Seven friends are thrust from their homes on Earth to the world of Equestria. Two unfamiliar worlds will have to learn to adjust to each others rules and how each others interactions can bring change or create new influences on one another.
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I just saw that Dinky pic for your story, so cute! Dinky really needs more art and storires
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Dinky isn't exactly the focus of this story, but she is always stealing the scene when she pops up, which is more often than most side characters for this story.
If you care to read along, there's a lot of great story to find and lots of great scenes with Dinky.
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provided I can catch up, given how many chapters you made already and how long some are
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Oh, yeah. It's a long story so far, and still has a bit more to go.
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mhm
me thinks the marshmallow and flutters are gonna punish him........maybe if he takes his punishment like a good boy MAYBE he'll get to release his man batter
Is that ms supposed to be there?
tail, I reckon instead of tale?
And boy, is Cerb in hot water! great chapter as always!
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Cerb did what he was supposed to. He stayed in bed. It's not his fault he's that dense, but they'll probably give him more attention just to remind him of who is taking care of him.
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Nope. That was a typo. I pressed the "M" key instead of the space bar.
Another good catch. Thanks. Fixed.
I think he'll do just fine.
Took me almost 2 hours to read this. I'm usually a quick reader but man did this one feel quite long at points. That's bad at all though. More to read for me & it's much appreciated!
*Now onto the story*
- Looks like things are fine between Luna & Mac but they've realised that they love Kelly more than each other. Don't know if I should be worried for this trio. My hope for them is they all come to love each other equally & that group develops naturally. At least the sex is fun.
- Becky should call up Doc. Obviously he liked Becky's cute butt.
- Let's go Chris. Nuff said.
- How Cerb & Fluttershy interact is nothing short of perfect. I really love how they click. She can get real aggressive with the quickness just as Cerb could calm down. I like how they play off each other. He definitely got a good one on his side.
- Rainbow needed that massage. Dare I say she WANTED that from Cerb. She's down bad for that man when he's in her dreams consistently.
- Good on Cadence, saving Cerb from Fleetfoot & Spitfire's desire but I know damn well that I'm not gonna forget her lusting after Cerb too. Hypocritical ass girl!
(Nice choice on what part of Cerb to protect, Princess of love 😏)
- Cutter is the MVP. Definitely mother of the year!
- I just know Cerb was turned on by Rarity & Fluttershy's threats towards Spitfire & Fleetfoot. Man loves himself a tough girl.
- Whatever Rarity & Fluttershy have planned for Cerb after it's all said & done? That man better pray they don't break him. Who am I kidding? He might like it!
- I have no problem with the kids taking up a portion of the story. They're really adorable. The image with Becky & Dinky in particular was all sorts of "awww".
- Mane 6 plus Starlight & the Children's group with 7 kids. That's funny. Lucky number 7! I like that Becky caught that. It could mean something. What it is? I don't know.
- Not gonna lie, I'm not too interested in Zecora or Sunburst at the moment. I know Zecora is essential in helping Becky but I feel she could do with introductions to the other humans & as for Sunburst, what an reunion between him & his best friend would be like. Especially with everything that's happened? How him & Chris could interact? It'd be quite something.
- Not much to say about the Twilight & Sniff section but this....
SNIFF JUST DO IT ALREADY!
Have I told how much I adore Lumberman & Applejack being together? Shit like this is why. If the flirtatious banter is fucking good then you best believe that the FUCKING is gonna be good! 🤣
Also damnit Doc! Call up Becky ya horn dog! 🤣
Honestly? yeah I was. You got me. 😅
SHE SUCKED HIS D***!!!
for those who don't know what she meant. 😉
This was 12/10 chapter! There was a lot I loved about it & I might reread again! Can't wait for next week. Sounds enticing!
Shout out to Timkaa for the adorable art.
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Even I admit this one felt super longbecause of how much was going on and all the jumping around.
It is unfortunate, but at least they're being honest about it. It also seems like the erotic nature of their relationship is at least a positive for them. I mean... dude got a blow job from royalty. That's no small feat.
Ha! Everyone likes a cute butt. Becky is still in a rough place, but somethings gotta change.
Aside from lacking any real control over his harem, Chris is winning.
