Seven friends are thrust from their homes on Earth to the world of Equestria. Two unfamiliar worlds will have to learn to adjust to each others rules and how each others interactions can bring change or create new influences on one another.
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10707143 33. Aggression, Temptation, Progression, and Ultimatums
Oh, they're just getting started, and what story you thinking of?
10708663 36. The Dance Part 2
I try. I mean... come on! She's hecking cute to begin with, so why not capitalize on it? Just you wait until she's eating breakfast.
Poor Twilight, I just know she would've loved a dance with Sniff. At least she'll have him to spoil all over Canterlot.
For a debut appearance, Baked Fresh is the first to ever put me in a box of many emotions. Like I kinda get his anger but I can't help but be a little angry at him for how he completely ignored Cutter's words & has an extreme disliking towards Sniff. Like dude, that's your wife & your damn daughter! Talk about a first impression.
The mother-son relationship that Cutter has with Sniff as well as the other humans is really nice. I especially adored their dance together. Sniff is doing all that he can to help. Much respect to him.
While very brief, Lumberman & Applejack continue to prove why they're my favorite pairing in the story. I could just picture them on the dance floor. Absolutely adorable.
Chris FINALLY asks Starlight for a true first date & to do so in the royal garden was just the cherry on top. I couldn't stop smiling while reading that part. I really love how far they've come from one bad mishap to now THIS.
Don't get me wrong, I love Chris's relationships with the other mares but with Starlight, there's an amazing charm of cuteness & heartwarming to it that the others with the exception of Derpy who comes a very close second don't have.
I honestly would've loved to see Benny share a dance with Pinkie. I sadly feel that it would've gone awry & I'm not saying it's because she just wants some d***. She desperately wants to express her feelings towards him & though I feel that would've been the perfect opportunity to tell him, I believe the feeling to do so would be overwhelming to her & cause a mental breakdown. Pinkie's arc is definitely getting a little deep.
Speaking of Pinkie wanting some d***? Run! Flash! Run!
I.
FUCKING
LOVE.
OCTAVIA!
Like that was genuinely beautiful of her to do that for Benny of Vinyl. I'm definitely here for this trio! Good shit on that kiss right in front of royalty! He ain't give a fuck! That's HIS GIRL!
Not gonna lie, I got majorly confused with the situation involving Rainbow, Becky, Midnight, etc. Might have to reread that so I can understand exactly what was happening.
Cerb is an unintentional Pony Poacher. Look at that man having the Princess Of The Moon & the Princess of Love tryna holla at him.
Luna was at the ready as soon as Cadance finished her dance with him. 💀
Damn, I kinda feel for Celestia.
Spiteful? Fucking. Celestia. 😤
Just how strong is this motherfucker Cerb to be able to body a damn YAK in an arm wrestling contest?!
Man, Flutters & Rarity got their work cut out for them when that man is back at 100%. 😬
This chapter was really good. I'm definitely anticipating next weekend's Chapter. A good 10/10
Chapter 94. A Garden of Werewolves?
Interesting title….very interesting.
Oh shit we're going into Twilight's chambers? That boy Sniff just has to FINALLY do it….right? Finger's crossed.
Timkaa continues to deliver with the art. Look at how adorable Twi looks. Shout out to him or her. 😁
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Of course and if you really wanna know, here. Sadly, he left fim but is still active on discord.
Look forward to that
aw that was nice for mai boi to have a dance with tia to cheer her up......i would have done the same thing
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Twilight would have loved to help share the night to its fullest with Sniff, but she still has her concerns about Sniff's safety to have her not make him a target.
While I didn't got into detail of Cutter's first night home with her husband and trying to get physically intimate with him, she tried to recreate some of the things Ovens and Twilight told her about. Baked wasn't into it but at the delegation noticed how similar the erotic touch Sniff and Ovens shared was to what Cutter did to him. So, it's not unfair for him to start making assumptions, especially when Cutter admitted that Sniff is the reason she made Baked so uncomfortable and concerned.
As for how he feels towards his daughter... Well, she's flirting with him in public, while allowing other mares to hang over him, after presumably corrupting his wife with her daughter's knowledge. That's on top of all the other bad history that happened not just between Ovens and him, but how much influence Cutter seemed to keep over her, in spite of him wanting to force her back into the family/business.
He lost his girl all those years ago, and now he sees that that little girl is gone. Maybe he no longer even recognizes his daughter anymore, but doesn't like what he sees to the point he feels like he's lost everything.
