Seven friends are thrust from their homes on Earth to the world of Equestria. Two unfamiliar worlds will have to learn to adjust to each others rules and how each others interactions can bring change or create new influences on one another.
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Alright time to get this out of the way.
β’ RAINBOW MOTHER FUCKING DASH coming in clutch! You absolutely love to see the loyalty. Much respect to her.
β’ Nice to see Becky has a fighting chance & maybe even a future in Equestria or back on Earth if a return is possible.
β’ I know that they truly love each other but it's a little iffy to hear Cadence talk about Cerb that way to Shining's face. Hope there's no problems in their future.
Okay now for the fun stuff.
β’ Pinkie, how that girl will be acting once Benny arrives will be very interesting. Cerb's the only human who now knows about her attraction towards Benny. She does in fact need some help.
β’ Fuck you kindly lol. I swear you never seem to miss with how god damn adorable you make the scenes between Applejack & Lumberman look.
They are E V E R Y T H I N G .
β’ The back story behind Cerb & Lumberman's meeting was really nice & I loved every second of it albeit Lumberman was an offensive little shit lol. A black Eric Cartman if you will except for the blatant racism. Kudos on Cerb's maturity as a person in that situation.
Now for the juicy shit!
β’ Chris? You've been found out! It's about damn time. I was expecting a reaction to his admittance of having fucked Starlight but given that it's Chris & that each of them are already with their respective ponies? I guess it's not surprising.
β’ Sniff is still figuring shit out but we at least seem to know where his mind is at. He has yet to kiss Twilight I believe.
β’ Lumberman knows what he wants. Maybe there is hope of something brewing between him & AJ then.
β’ Cerb is all in for Fluttershy & Rarity & I find that just precious as hell. Oven's quip about Fluttershy & Rarity being in trouble if Cerb ruts like he fights was funny.
β’ I await the surprise in store for our marine, fashionista, & our animal lover. Can I just say that the lez out scene in front of Cerb between his mares was fucking hilarious. You know that man was liking what he saw no doubt. Damnit Becky! π
β’ Diamond Thighs....just Diamond Thighs π
Finally?
βOooooh, fuck me" - Starlight
Twilight grinned devilishly as she channeled some magic into her horn, ready to cast a spell.
βOooooh, I bet he did.β
Bro I stared up at the ceiling for a minute trying not to burst out laughing. That was fucking gold. You damn right he did Twilight! media.tenor.com/images/11f3a3fe0b7b1d3c9aaa1870d8b2db45/tenor.gif
Was hoping for a Saturday release announcement but take your time. This shit is getting good! What a chapter!
11/10. It was really worth waiting. This is a chapter I'm definitely gonna be rereading. It was really fun.
Let's get it on!
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Dash has been the sleeper power player in this story. Doing what she can Becky while also looking out for everyone elese.
Lord willing she'll be getting the help she needs.
They've been open about their feelings before, so this is still falling within the norm for them. That being said, at least their being honest about all of it and moving in the right direction.
Oddly enough, I think it's more that he's the only one that's actually seemed to care. But, we'll find out soon enough.
I don't know how not to make that happen. They just click so well when I write them together.
The transition some people take when coming from an urban environment to a rural one can be jarring. If there's been trauma, the way they act out can be... not unlike what I've depicted. Not always to such extremes but picking fights and talking shit is not uncommon. That, and sometimes it takes a strong confrontation between people like that for them to finally find some middle ground to finally become friends.
I know I've seen people butt heads and pick fights with each other, then weeks or months later, they're the best of friends.
You'd think they would have probably guessed he was up to something, which is why they weren't overly surprised. After Cerb made out with his two, Sniff doing all he did, and Lumberman sounding like he wants to be serious with AJ... they don't have a lot of clout to hold over him.
Sniff is in a weird place and will have to work his way through it, but you're right. He hasn't kissed Twilight... yet.
Only one way to find out.
Yeah, the line just came to me. It helped to lighten the mood as well.
Probably thinking "Fuck!... Should have stayed and Fluttershy's longer."
Yes.... all the yes.
That reaction came to me in the later moments of my pre-edit before I turned it over to my editor. I needed something to really sell the fact that Starlight was going to be blindsided by Twilight. The βOooooh, I bet he did.β with the given context said that she fully understood what was happening behind her back.
I wanted to, but when I ended the writer's notes on the bottom with:
Something wicked this way comes.I'm going to try and put something together for when that wicked arrives.
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Its nice to see RD as a nice character. In many she is a reckless meat head
Don't think they ever get back + they probably get in trouble if they do... Humanity would screw over Equis 100% of the time. People can be nice, but Gavourments are always Shity entitys that fuck stuff up...
Open relationships are awesome... Just saying
Fun stuff is always neat
Pinkie is a neat friend, but a potencial nightmare as Marefriend Seriously her random nature 24/7 ? Uff...
Got to love Aj and her Log of a men
World/Character building is always a treasure!
Everything is awesome
Chris is the man that life the dream
Sniff knows both to rush perfection
That a question of when not if...
Indeed priceless humor overall
Not one of the highlights, but a pillar of the story
I wonder... Can Celestia still use her observation/ recording spell she used on Twilight in the past to monitor the humans indirectly? Would fit to use it.
Is Trixie joining them soon?
Will Celestia skip the party again?
Can Starlight copy-paste there other stuff?
X-Box
( Electronics do have wear&tear problems ),
Can food etc ( its a rare delices meal now... ),
Toilet paper... ( enough to last them a lifetime ^.~ )
"I'm so glad things are different. Different is good." - Cerb
Yessir it sure is!
