Seven friends are thrust from their homes on Earth to the world of Equestria. Two unfamiliar worlds will have to learn to adjust to each others rules and how each others interactions can bring change or create new influences on one another.
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I don't know if I missed it being mentioned anywhere, but where are the love bugs?
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If you mean the changelings, they've only been mentioned in passing. They would still be located in their hive, with a few here and there acting as spies, but I haven't given them any scenes in the story yet.
* Damn, I spent the last few thinking about what to say because there was A LOT going on with Luna that kinda blind sighted me. It's like when Discord reentered the picture & made not only Trixie's but my brain as well turn to confused mush with how he was talking about. *
• So Luna did all of that strategic planning & investigation ( heavily inspired by Cerb's words ) that resulted in nothing but utter panic for civilians & their loved ones, specifically three mothers regarding their children which in turn affected Chris's whole harem? Good intentions on Luna's part but damn did it kinda dampen the mood of everyone's relaxation.
• I really feel for Starlight. She's matured throughout the whole harem process & has only continued to form a stronger bond with Chris & the other mares of the group. She instilled a trust in herself that she wouldn let anything harm her man after how she at first treated him & now with this whole harem, the mental damage of any of them being hurt under her care would be devastating.
( Bigs up to Chris & Prim for being her comforters in which I'm sure was just traumatizing. )
* I love the "You're a terrible (insert this)" thing Chris & Star have adopted. It's adorable. Go on Chris, go on & fuck her adorable brains out ya bastard 😅 *
• So am I to assume that things are slowly getting more comfortable in the trio that is Luna, Mack, & Kelly? I know Kelly is mad in the moment at Luna for her actions but we know she can't hold that against her forever.
* Don't fret tho Luna, they did say that you'll enjoy the hell out of Kelly's apology. *
* Mac getting that kiss in on Luna's cheek was so adorable & him calling Cerb 'brother' was some real recognize real shit & I loved it! *
( btw is the ferris wheel event that was brought up true or thought up on the spot? I heard the potion thing did take place in the show & the Tealove probably happened too but I don't know about this event. )
This whole conversation is an absolute goldmine! Cerb is living the fucking dream. Benny better get on up there but hey he's a gentleman so I respect that.
"Not gay when it's underway" Explain please?
Okay horndog chill 🤣. We know you almost busted when those two sucked faces in front of ya. Luckily for Benny, his girls are into each other so it all checks out!
• Damn, Pinkie holding back tears knowing she's not able to be with Benny is kinda sad. Holding in all those feelings can't be good for her. Must've really hurt her hearing all the girls discuss about their lives with the humans when she can't.
• Another point to the pairing that is LumberJack being realistic af. They not even trying to get in the mix with whatever was going on. They just wanna be around each other. No one else but them.
* They was probably sucking hella face before being interrupted & that visual in my head will forever be look humorous & just unreal *
• Grandpa Gruff definitely knows something or he's just legit suffering from some form of dementia but at least he's seemingly respecting Cerb & Benny for their service.
* I believe the familiarity of Gilda & Gruff's conversation that Rainbow was maybe....Mermaid Man & Barnacle Boy? The 'ol coot' just hit me in the face with it. I may be wrong though. *
• Rainbow still tryna get in Cerb's pants. 😅
• It was dope to see Gilda & Rainbow finally interact. I enjoyed it.
• Good to see the humans chatting it up & getting along with the other creatures. I hope Rutherford doesn't end up breaking Cerb's back with bear hugs though. 😅
TALK YO SHIT TWILIGHT! 👏
Well....damn & then you had Lyra's sly remark on Peter's behalf. 😆
• Speaking of Lyra?
THE FUCKING COVER ART! 😍
I know I said they were becoming more "human" but DAMN! Look at how fucking cute they look! Fluttershy looks beautiful, Rarity is elegant looking AF, Lyra looks as "human" as possible & really damn cute, & Ovens?!
PETER! STOP PLAYING & GET IN THERE! 😂
* Shout out to Peachez! These chapters just got more interesting with their art included! *
10/10 chapter & I'll probably have a little more thoughts before next week. Until then? Sayonara!
