Seven friends are thrust from their homes on Earth to the world of Equestria. Two unfamiliar worlds will have to learn to adjust to each others rules and how each others interactions can bring change or create new influences on one another.
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Hangover will be a bitch... Luna on alcohol... Hope she isnt crashing the Moon or something
Great chapter.
moral of the story: its easy to lose bets with friends when drunk, luckily there's a chance she might not remember it.
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So far only AJ and Starlight know that pain to any degree.
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Oh, there's no way any of them are going to forget this bet.
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It’s good so far, better written and structured than many of the ‘humans in Equestria’ fics I’ve seen on here. Optimally id hope that neither Cadance or Shining are unfaithful to each other but I’ll wait and see what happens, thanks for the response!
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I appreciate you taking the time to comment on this as such. I've come a long way from where I started with structure, grammar, dialog composition. I had a sit down with a career reader and keen editor who gave me some additional advice for setting up my writing. As much as I like my earlier writing style for introducing dialog, I hate to admite that the more simplistic style makes for better reading. I suppose my would work better if it was transfered over for a dramtic reading than a straight up narrative.
O S-H-I-T ! We forget Zecora!!! She must have the sickest dancing moves with her sence of balance! Ryming would be a bitch we might wannt to avoid but the things we could bring up. With her being white with black stripes in a color exploded world... Think of the humor!
Zecora is a alchemy genius. Perfect to help the humans that seem to be a bit magic wary... Chemical medicine is normal for humans after all...
Cant think of a better medical treatment expert.
Is it to late to add her into your plans?
Lets say she was on a vaccation or something but get invited next time when she is there! Plus when she comes to Ponyville for supplys or they go to her for future potion solutions.
How could we forget a so unique character
So far they meet a ton of Ponys and all Alicorns but no non Ponys
Lets see...
Zebras - Griffons - Diamond Dogs - (Batponys?)
CHANGELINGS! O this is going to be F-U-N! I see pranks and so many jokes... Maybe some military talk about em being the perfect cover agents or something
A few things:
Open relationships, herds, and lust are not things in the world these ponies live in. That's all fanfic teritory. Having an exotic mate is also more of a fanfic thing, at least not with any cannon referances I can think of. But but having the Princess of Love promote open relationships... that's something that she hasn't been exposed to or even considered. However, keeping things up in the air so you all can keep guessing... How would she respond to them?
As for Zecora, she will be returning to Ponyville and play a part in the story. Last we heard, earlier on in the story, Zecora was gone for the time being:
But once she gets back, Fluttershy will have some questions about medicine and other biological functions.
With the other speicies; Diamond Dogs, Changelings, Minataurs, Yaks, etc... They will make appearances here and there. Some will have vital roles. This is a big world they live in, and they haven't even left Ponyville yet.
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Well i guess the first time they leave Ponyville should be for the trial of the first stab victim of a Foreign guest.
A event im currently cant really image in my head without the seriouse elements of reality.
Maybe watch the fan project that was made wuth mlp and the Phoenix write series
https://youtu.be/yUDfoZGhLjE
First murder in Equestria.
Maybe it fits since it a surprising Innocent setting like your Its so well made
The second case is currently in development but part 1 is already out of the sequel!
I guarantee its very entertaining
Might wannt to replace some elements of the story and less than this masterpiece running all together a bit more than 9 hours of mindblowing MLP first murder case.
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I already watched that series. Loved it. And the trial will be coming up within a few days in their world. At least the pre-trial will.
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You certainly have good material for inspired writing
Really liked this chapter
Yes! Best Pony won!
Those aren't ponies! Drink!
Alternatively, if it's ruled they're "close enough":
Psst, Pinkie. Changelings and Kirin would fall under the "Zebra Exception" rule, right?
Oh yeah!
No love for Batponys
Luna how could you forget
Damn fine re-reading. Or rather text to speech
More of a Children Card game player myself:
Sooo... No Thestral, Kirin or Hypogriffons ?
Luna could have made herself known, the Thestral come up at least once in canon after all.
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Not my fault they overlooked the thestrals(bat bonies) like everyone else does. Also, the Kirin haven't been discovered yet and hypogriffs would be considered more of their own species, if have their mention held secret due to their history with Luna and Celestia.