Seven friends are thrust from their homes on Earth to the world of Equestria. Two unfamiliar worlds will have to learn to adjust to each others rules and how each others interactions can bring change or create new influences on one another.
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so ironically trixie is great and powerful and it because she got exposed to our whole world sex and debauchery
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Trixie the Crystal Rose? Yeah... and fuck me. I missed the perfect chance for a joke about how she slept her way to the top. Goddamnit.
Also, you read that pretty damn fast.
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im a fast reader
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You read 17,744 words in less than 30 minutes. Probably less than 25. I'm... super fucking impressed.
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before the virus i read fimfics on my lunch break only get 30 mins so i learned to read fast
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Well, I'm glad to have such a well versed reader enjoying my story, though also feel kinda bad you don't get much time to enjoy it.
That's a double edge sword, my friend.
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true it hard to break the habit even now im stuck at home
Okay WOAH! This was a lot to take in. Poor Sniff has convinced himself that Twilight doesn't want to be with him albeit she basically confirmed that with her asking him how to get a stallion (not him) before the ending of Chapter 64.
If only he knew Empty, if only he knew just how heartbroken Twilight has been since seeing that gift.
Now that's 2 of the stranded 7 to have fucked a pony. I feel bad for Oven though. I love how she flipped his words of "I'm here for a good time, not a long time" & took it as her chance.
I'll be honest, I forgot about Trixie but damn, even she sees something between Sniff & Twilight if her dream is anything to go by. Also good lord is Trixie dream version of Twilight fucking cold! "I value the lives of our friends more than Starlight's sad excuse for an existence." JESUS WOMAN! Funny how it's the opposite pairing via Trixie being with Chris instead of Starlight. The princesses are watching Trixie's dreams I believe & if so I don't think Celestia will like Twilight very much after that last part because there's some truth to it.
This was one whole Sniff chapter & it was quite the chapter if I do say so myself.
I have a fear that Ovens might use the fact that she fucked Sniff as a huge 1 up to Twilight who while she has her beautiful plaque that Sniff gifted her, is still at the moment suffering in silence on how to confess her feelings towards him.
Hell will Sniff even wanna face Twilight after this? You can't tell me it won't be a little awkward sitting in a room with two mares that have taken a liking to him, one of which he fucked & one who has yet to confess to him. The suspense for this breakfast is killing me, I can't wait for next week! 👍
Princess Twilight Sparkle vs Oven Fresh
The legendary battle for a human's heart.
P.S. Glad that Spike's doing fine now. Sniff is an honorary big brother.
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Time will tell how this secret will come out. I mean... these secrets always come out.
Technically only Chris has banged himself a mare. Sniff just got overly handsy... fingery? Regardless, Oven's didn't get to even feel the D. All in due time before Sniff actually takes the full plunge.
There are correlations between each alternate universe/timeline, however, it appears that the time of their introduction has played a role in how their relationships developed. At least for the Crystal Rose verse, the humans came in around what would have been season one.
Right now is more like Trixie is watching only what can be seen in this realm beyond dreams. Also, neither this world's Luna, nor the Luna Ring can actually see Trixie or her dreams. As for Celestia finding out... that's going to be an event, when and if, she ever does. Of course she will.
With just about everyone else calling it a night early, I wanted to take the opportunity to slow the story down some and give it some focus again.
Awe, come one. You don't think our fire breathing beauty would be that cold, do you?
Considering that Sniff had already admitted that he had really hit it off with little miss Ovens, and he views Twilight as a friend that supports his decision... why wouldn't he?
They've even seen each other's moves during the battle with the Timberwolves. However, I'm not going to say what thoughts seeing what Oven Fresh is capable of will play into her plan of action at breakfast.
Sniff is a good guy, through and through... at least to the best of his ability.
