Seven friends are thrust from their homes on Earth to the world of Equestria. Two unfamiliar worlds will have to learn to adjust to each others rules and how each others interactions can bring change or create new influences on one another.
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It’s an interesting finish but I gotta say I’m not really fond of the sheer amount of shiptease Cadance is getting with Cerb at all. She’s married, she has a kid, Shining loves he so much that together they can create super magic, she herself has literally said before of Shining that ‘all my thoughts he does consume,’ so this shiptease with Cerb makes me uneasy. Particularly since it’s so common in human fics for Cadance to be turned I to just some human-loving crutch who ditches Shining, her husband for a while now, for some new human she’s just met. Seems harsh on Shining and Flurry to break up their family dynamic like that and just suddenly say that Shining isn’t number 1 in Cadance’s heart anymore.
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Those are all valid criticisms. And as the story goes, their love and dedication for each other will be addressed. But if you also have been paying attention, on certain characters have been drawn towards the humans with either romantic or infatuation interest under certain conditions. Even Rarity acknowledged that her interest in Cerb is seemingly out of character for her. Not to say that all characters will develope feelings for humans, or vice-versa, but there is a reason why she has an interest in him.
In fact, one of the big things I play on with this story is how the characters, human and pony, at some point will draw into question what has them attracted to one another. And it's not some simple case of blind lust. Many of them will struggle with their feelings and how to deal with them. Just like the story description says:
Certain interactions are causing different effects on both the humans and ponies, and neither of them understand it, yet. But at this point, they're not going to. But again, as time goes on and their relationships evolve, they all have to decide if what they feel is real, fake, natural, or the fault of something else they don't understand. And you can start to speculate on who's affected, and how, or how they'll react, but I'm not giving away any of that yet. For now, you'll have to keep reading to see how they deal with the confusion they're all faced with.
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Glad you enjoyed it all. You have to remember though... The night isn't over.
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I just find Cadance, after everything she has been through with Shining, singing a song about how he's her entire world, their magic combining to defeat Chrysalis through pure love, Shining's love for her making Chrysalis stronger than she's ever been, having a child together, starting a family, being just suddenly drawn to Cerb like this, so powerfully, disheartening because it makes everything her and Shining have been through before this point seem kinda hollow now. What was the meaning to their achievements if Cerb's mere appearance already has Cadance feeling infatuated with him over her husband and the father of her child, is sorta how I feel.
It's also just, as a side note, I'm tired of fanfictions doing the 'and then Cadance actually loves someone other than Shining' after the show goes out of it's way so much to show that Cadance and Shining absolutely and completely romantically love each other more than anyone else. Just gets depressing how many fanfictions just make Cadance ditch Shining and fall in love with someone else after everything they've been through together. He really seems to often just be 'the other Pony' who gets tossed aside.
Anyway, I'm going to confess, your response doesn't exactly change how I feel then, but thanks for answering at least. Still just feel very uncomfortable with Cadance's shiptease with Cerb when Shining is her husband and has been with her through thick and thin almost her entire life. I feel bad for Shiny. But I guess I'll have to see what happens.
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Try not to look at what exists right now as Cadance looking to, or falling in love with Cerb. I don't think I wrote much to, at least, overtly portray that. There is an attraction to him, her attention has largely been to comfort and console him. Not get in his pants. The whole teasing aspect wouldn't even have happened if Shining hadn't bribed his way into a dance with Becky.
Being this early in, who's to say that perhaps it's not Cadance who will grow unfaithful, but Shining instead? Not hinting at anything. Just saying you might be a bit too focused on Cadance at the moment. What's going on isn't as clear cut and clean as you might think.
I also feel you on how often Shining seems to get shit on. Sure, if it's strictly for comedic sake, fine. It's a running gag at this point. But for more story-driven fics, yeah. It's kind of a bummer to his character so easily written off. Still not spoiling anything, but I like Shining and he will be treated like a total bro with the others. But yes, you will have to stay tuned to see what happens with him.
And no problem with replying back. I try my best to stay engaged with as many of my readers as possible. Have you at least enjoyed the rest of the story outside of this incident with Cadance and Cerb?
Just read this chapter and i must say
I bow in deepest respect for your amazing humor
I was basicly almost constantly laughing in different ways for variante reasons MAGNIFICENT chapter
Luna is going to be so hangover the next night Best night everrrrr
Power Ranger reference was gut busting
Betting Wub Party was priceless as well!
Major Mare sure must have steel guts / nerve.
Who would put up with Ponyville otherwise Leadership in that desaster zone needs seriouse dedicated work.
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Argument for more Stallions Cadance might desire.
-Herds exist in many MLP especially with gender not balanced.
-Open Relationships exist even wit married couples.
-Love & Lust are both very complicated topics...
-Exotic mate options in MLP a core idea of many fics.
-Love Princess can promote open love/sharing
Huh... With a more Innocent universe its verrry complicated...
This video reminded me of this chapter
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I wonder how resistent they are to potions? 15-20%?
Me multible times in this chapter:
[Edit since old video link was dead]
Love the story
warning spoiler for the sequel, you been warned!
Damn, that was one long time foreshadowing. Mad respect EmptyPlotFiller!
Good chapter, after party is a gooo!
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You know me. Always thinking ahead... Or thinking of head... One of the two.