More will be understood as time goes by.
This came to be a lot easier than I thought it would have. All these guys and girls have a vacant lot in their hearts where a mother should be. For Sniff, however, his past with his mother destroying herself over a failed relationship has never really left him. Now he has a new mother figure who is asking for his help.
Kind of the same for Cerb, he's seeing something in Cutter that's worth holding onto like the mother he lost. Even the others are starting to see it.
In this case, I figured less was more. I didn't really need to give them a lot of attention and focus, given how we already know how amazing they are together. All that was needed was the reaction of others around them.
Chris has always been a solid guy, and only recently had the opportunity to act on it. Mainly, how he's going to actually take care and properly treat those that he's with. He knows Starlight never really got her fair shake of developing a relationship with him of which, who really did? but knows what he wants with his girls.
I think a lot of it is the power dynamics between the two. Where Chris is externally emotionally weak, Starlight is strong, but where Starlight is emotionally fragile, Chris is both emotionally physically strong enough to give her some real foundation to build herself up on. So, when these mares, like Starlight and Derpy, are with Chris, they get to relax all the insecurities and enjoy their time with someone who accepts them for who they are.
Benny made it sound like he was looking forward to it, but she just up and removed herself for reasons unknown. Her arch will be interesting to see how she develops.
Yeah, that was a little forced, but to be fair, Pinkie could see Sniff needed some help. Looks like she found her in.
Benny helped Octavia in ways she wasn't expecting, namely accepting herself and finding the courage to embrace the side of herself that she afraid of expressing. Then, after their discussion of how she viewed the world and used music analogies to explain them after being exposed to even more human music, her doing her own take on a human song with her own lyrics just seemed to make sense.
I really would have loved to have got a VA to sing those lyrics for me. I was even going to commission other smaller artists to put the instrumentals together to make it even more legit. Sadly... it was not to be. But, maybe in the future.
Some of the parts with Midnight are going to be confusing until the next chapter to give some context. Same with why Rainbow is getting worked up.
And he's still blind to it, which is both kind of funny, if not sad. Such a shame there isn't a better way for them to either express or deal with what they're feeling.
Almost seems like since Big Mac pushed Kelly towards Luna, Kelly is pushing Luna towards Cerb... maybe.
Well, she's in a complicated position that's kept her isolated and lonely. Now, due to her own actions, celebrating even a bit of happiness the others get to have are something she can't rightfully enjoy.
A villain who nearly destroyed Equestria and would have been responsible for removing any pony Celestia has ever cared about from reality or her company is now enjoying a loving relationship with a creature from another dimension?
... yeah.... Celestia might be a bit spiteful of a mare who did so much wrong and was rewarded with something she was robbed of despite being a good pony. At very least you gotta respect the initiative it took to find the positive and not vent out her insecurities.
I didn't want to spend the time trying to make an arm-wrestling contest exciting, so I jumped to the obvious result of Cerb winning. Mostly because as I said in the notes, bovines front legs aren't all that strong. Particularly in certain angles, their anatomy has no real mechanical advantage given their bone/muscle/tendon/joint structure.
I gave Rutherford a big advantage with his size and natural strength mixed with a physiology that is based on real animals, but works in a more cartoony fashion, but that's about as far as it went. Cerb would have won a lot easier against a real yak.
Oh, it's gonna get real intense.
Thanks for your continuing support and kind words. Next week chapter will give a bit of a wrap-up for the end of the night. As for the title... I'll let you dwell on that.
Will he? Hmm... I'm sure there are a few that have that on their wish list.
Yep, yep, and Timkaa is a she.
Also, word on the street is that Peachez might be making a return to the CTTB art world. No ETA.
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I might have to give that a look, although kinda sad to see an author go. Hope things are going well in the meantime.
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yeah. hope you enjoy it when you get to it
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Sniff knows that there is something going on with Tia. Not just that there seems to be some grievances about the relationships, if not him and his friends being there in general, but that she is miserable. He's just trying to be a good guy and help a lady out.
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LET'S GOOOOO!!
Keyword is MIGHT but still.
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I think you meant PTSD (Post Traumatic Stress Disorder), but yes, it can be very difficult to deal with. Some much harder than others. The ones where the night terrors have people acting out in the sleep or waking up thinking they're somewhere they're not or fighting for their life can be extremely taxing on everyone involved.
