothing wrong and is guilty of nothing. Hell the only thing you can latch on is that I said he inwardly thinks these things but there is no physical proof of this man being like this.

Look dude his is the killing people in real life vs killing in video games it’s worth a small discussion but at no point are the two events relatable to one another

Elu

9286666
Makes sense, but to me, they're nearly equal. One hasn't acted yet but they're still a horrible person and an evil one. The act isn't done but it might get done, you never know with people like those.

9286742
On that we can agree

Comment posted by Fracturedheart deleted Nov 11th, 2018

9287032
Um ... you realize there’s a button for that, right?

9287042
Oh really? How do I find it? Also Thank you.

I'm horribly confused by this.

It's got best tsundere horse being sexy.
It's got rape.
But it's almost consensual by the end.
It's as sexy as ever.

Like, I really want to see a chapter 2...
[SpongeBob Narrator Voice] "Two days later..." [/SpongeBob Narrator Voice]
"So, um, about two days ago... And, um, how I'm not doing the whole evil thing anymore... Twilight says we need to talk."

9294911
I seem to have that effect on people. ^.^

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And then another part seven months later with a pregnant Tempest being eaten out by one of the guard stallions (probably the father) while the female one is off to the side getting impregnated by the other stallion.

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