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Foal Star


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This story is a sequel to The Foal Prince


Thie story takes place after the episode Baby Cakes

Pinkie Pie is left in charge of caring for the Cake Twins for an entire week. But somehow while Pinkie was feeding the foals she didnt realise that the muffins she fed them had chaos magic left behind by Discord. Soon Pinkie Pie was regressed into a baby and the Cake Twins are now adults and are scared of getting in trouble. So they try to care for Pinkie Pie and open Suagrcube Corner on their own. But this could be too much for the twins as they learn being an adult is much harder then they thought.

Editor: Superpinkbrony12

Shout out to Reverse Scratch for the idea

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 66 )

Very cute. Reminds me of Pinkie Padded Pie. :heart: Can't wait to read more!

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sorry i Published this at 6 in the morning

This seems Interesting. Can't wait for more :3

This need an alternative universe tag, but other than that this is a cute start so far. :rainbowkiss:

9240325 Hey, I'm glad you liked that, because I wrote it.

Excited for more keep it up!!

Great story! I can't wait to read more!

I kinda knew Pound Cake would be a fatso when he grew up.

9241298
My theory is that he takes after his mom and Pumpkin takes after her dad.

9241298 Well when you grow up having two bakers for parents and an honorary big sister who's crazy about sweets, it's kind of hard not to grow up a little on the chubby side.

Very fascinating. I am normally not a fan of Pinkie regression but her getting all teenie-weenie as the Cake Twins grow in size certainly has grabbed my attention.

Hmm. I wonder where those mysterious baked goods came from? I wonder if this is something Twilight can fix?

Getting to enjoy an adult Pumpkin and Pound will certainly be loads of fun. Definitely eager for the next chapter. :)

Comment posted by Aether Spark deleted Oct 25th, 2018

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He'll still be able to fly right?

And Did you mean big as in tall or large?

What do you do with a giant baby?

I really wish that you have stayed with the usual formula for the stories in the series.

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sorry
, I just wanted to change this one up abit.

I guess I should be glad he’s trying to mix things a up a little. But so far I like what his stories are usually about more than this. And it kind of weirds me out that pound and pumpkin are adults with more or less baby minds. Though that may not be completely true. Because they like most babies in cartoons seem to be more intelligent than babies in real life.

9439045 Babies are actually a lot more intelligent than you give them credit for. They may not understand things the way adults do, but they can pick up on things a lot sooner than you think.

This is definitely gonna be exciting. But I'll bet it's gonna take Twilight longer than she thinks to find a cure for the muffins. :twilightsmile:

Pinkie is going to cause one discord* of a prank!





*I don't curse so that was the best alternative

I shudder to think what Pinkie has planned.

You know, considering the foal pandemic has already produced several victims, I think Aloe and Lotus could benefit from having a special spa treatment just for foals and their parents. I imagine most parents would love to take a spa day, but would be too worried about their little ones wandering around and causing trouble. :raritywink:

Just when you thought the foal pandemic was over, it comes back with a vengeance. :pinkiecrazy:

9595119 That's definitely a job for Rarity. She seems like the type who'd do it to straighten out "Uncouth" behavior. :raritywink:

This story is turning out to be a lot better than I Originally thought. I think a good punishment for PinkiePie would be to spend some time as an old mare. Not only would she not be a able to cause any more trouble. But the weak muscles and creaky joints would make it more difficult to be her usual self. And I think between this and also being responsible for Dr.hooves being a foal she would really deserve it.

Releasing Discord to get him to undo all of this?

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I think that I would try asking princess Celestia if she could do it first.

Pinkie needs both a spanking and a flushing.

9607905 Does she really deserve both? One or the other seems fine. Besides, delibertly flushing a foal is wrong.

Celestia just made a deal with the devil, and she's going to regret it. :facehoof:

Things are about to go from bad to worse.

I AM SUFFERING FROM A CUTENESS ATTACK!!!!!! *faints*

Pinkie teaching Pound and Pumpkin to use the big potty? This is gonna be bad.

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Have you not read the havoc that Pinkie has caused?

9662540 You think she'll cause havoc with the big potty?

9662609 What kind of havoc are we talking about, here?

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It's just an expression. Now stop bothering me.

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