Magnificent chapter. The mares of Ponyville share information that may or may not spread to the rest of Equestria at some point of the story.
The qualitys of our human character potencial are something to behold.
To see RD and Twilys bet to impact a royal summening event was unexpected but very MLP
The end with Gilda drinken duel was confusing
Now that Human x Pony relationship have bloomed i wonder when international they will effect. Villains invasions/attack perhaps short time wars are coming. How do they prepare for it? A simpel military defense raising seem to be hard to archiv with harmony attempts to keep everyone in check.
I wonder... How will the Human attacked by Royal Guards trial look like, that will start soon but how soon? How will it effect everyone and will the defense of Spearhead even be half decent?
Weapon tech will increase if one studys/steals human weapons. Overall study the human building will raise civil and military standards. I wonder if it can help raise Equis populations into the Industry age.
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Yeah, there was a lot to take in. My bad, bro.
There was no real easy choice and not be called out for making a bad call. Too little, too much, not enough fire power going in, not enough protection, and more than likely, all for nothing.
I think, in the end, this really was the best call. Taking the threat seriously, yet not overreaching and causing unnecessary panic until after the fact when she could say "It was only a precaution. There was no danger."
As her first real call for panic, probably pretty close to traumatizing. More like a frightening wake-up call that there are limits and blind spots to what she can do to protect those she's grown to care about.
I'm glad someone remembers these things are staying consistent... or a running gag in some ways.
Kelly is comfortable with both, obviously. However, before this meetup, Luna had feelings of rejection, and Mac had issues with his fear of being accepted and having something authentic.
Kelly is a damn good apologizer.
Kelly did more than enough with that kiss on the lips, but this kiss on the cheek was long overdue.
( btw is the ferris wheel event that was brought up true or thought up on the spot? I heard the potion thing did take place in the show & the Tealove probably happened too but I don't know about this event. )
This whole back story between Luna and Big Mac revolves around IDW Comic Main Series #9, Fleetfoot is knocked out fo the sky by fireworks during the Summer Festival and crash lands into Big Mac. She still has a concussion, but still sees fireworks when she looks to Big Mac to thank him and falls head over heels for him.
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Instantly envisioning a long loving life with him, complete with retiring from the Wonderbolts to marry him, starting a family, and growing old together.
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Shortly after that, Luna arives
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Big Mac didn't step up, she just picked him out of the crowd then drug him around the festive, smashing the competition because Alicorn + Big Mac = Power House!
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However, Big Mac was focused on doing work at the time, and ditched Luna the first chance he got. Sadly, it was bout the time Luna started to really take a liking to him.
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Shortly after that, he ran into TeaLove
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Literally ran into her, and she saw stars, so she envisioned a life with him as well.
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While TeaLove goes Cra-Cra, Big Returned to his search for the means to complete his work, accidentally winning a giant stuffed Pinkie Pie, getting conned into buying a trinket of himself made by Spike, both of which he blindly gives to Fleetfoot who had been following him. And by blindly, he wasn't even paying attention who he gave them to. When she stops to admire the gifts, she happens across photos taken of Big Mac while at the festival and decides it must be fate... A fate that leads her to cross path with Tealove.
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Even then, he was kept some distance from Cheerilee, but also didn't know how bad Fleetfoot and TeaLove were going at it.
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Eventually, Big Mac finds out it's not possible for him to finish doing the work he sought out to do in the first place after running into Zecora. She makes him realize that he didn't need to be so focused on work, and throughout the day, he did have fun, despite his best efforts to avoid the festival.
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He returns to the festival and decides to enjoy himself, eventually running into Luna again, where she surprised him with a kiss.... but was oblivious to Fleetfoot and TeaLove both trying to find their in with him.
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The series itself never addresses the aftermath or any resolution, I had to fill in the gaps the best way I could.
Cerb has found much of what he didn't think he'd be able to have that came along with means to get back the rest of what he wanted back.