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Why wouldn't Sniff want to face Twilight? I just feel he would be feeling some sort emotions (what kinds? who knows) upon seeing her especially if it's in the same room as another mare he just did sexual shit with as well as knowing that said mare & Twilight have been butting heads over him consistently. You'd think he would be tense going into this breakfast. It's definitely not going to be easy for either of the mares to talk it out without some harsh words getting in the way.
As for your question about whether I think Ovens would be cold enough to gloat about the sexual contact she had with Sniff to Twilight's face.
Yes. Yes I do lol. I mean we saw how she was acting during the timberwolves battle with her doing everything to show up Twilight & how she was talking about Sniff to Twilight.
My biggest concern is Twilight. She has just found out that she can finally be close to Sniff & tell him how she really feels about him but with this chapter in the back of my mind now, that is going to be the most difficult thing for her to do. Sniff is in for a powerful ride of words from a heartbroken mare who has likely been crying all night about him.
"Still wishing he would stay" - Chapter 64
She was probably wishing that the whole night & now that I've visualized that? Damn that's just so heartbreaking. Don't give up Egghead.
Very heavy chapter. Heavy with desire and despair.
I probably read to many storys parallel to have a grasp of this chaos... So Harmony is a manipulativ power. Giving balance and favor for ponys but for the price of ones destiny, development and overall free will... I personaly think its saver to think for yourself and get rid of the tree of harmony... But ones that is archieved there is no script one can relay on and every fraction is a wild card. While that not necessary a thing that can be dealt with its hard to make your nation save and get allys again the darkness or other nations... I wonder if the Tree of Harmony would discard the pony race to try get back in control...
Is the tree of harmony a avatar? The source or just a Scapegoat/- dummy? So many questions!
Without question is that frisky humans are the answers to everything
Big backstory bomb drop for Sniff, and it looks like he is only going to be MORE tempted in the chapters to come...
“Oh my god,” Sniff moaned out loud, having figured out where this was going.
“Or-“ Oven Fresh really started expressing how overwhelmed with the idea she was. “-Luna forbid you need hours worth of sex.”
Peter couldn’t believe his wet dream for no strings attached unlimited sex was being offered to him here of all places.
“Awe, fuck me.”
Fucking LOL
These Mirror worlds being attacked, the versions of the human group that landed in them and the ponies who bonded to them...
These alternate worlds can still be saved, or no?
Some are long gone, but at least 2-3 are still fighting as far it has been shown.
Cant wait for the next update!
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I suppose the best explanation at this point would be Sniff that, dare I say, has faith in Twilight. That, and likely too much faith in himself being able to control the situation.
LOL! Okay, one, that is true. Two, I was being facetious. Ovens very much wants to make things work with Sniff, up to and include, pandering to his request to give Twilight a chance and trusting him. How that works out... we'll see.
Oh? So you believe that Twilight isn't going to waste any time or use any tact and emotionally bum rush Sniff with her confessions of love for him. That's a bold theory. I guess we got six and a half more days until you find out.
That was a little cruel for her to suffer through, especially since her best chance to confront him on how she felt slipped right through her feather tips, only to find out immediately after she would then be allowed to pursue him. All of this led to her realizing that all the topics floating up around her about being romantic with a human had been staring her in the face and she turned him away.
However, if there are two things she's shown she's quite capable of, it's righting her wrongs. and providing Sniff and his friends with what they need.
I guess it's going to be a real trip to see if she plays the friendship card that has gotten her this close to Sniff to begin with or start being selfish and manipulative like the Twilight that Trixie Rose remembers from her doomed world.
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I try to make my story compelling. I'm glad you appreciate my efforts.
As once said by the Twilight doppel when first seeking out Trixie for her help:
Chapter 10. Trixie Dreams of Trixie.
"Trixie. Even if I am a distant reflection of yet another reflection, I have waited for over a thousand years to be strong enough to protect those my mothers and fathers sacrificed themselves for. Even struggling against the vines of chaos that dug at my very roots. I will protect this world as only I can, though I do not know how. A thousand years of plans that were set in motion forever ruined by a ripple in time."