Cerb and Fluttershy really do play off each other well. The way they mesh and complement each other, which was what I really wanted with them. Rarity can also to some degree, but her relationship with dynamic is a little different, as she usually comes in as a bit more of the stern/overly affectionate motherly supportive type. At the same time, she sets herself up to allow Cerb to be the caretaker in other ways, which is something he needs.
Rainbow certainly needed the massage to help with all the stress her wings had gone through, but I'm pretty sure she wanted more than those hands.
Cadance took a spot she was familiar with to take care of Cerb's back, but Cutter didn't seem to give off the impression that she knew that Cadance also had eyes for Cerb. So, there is a possibility even Cutter misread the situation.
She likely did save his ass, didn't she?
I've really grown to love Cutter's character. There's so much I want to do with her still.
Fear bonner.
I doubt they could break him, though I'm sure he'd enjoy the ride.
So adorable. Dinky is too damn cute.
It really is odd that they all came together like that. Isn't it? I mean... what are the odds?
I really do enjoy those two playing off of each other. Zecora has studied a very different style of magic nearly all her life, and Sunburst is a wizard in the formal arts. Having them bounce ideas back and forth as they flex both their passions for magic on each other is really fun for me.
They also did have an introduction, but it was cut short from all the injuries that took place in the Everfree Forest and AJ with her thorns. Then Sunburst and Starlight already had their reunion in the series, that's how became Flurry Heart's caretaker, although having some downtime with him and the humans would be nice. Especially, Chris.
He's getting so close, bro.
All in due time for Lumberman to claim the title Tub Thumper, properly. But yeah. I love writing them together. They click together so well.
Pretty sure if Doc approached Becky at this point, Rainbow would end up whooping his ass over it.
I did honestly consider expanding upon Fluttershy's wake up session, but it's something that had been said and done before, and wouldn't have added much to the story. So, focusing on their progression and attention towards him seemed like the better choice for this chapter.
I thought it was pretty clear what she was implying.
Egh... I don't know if "exciting" as much as "eye-opening" it will be.
Will do, bud.
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I wanted to make it an introduction that wasn't commonly used, or at least easily recognized as something that been done before... In which, I think I've done a decent job putting a new spin on it.
Also, not a lot of fics with this big of a cast, and less with humans that aren't as vastly different as these seven.
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There's gonna be lots of twists and turns with this story. Get ready for a lot of interesting events.
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Of course! And sorry for the late reply, got no notification for some reason.
And if I may say, we kinda share a similar story idea
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No worries about the delay. I'm sure we both got time.
Also, which story of yours do you think has similar ideas as mine? You made a lot more than I have.
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Well, I meant in terms of concept. We both make it that humans live in Equestria, with my stores being the main point for their endings. You just turned it around, that humans land in Equestria, not the other way around with ponies landing on earth and befriending humans who then start a new life in Equestria
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Ah, yeah. I'm a sucker for a good HiE story most of the time. Just more interesting dynamics when they come together.
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Me too. AS to why I wrote that way, it just seems the only thing I am good at, struggling with ideas set in Equestria only
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Oh, you're gonna see a lot of familiar faces here.
Ah, finally I could catch up to the pic that brought me to your story, lovely!
Though, it kinda makes me wonder how old Dinky is here. Please don't get me wrong, to be feed like that, she would have to be very young
Why did dash say goddammit? Shouldnt it be celestia dammit since ponies arent christian
Is Becky from an era of medical science that made the stem cell discovery and its potential for growing whatever material the body needs? It would make sense for such a thing to not be mentioned if that was the case. I know starfish can regenerate their severed limbs. Would Equestria's planet have starfishes or other aquatic fauna that would be capable of having regenerative properties? But then if so, the next problem to tackle would be how to have the regeneration stop upon completion without turning into cancer. Your thoughts?
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That pic with Becky and Dinky....... Very few things I have seen equal that level of complete adorableness......
Also, momma Cutter showing up in full force is definitely something to see here. I like it haha
Dinky melts evercreature heart.
Flurryheart is a delightful chapter filler.
Cerberus is a well educated and wiped dog of war by now.
Once the mind wiping and rewiring as well the general manipulation stops, they have a shitload of research in medical knowledge to discover...
I guess computer development can be speed up, but space age is a music playing long after the Humans died of old age...
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Great spontaneous humorous moments in the story.
Always very delightful to re-reading everything
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So many simple little mistakes. Now it's fixed. Thanks, man.
I need to work on brining that back in the second arc.