There's a running joke in the navy that sailors go out to sea (also known as going underway) for so long that they end up hooking up with each other out of desperation. Eventually, that stigma became so well known that seasoned sailors would tell the new members joining them before a deployment "Hey, we're going to be out there for 6 to 9 months, so you should know that it's not gay while you're underway." essentially poking fun at themselves and the absurdity of the gay sailor joke, that just because you're on a boat, banging another guy doesn't make you gay because it's done out of convenience.
Oh, come on now. You can't blame the poor guy for knowing a good thing when he sees it.
I'd say this was a case more about her being sad and jealous over not getting laid and seeing the girls only put tighter restrictions on the possibilities of inviting another mare to join or share their humans with. Essentially, Pinkie isn't picky, but the other mares are, and so she's getting locked out.
Every relationship started, developed, and works differently. LumberJack both came at each other with a similar mindset of what they wanted. The others had priorities or work led into positions by circumstance or compensation. Thankfully, everyone just took a step back and let those two work out everything their own way.
How he knew enough to get so close to what Benny's gun was, at least getting it right that it was a projectile weapons, was based on weapons he knew. However, what he said to Luna certainly was something she didn't know that made him valuable enough to join them.
Not sure what you're talking about with the Mermaid Man & Barnacle Boy part, but Guilda calling Gruff and old coot was just a generic insult for a mentally faltering elderly person.
She likely won't be the only one.
It had to happen, but Rainbow was just busy staying with Becky the whole day.
Must be that fighting spirit that helped them get so close to each other.
She gave up her human once. Never again.
These mares need to learn a better filter.
Feel free to leave a comment for the artist under their submission. I'm sure it would be a welcomed sign of appreciation.
Even I gotta wonder what it's gonna take for this guy to finally crack.
I'll be sure to pass your kudos along.
More fun and adventure ahead. Only one week away.
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Or maybe it will? Who knows?
I do what I can.
Took us a while to get there, but here we are.
She just got drunk and started acting stupid. Happens all the time in real life.
That's all going to be in the works for what they'll be doing/training.
As for the threats... That has yet to be seen. Though you might get a sneak peek before their night is over.
Expect the unexpected.
Human weapons might be too frightening for many, if any to want to create, once they get a proper understanding of how what they can do.
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I asked about Big Mac & Luna & you gave me a whole ass movie with pictures & everything! 😂
Much appreciated though.
Mackie was an unintentional playa 😅
Mans was getting a wonderbolt, Tealove, a school teacher, & a fucking moon goddess to like him. He the only motherfucker that can say he got kissed by a god.
Go head Mackie!
And in this story, he's gonna be piping that god & a hot human woman?! Mac got a good life rn!
Funny how he eventually ended up married with someone who by my findings barely appeared in the show at all. Rushed & not really developed if you ask me (kinda like Weird AL & Pinkie) but at least he got a happy ending. Definitely could've got a better looking haircut though. Mans was out here looking like Jim from Treasure Planet. 😂
Also Celestia's smug ass look towards Big Mac in the ar-err HOOF wrestling match was funny. Bitch knows that shit not even fair! She's a god!
P.s. The Mermaid Man & Barnacle Boy thing was just something I thought about from Spongebob. They would get into arguements & one of my favorite moments was as follows :
Mermaid Man : "STOP SHOUTING, I'M NAPPING!"
Barnacle Boy : "IT'S NOT ME YA OL COOT!"
Such a classic. 😅
I thought Rainbow might've been thinking about that but then I realized they don't know about spongebob as the humans never brought that up.
Truthfully I don't know what could've been familiar for Rainbow. I was just brainstorming the possibility.
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While only two issues of comics, there was a lot I pulled into my story from it.
Mac pulled a lot of looks that day. Including Bon Bon and Amethyst Star. Dude's got game.
I feel like they had Sugar Belle in mind for a while, because they had her show up in a lot of background shots and little voice parts a lot more times than I realized until watching some of the older episodes again. But they never really did give much time on their relationship developing to understand what it was that brought them together so fast.
Yeah, that was super unfair of her. Funny, perhaps, but still.
Oh! I thought you making it a comment about Benny. That makes a lot more sense.