Chapter 39. Dreamers Insight: Tell Me Your Desires:
Trixie Rose conversing with Trixie Lulamoon.
It's already been shown that Harmony has been manipulating things to bring about certain events or different reactions. This chapter only gave further confirmation regarding it.
According to the history of Luna Ring's world, the Ring of Harmony actually spoke to them. In Trixie Rose's world, Twilight actually found the Echoes. So, the Harmony of these worlds are conscious and self-aware entities. When they do present themselves, they would present themselves in the form of an avatar.
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I had to throw some humor in there. Glad you got a laugh out of it.
There is going to be a lot of chapters covering the following day, starting with breakfast. There is a lot that's about to go down not that things are really coming to a head.
Next week, same time.
Well this was an interesting chapter to say the least. I’m really am torn on whether or not I would want to see half human pony hybrids here simply to see the consequences play out for Peter and Chris And the others for their wild sowing of oats. As for the alternate worlds they are fascinating. I really would want to see more of them as time goes on.
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I've kind of logic'ed that out of happening.
There will be more to see.
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If Twilight plays the friend card, I'm afraid of more heartbreak in the making considering her pushing him away & treating him as nothing more than a friend, albeit this is before she realized her feelings for him started this.
You might be onto something about Twilight possibly bringing traits of dream Twilight into her. We saw how eager she was to please Sniff when talking to Starlight who also questioned Chris if Sniff & Twilight were gonna fuck which was funny at first but now rather sad in hindsight.
Breakfast is bound to get heated & Sniff will not be ready for this event.
You : "So you believe that Twilight isn't going to waste any time or use any tact and emotionally bum rush Sniff with her confessions of love for him?"
If there was anytime for her to clear the air, it'd be where everyone could just sit down & talk it over. The problem is that knowing Twilight's situation, she won't be walking into that room with a pep in her step & will likely be masking her heartache which can't be good for her. As much as I want her to not waste any time & just spill her heart out to Sniff, it would create a depressing rift in her relationship with him.
How she could emotionally bum rush Sniff, that I'll have to think about because I couldn't see Twilight doing something so fucked up. I feel she'll respect his wishes if he rejects her
(although I want their thing to work out just like his thing with Ovens because while the pairings are different in many ways, if Cerb could make it work with Rarity & Fluttershy, maybe Sniff can too.)
Wow that was a lot. The suspense for this breakfast is growing & come next week? *grabs popcorn & soda
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We'll see.
Yeah... these ponies still aren't doing a good job sharing information.
You can expect some tensions.
You : "So you believe that Twilight isn't going to waste any time or use any tact and emotionally bum rush Sniff with her confessions of love for him?"
You ask too many good question and I can't give out any hints. Six more days to wait.
There is so much that happens next chapter. Jesus...
Have you ever watched a cat getting ready to pounce?
The hind legs coiled and ready to spring, and the laser focus in their eyes?
This happens to me every Tuesday night, I swear. The next hot fresh chapter so close nearby..... but I can't bite!
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Yes, many a time I have seen a kitty ready to pounce and then spring into action.
But fear not, for the chapter's editing was completed last night and only requires another readback session from me before it's published with additional art to help open up the story.
That's right. This next chapter opens with its own cover art.
Re-reading im now sure that there Harmony has to be destroyed and one of the friendly other Harmonys need to take care of the problem.
Harmony is the biggest threat after the darkness and biggest ally at the same time.
On one hand she keeps the timeline predictable and the events consistent with what we know, on the other the means to do so are extreamly damaging and stagnation of personal development is the result.
Admiration and revulsion are earned both, unfortunately in Harmony place I would do some things differently, while keeping other things the same.
But screwing around with medical knowledge and construction of knowledge in general is definitely something this Harmony did wrong.
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There are good and bad ways of making a single-note protagonist. Being evil just to be evil can be fun, if not easy, but it so often lacks depth or purpose. Here, there is a purpose and reason for the motivations.
I think it helps to keep things interesting.