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yeah, always swap the damn letters
10711542 Chapter 42.
I try... Sometimes I even succeed.
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They never seem to do much with her in the series, but they did a book about her and Lyra ending up in the SMILE Agency. I used a lot of that work in how much of that is going to play out.
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the more you kknow,
Me, I made it once that Lyra and Bon-bon are still good friends after the secret is revealed, with the latter saying Lyra can use whatever of the two names she prefernces
10712998 Chapter 45. No Trophies For Gettig Naked.
Not sure what memory I made you recall, but I did try to make a lot of these characters relatable with what they've gone through.
10714933 Chapter 49. Finally Some Alone Time.
Depending on how you look at it, it's either a very simple idea of how it all works, or extremely complicated, given the dynamics and expectations.
10714936 49.5 Interlude: So, About the Humans the Other Night.
Not just a cameo. You'll see more of them. Also, for me, it's a tie between Roseluck and Lily Valley.
10714948 50. What's Really Meant To Be?
Some of the military lingo is hard to interprate for most people, though "Seeing the Wizard" instead of "Seeing a mental health provider," is probably my favorite.
And the fear was that the ponies wouldn't be able to mentally handle some of the heavier issues and realities these Stranded Seven have had to deal with.
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Well, if you really wanna know, in a mature story collab, a friend of mine played with the size of a stallion's private parts, which I use as a...minor subject in my stories, which the scene of Fluttershy meeting site and such reminded me of it.
Mhm and nice to hear about the flower ponies
Yeah. You see. I got a friend who has the belief as Equestria has Magic, with Celestia and LUna able to raise the sun and moon, that the ponies would be able to stand a chance agianst human militaries, get what I mean. The fearful view of the humans kinda reminded me of that
10715934 51. The Power of Touch: Is That How You Really Feel?
Everypony loves hands. They just feel so good that they can't say no.
And yeah, the "clueless ex-super villainous unicorn" bit seemed like the perfect bit to point out, given Chris's situation.
10715974 54. The Trials of Lonely Hearts: Part 3
There will be more on their dates and calendar systems later to help that all make sense.
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I heard that one a lot with me and my friends. I had to have them use it too.
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yep and of course
10717543 55. Dealing with the Exposure of Secrets
I decided to have that unpleasant scent take place the way it did because I needed a way to help explain the whole nudity aspect of pony culture. Not exactly why they didn't cover up, but there had to be a non-sexual reason they ignored their genitalia being out in the open. There are other reasons, but this was the big one.
10717557 56. Predators
Nurse Redheart is a great pony who takes her job seriously. True, she might have other motives, but still, she did good.
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of course. but that with Johny English and metal gear, shall I explain?
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You know you don't have to start each comment with a point you need to come back later with to offer an explanation. You should probably just explain your point the first time. If there's something I don't understand, I'm not afraid to ask.
And I'm not trying to be rude, just saying that you don't need my permission to share more of your thoughts. I like hearing what my readers think of or think about when they read my story.
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just want to be sure i don't bother with it. anyway, Johny English and metal gear
There's also another thing, but its hard to find separated, all I sent it as link or quote it?
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Dang... I haven’tseen that movie in so long.
Good times.
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yeah about that other metal gear thing, shall i link it or quote/give you the transcript?
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You can link it here.
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Okay, here, ends at 4:50
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Funny thing about that exchangeis that US spec ops don'tbury their shit while in the field.
It may sound gross, but they shit in plastic bags and carrythem off with them so they don't leave any evidenceof them being there behind.
... Kinda surprised they didn't do their research.
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well, this is set in 1963, so was that even a thing for the US back then?
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Hard to say. Back then Seals were Frogmen, and I haven't spoken to any of them about their practices.
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Well, in any case, good it ain't Jonhny
10719156 59. The Power of Touch: How Will They Really Feel? ·
She tends to do that a lot. Such a cutie.
Dinky's father is something yet to be properly addressed. Mostly because there wasn't a scene that made the topic of conversation appropriate.
10719231 60. The Fear of What Follows After ·
Technically, losing one's virginity is penis into the vagina. Anything else is foreplay or sodomy. Regardless...
I think I cover this concept pretty well in the story. Even if it is all theory they exchange.
I kinda doubt it, but that's really up to the writer for that to happen.
>10720552 62. Broken Arrow
Gathering ingredients to hopefully find a cure for Becky.
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Mhm.
Of course.