So I know it's a little soon to be asking because the event hasn't occurred yet but in the event of 'The Stranded 7" actually being able to go home, how would you feel about the scenario of having the ponies exploring Earth?
They'd be able to explore the world, potentially in secrecy but I'm sure, unfortunately so, that they would have to conceal their romantic relationship with their human lovers.
The idea is both exciting but also given my gripes about the situation addressed with AppleJack & Lumberman, it would also prove to have heartbreak after heartbreak & I know nobody wants to see that.
Maybe Celestia's fears truly are warranted.
I know given the chance that Kelly & Chris would never wanna go back home & maybe even Cerb too but Becky, Benny, Lumberman, & Sniff seem like they haven't completely given me the vibe of not wanting to return to Earth.
Lumberman is in a grey area as he now has someone he will NEVER have on Earth but I know he probably still clings to the idea of going home but then I have this hope that he'll say "Fuck that!" & stay right by his girl & his new family.
Alas, it's all up to how the story goes. I'm preparing myself for what will transpire.
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There would certainly be travel back to Earth. As for ponies exploring the human world, I'm sure they would love to, but the results would be horrible, given how people can be.
She has her reasons.
Everyone has their reasons, for sure. How they will really react when given the chance, that has yet to be seen.
The only threat to that would be how bad he wants a family of his own. Sure, he has the whole Apple clan, but he won't have the chance to father a child of his own.
Soon... we'll have to wait and see.
You got some time. Hell, this night isn't even over. And you know how nights in Equestria go with these ponies and humans now that they're together.
Hey, just how hard is it to keep the MLP characters in character? It already has to seem like hell having 'The Stranded 7' who are meddling with the timeline of this show's season.
It can't be easy having the characters adapt to our world's media, language, humour, or just everything human huh?
I hope you don't stress yourself out when it comes to this. I say this because while thinking has a pro, it also has a con. Just making sure you're all good. I don't like seeing people stressed out.
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The hardest part about keeping g them i character is word choice and how their actions have been heavily influenced by everything going around.
Their falling love, fearful of the humans falling into a depressive staye and becoming vulnerable, and all the unknowns their facing change how they would normally act in some situations.
Namely all the extra caution their taking with the humans safety. Some still think they are unstoppable, or at they think Cerb is.
I butt heads with editor about that and how much ponies talk them up, but he missed the first 60 chapters or so that established that mindset.
Stress wise, in doing fine for the story. I'm about 8 chapters ahead of what's been published.
Unrelated to the chapter but it's on my mind for a while now. Just what is it about Chris that made all the other mares gravitate towards him?
Starlight has had the most reason to be with Chris because although in reality, their history together is very short, she's had the longest connection with him in comparison to the other mares of the harem.
Speaking of Starlight, we know & even she knows that while she hasn't said it to Chris, she loves him & not strictly for the sex.
I have yet to see Starlight, Ovens, or the main 4 (unless AJ has told James already) tell their lovers "I love you".
My guess is that it's simply too soon for them to give a declaration of love. I mean 'The Stranded 7' haven't really been in Equestria for that long.
Did Luna or Mac tell Kelly that they loved her? Maybe they did & I forgot. I'd just like to know.
Starlight X Chris & AppleJack X James are the only pairings (at least to me at the moment) where you should be hearing those three words more often.
Guess circumstances & situations just put off some sentimental one on one talk. Everyone & everypony are still trying to figure out things huh?
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Well, for Prim and Cream, it was largely them looking for another father figure for their foals. Seeing how good he was with them at the Welcome Party set that in motion. Fluttershy and Rarity were boguarding Cerb pretty hard, otherwise he would have been a good choice. Lumberman possibly as well, but him and AJ were already looking like an item at the time.
For Derpy, having a father figure for Dinky was a strong influence, but so was the fact that Chris had no poor reactions to her eyes and so easily accepted her and Dinky. Finding acceptance was something she longed for.
Cheerilee said she wanted someone to help her with her classes, but the more you look into what else she's said, it seems a lot more like she never really lost interest in Big Mac, but watching Kelly and him get so close, she realized her chances for romance were closing.