You know damn well he was sitting there watching Fluttershy & Rarity tongue wrestle like this : lifeandstylemag.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/10/leonardo-dicaprio.gif?fit=500%2C273
If only Becky wasn't around the corner. π
I find it funny that both Cerb & maybe Starlight have plans to slip away with their significant other at the party.
Starlight's plan might be fucked due to that hilarious ending unless everypony is cool with it.
"I want to show them how much I care about them." - Cerb
Given what happened earlier in the chapter? I feel it's safe to assume he's definitely gonna show them how much he "cares" if you know what I mean. π
Or I could be wrong....though I really hope I'm right lol.
Also you said Twilight hasn't been kissed by Sniff...yet.
Maybe at the party? π It'd be really sweet & wholesome.
Lumberman & AJ seem to have mutual feelings for one another but both just too stubborn to fess up. We know what they want & they know what they want & I hope they get what they want.
That's a lot of wants huh? π
Something wicked this way comes for our pairs come next week thumbs.gfycat.com/LightheartedOrneryEider-small.gif
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Good question.
Maybe?
Pretty sure that's a safe assumption to make.
Electronics would be too complicated to make duplicates physical copies, although recreating magical copies of the digital information has been shown possible, but the limitations have not been made clear.
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Different is going to take some adjustments, and it's a bit of a shame Becky had to show up so early.
I think lots of plans are going to have to be adjusted, or at least expectations altered.
I have no idea what you mean, my good sir. Cerb is a gentleman.
Twilight isn't fully comfortable with herself yet when it comes to physical intimacy beyond a hug, so it might take some time before Sniff would think it to be safe to do so.
Both had set up a barrier between each other because of their lack of confidence or initial perception of needing to at least look like they had no interest. But... things have been changing.
Yeah... we'll see soon enough.
Let me just say that the way you managed to mix already established characters with their personalities & flawlessly worked them into an environment with characters not of their already established environment is really good.
Given my little knowledge of the show's characters on account of my brother who is a big fan. How I see this story with that knowledge in mind boils down to this.
It's a perfect combination of IRL & fantasy albeit that fantasy is reality in the story.
You never thought someone like Fluttershy, any of the other mane 5, Starlight, etc could talk about or indulge in suggestive activities & yet you make it work.
It doesn't help that while reading this, it sounds natural coming from the characters with their respective voices.
That's not a bad thing btw. That just shows me you're doing a great job at making everything believable.
Because the story feels so natural, that is what keeps me coming back each Wednesday & the occasional Saturday.
Keeps my attention. Not a lot of written stories can do that. Funny how a story in which people from my world during a time in which we lived through (2016) get into complicated yet adorable romantic & platonic relationships with talking, technicolor, magical equines is the one to do just that.
Keep it up man.
I await the conversation regarding Starlight being outed as the only of any pony to go all the way with their human. Should be a gay old time for all the girls in the room lol.
Hope to see how Benny & Pinkie's relationship is impacted by her realizing her feelings for him & whether tension will arise at the party upon Benny's return who will probably bring Tavi & Vinyl...maybe.
I wanna see Kelly let go & just allow herself to commit to her new world with Mac & Luna. No more shame.
I hope to see a lot of stuff really. What a great story so far.
Oh shit! Twilight getting her first kiss too! She deserves it after all she's been through but I digress, Sniff is a caring soul & I'm sure he'll make her first kiss something truly magical.
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That's pretty much what I was going for. I'm glad you can find some enjoyment from it.
It wasn't easy, and I think the only way I could have made it work was by making them ignorant in the beginning. The self-discovery, being new to it, and having no reason outside of some initial guilt or shame has been the only thing really holding them back.
I often stop and read back what I write with their voices to see if it works or not. If I can't hear it with their voice and their natural inflections, the dialog gets changed.
Even they're surprised by it.
You can bet there will be a laugh or two.
Already got it written out and awaiting my pre-edit and my editors work on it.
We'll see how things go with Kelly. She's still at war with herself in wanting to go the straight and narrow path of having a healthy and stable relationship while fighting her libido and desire for gratification.
Well, I got a lot more to share, so you're in luck.
It's going to be a long and eventful day, which it has been already. That is to say, this day (in the story, I mean) started with chapter 66. On Wednesday, we get 75. The Post-War-Party Party arch is a four-parter, with the evening ending in such a way that... well... I can't say too much right now. We have to get through this party first. Maybe then you can start to guess what will happen when the music stops.
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Well, Dunky is always going ti be the cutest, but if you're an RD fan, then you are going to love how bad ass she is in this story.
Dashie is a nonstop riot and comes in clutch everything shit gets real. Stick with it and enjoy the strory.
I believe the whole Mane 6 plus Starlight is in attendance for their meeting or is Rainbow watching movies with Becky?
In speaking of Becky, seems like she's not all too keen on interspecies relationships. Maybe that'll change in due time.
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Right now, all of the Mane 6 and Starlight are in the tent catching up with each other. Becky is entertaining the rest of the guests by herself.
You'll find out in about 8 minutes.
So that's why ten became seven...
an interesting look into the past. KInda reminds me o m school, there was only one girl in class and I was the only one respecting her
Lumberton? At this point i don't remember all there real names anymore
That ending...... I'm fuckin dying over here lmao
Celestia lost even if they get a spell working to return to Earth (Kelly & Chris), so this will be fun...
Pony out of the bag, human out of the clothing.
There is no secret between them anymore. Only exception is Becky.
With all the Mares going full steam, how long until the stallions catch fire? Harmony and its plans are fucked.
Wonder if the stallions side kicks give the main six foals to raise them with their human mates.
After all, adopting is a thing for humans and its the closest things to getting a son/daughter they get.
Bigger family (more adults than children) usually also has it easier raising children.
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Can't keep a secret forever.
Less than a month, I'd guess.
There are plenty of options, I suppose.