I know, i just mostly saw that virginity in many stories is only described for women get what I mean?
you do well.
Exactly. The bigger question would be, if the offspring would be a normal horse a sapient pony
ah, I see. sorry, as I said, the length makes it tricky to keep in mind what happened previously
10723476 67. Compensating: Part 1.
Kelly... will leave that to your imagination for the time being.
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Of course, its just the risk of injury and such, you know? My headcanon is though, that the magic allows stallions to mount women without risk of injury
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That's a good theory, but you have to rememberthe human’s anti-magic properties nullify magic used on and around them.
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Of course, I just meant in my universe, finished a stallion on woman story recently
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Ah. Got ya. Nice to have some magic that cares about the ladies.
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thank you, the story was tricky though
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That was a bit of a more difficult section to write out. Younger versions of the different characters with stronger personalities all acting a lot more immature took a lot of me resisting my own past. Then throwing in the strong social dynamics of these characters playing off of each other because of their very different backgrounds and making it sound believable wasn't easy. Some of those parts might not have worked as well as I intended anyway, but a lot of the trash talk came from memory, just like a lot of the backgrounds themselves.
Actually, truth be told, some of the backgrounds had to be toned down to keep it from sounding too unrealistic. Sadly, that's because some people's history holds a lot of violence, abuse, neglect, and too many close calls...
Sometimes while writing this I remember just how many fucked up people I've come to know.
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yeah, its a pity at times, isn't it?
10727892 78. Post-War-Party Party: The Wrap-Up.
You might have to do another search to find a playable version of the song, but I'm guessing the song is region locked to not play where you're at.
10727844 76. Post-War-Party Party: Part 2. Party on.
I still get a little worked up reading that scene. Just all the pride and other emotions build up about them finally getting recognized like that. Brings back some good memories.
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always sucks, doesn't it? You know what it worse? If there was only one channel with the music you liked and gets nuked by youtube.
Oh, agreed!
10729200 79. No Turning Back Now.
That story about Celestia's past and her time with The Good King Sombra was such great story, I had to include it.
There's just something people can't shake about watching others suffer.
10729221 79.6. No Turning Back Now: Something to Dream About.
In this world, Luna's guards seem to be rather strict about working their tasks. That, and by the sounds of it, Luna has already laid out some instructions that the new humans are not to be harmed... perhaps given orders to be catered to, instead.
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Indeed!
Yeah. If you really wanna know, i got a couple of veterans but the one I meant, has lost his family in the final days of a war.
Good! Had to imagine one of them warns her not to hurt LUna or something. You see, a fried of mine has an OC who is Luna'ss personal guard, thus very protective of her
10735162 88.3 Make Love, Not Order.
It's not the first time he's called her that, but it seems cute enough.
10735219 88.6. A Night of Three Together. A Night of Two Apart.
I aim to please... as did those involved with that chapter.
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Oh, indeed!
Finally, I managed to read all of this, nice work!
Stupid thought but you think Cerb could ever "lose" it like this?
There is also a censored version
10736619 90. Building Better Bonds, and Mother of the Year.
I've always hoped that the pics would help grab more attention for my story, and I'm glad to see it worked. Also glad to see that those who saw the pics first could appreciate the story as well.
Dinky is younger than most, and given how small Ponyville is, as well as the limited amount of foals, I figured it was like mixed classes of earlier years of the US, where multiple ages would share a class be taught at different levels at the same time.
10736645 92. Welcome to Canterlot. Bring Your Secrets to Share.
Flash has place in the story and appears when needed. As for the hate? I think it's a mix of people wanting him shipped with Twilight, so others hate him for it. Otherwise, he's kind of a throwaway character. By that, I mean he seems important, but they do nothing with him in the show, making him seem useless.
10736664 93. Delegating and Dancing.
Glad you're all caught up. This Friday comes another chapter.
LOL! That meme is still funny as a reference, but Marines and SEALs train and operate at completely different levels. That, and most Marines don't do an excessive amount of hand-to-hand combat training. Some might get lucky and can opt into it fall under an MOS that requires more of it, but SEALs are required to learn a variety of techniques and styles.
So, for as much as Cerb gets boasted about, I wouldn't put him over the average SEAL.
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Mhm.
So, how old is she in your universe/headcanon then? A buddy of mine made she 8 years old, thus me wondering, you know?
Yeah
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Looking forward to that.
Yep. Though ironically, I used that for a scene of Fletcher once