Nurse Redheart had less of a romantic interest but somehow developed a sexual curiosity that she assumed only a human could help her understand. She had an interest in Cerb but realized just how much he was claimed by Fluttershy and backed off. When Chris came into the picture, and she got the vibe that Starlight wasn't directly attached to him, she pursued that route, only to be brought in officially by Starlight with the prospects of getting her curiosities satisfied, and even offering more.
Obviously, the power of his touch has greatly impacted their desires to be with him, and the sex has really cemented in their commitment.
So far I would say that she's afraid to admit things have gone that far.
I have yet to see Starlight, Ovens, or the main 4 (unless AJ has told James already) tell their lovers "I love you".
Fluttershy slipped out an "I love you," and Cerb repeated the same, but both were taken as plutonic love. Although, a little later in Chapter 59. The Power of Touch: How Will They Really Feel? This happened:
But that was also before they were officially dating each other. Otherwise, it's been mostly statements like:
I care about you
I'm so happy to have you in my life
I'm so lucky to have you
You're so important to me
etc...
Pretty much. Even Lumberman felt it was wrong to exchange the "I love you" statements to each other. For Applejack, I think she would have grounds to feel that way given how much he had done for her. He really did give a lot of his time and effort, as well as admitting that he was putting himself in uncomfortable positions because he wanted to take care of her that much. Even and one point saying he might need her as much as she needed him if all his friends were moving on without him.
Nope. Neither have yet. Mac and Kelly were taking it slow and Luna just started. So, they just need some time.
That's the way it's looking, though Cerb and his girls are not very far off, and may even have more reasons to do so after all they've done and been for each other.
Exactly. Every relationship is different in their own ways, so we'll see how it all works out.
I've been wondering does Luna know the humans are being spied on by her sister? And if not, how would she feel about that? Also I know they aren't being spied on by her directly but through agents but you know what I mean
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If not for the Anti-Magic of the Humans influence, I fully expected Celestia to Spybon them all like she did on Twilight prior to accending.
But one must wonder what is her own doing and what is Harmony manipulating them?
Harmony Trixie & Luna Rose revealed THIS Equestrian Harmony as manipulative, incompetent and a growing danger since Trixie immunity to Harmony magic is slowly running out...
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Indeed, a tragedy that will be fixed in the sequel hopefully.
Queen Chrysalis and her classic Changelings might not be as effected as others by Harmony, since she rejected co-operation and was rather adamant that the Pony way of piece and 'Harmony' was not a option...
What ever is coming, i think with Changelings Symbiotic nature they are rather invested in saving others to keep themselves from starving to extinction.
Cadance already confirmed they have very potentent LOVE so... I see Cuddlebug pile around the humans coming
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As much love is in the air in Ponyville, it's a wonder there hasn't been one turned on a food coma with a pot belly
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Well, in the timeline, the changelings wouldn't be in Ponyville at this point.
...but who is to say what will stay on course now that the humans have shown up? Surely one has to pop up at some point, right?
I think the alcohol should come with a warning label or three, one for the consequences of drinking to mutch, one for the hangover and one because it can start a addiction.
I wonder if we were immortal, we would end up like Granpa Gruff. Bitter towards society that has fallen from grace over time becoming a shadow of its former glory.
Drunken Gilda will either be funny as Tarterus is infamous or be a absolut pain in the rump.
There usually isn't a in between once a certain threshold is reached.
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Nah. That's just part of the experience. Learning your limits and understanding the consequences the hard way as opposed to only being told and not really understanding the dangers. As for the addiction... Let's just hope for the best.
I don't think you need to be an immortal to become bitter towards the way your society changes. That can happen rather quickly.
She could be like a lot of people, and it depends on what she drinks. I tend to get really sappy if I only drink whisky, but I'm just an emotional mess if I get drunk with anything that has vodka in it. Beer and wine make me a little goofy, same with rum. Not sure about the rest, and mixing booze can take me anywhere depending on which one I drink the most of or which one I drank last for some reason, as opposed to which one I drank first.
My body is weird.