Seven friends are thrust from their homes on Earth to the world of Equestria. Two unfamiliar worlds will have to learn to adjust to each others rules and how each others interactions can bring change or create new influences on one another.
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celestia your treading down a dark path
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Her horn will light the way!... No, wait... she's still going the wrong way..
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she stared into the sun too much and now she blind
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I don't think that's where she's been looking towards.
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a mirror?
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One week until the next hint.
First things first for Chris's part of the story
"Go! Go! Go! Go! Go! Go! Go! WHO'S NEXT?!" I'm sorry lol.
Yeah don't get on Pinkie's nerves. She could've done a lot more if Benny decided to keep fucking with her.
I like Benny coming to terms with his situation. I do hope he finds some happiness while he's in this world, permanently or not.
Again, I understand that Celestia has good intentions with trying to keep everything in order but man is she pissing me off right now! For fucks sakes woman, at least take a minute to know at least one of them like your sister is doing.
Tbh if the humans are sent home, I wouldn't mind visits if possible but if permanently? Celestia will be dealiing with some huge resentment from almost everypony in Equestria despite her having the world's best interest at heart.
Disrupting the harmony? Bitch it ain't all bad, let loose, times have changed ya thousand year old bag lol.
Sorry for coming at her like that but man she sounds bitter AF that I got to take her down a peg. Be happy that a spark has been set off in your precious little ponie's hearts, especially your star pupil.
Cutter has returned & while it was short, I loved seeing her.
It's okay Trixie. It was a mistake but you also brought something unique & interesting to the world, something big sunbutt over there just can't comprehend or even try to involve herself in...again like her sister.
Oh Sniff. You got your damn hands full. I also get the feeling that those girls don't know that Twilight is also dating Sniff alongside Ovens. If they knew, I'm certain they'd feel that they would have no chance with him.
I'm wondering what's going on with Twilight now that she had that as you called it 'explicitly lengthy' conversation with Ovens, Rarity, & Fluttershy.
What if she shares her knowledge with someone crazy like Pinkie since it's just them alone? 👀
This was a great chapter. Hope to see more things develop between this world & it's human friends.
Onto the next chapter!
Harem orgy
Celestia is getting out of her way to make others miserabel Luna will not be pleased...
Power equals fun and entertainment ♡
We still have a fuel problem... Long term i mean.
Wow Trixie recovery was no chapter lobg adventure...
Neat Still my comment suggestion was more comedic
Equestria really needs start herds... Waaay to few stallions
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Don't be sorry. He's not.
What Pinkie is capable of when she gets angry is comparable to how strong Fluttershy gets when she's pissed.
it wasn't easy pulling together the logic that could allow him to get this far, but I think it should all workout.
Some things just have to happen based on each ponies lived experiences.
Arg... I both love how long this day is going to take to get through because of what gets covered, but frustrated with how long it will take move that part of the story along.
Damn! Brutal, bro... but also not wrong.
I can't wait to get to more of her.
If anyone should be enjoying the humans' company, it should be Trixie. She needs to relax.
Hands full? If he's not careful, it's going to be his hands, lap, and face full. You are right, though. Ovens never name-dropped Twilight, and the other mares even speculated that it was Benny was likely going to hook up with her. As for Twilight... she's... dealing with it.
Oh... now there's a thought. Kinda makes ya wonder why the next chapter is called "Double, Double, Pinkie's in trouble."
Thanks for saying so, and we'll be back again next week.
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Starting to look that way.
Celestia has her reasons, but Luna is busy dealing with other issues.
Let's take these issues one at a time.
Ha! Trixie still has to get there and deal with everything else.
Might be helpful. We'll see.
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"Oh... now there's a thought. Kinda makes ya wonder why the next chapter is called "Double, Double, Pinkie's in trouble."
May God or Celestia have mercy on Benny's soul.
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I think you'll enjoy it.
When it comes to pinkie, choice isnt an option, you have to do what she says whether you like it or not, At least, thats the vibe i got from this chapter.
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It really all depends on her motivation. Right now, wanting to take care of supersedes his opinions on the matter.
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Also why is shining the only one who calls the cars by their proper term? Everyone eelse usually called them a wagon or carriage or something like that
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Same reason Rainbow Dash uses the term "everyone." I'm not very overt about it, but certain characters will adopt the proper language of the humans they're most accustomed to. Depending on how open and honest their human partners are, the more accurate their verbiage is.
An easier example would how well the ponies swear. Most of the ponies that swear have a pretty good grasp of it, such as Starlight and Twilight accurately use 'ass' and various versions of 'bitch,' while Pinkie hilariously gets it wrong.
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Sorry about the questions, again i like the story. One more thing though, why do the mares refer to them as their humans? In our society wouldn't that have implied ownership in the past? or is that phrasing different in Equestria
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No need to apologize about the question, it was a pretty good one to ask. As for the mares referring to them as "their humans," it's just their way of saying "their friends," or to reference that they are the humans they are entrusted to protect... or some other easy identifier. it's not meant to be used to show any actual possession or ownership of them.
Think of it more on par with saying "the foreigners" "our friends" "the new people" or something like that.
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Though to be honest, i'm surprised Pinkie even HAS a limit to the amount of BS she can take. I figured she wouldn't considering the type of person she is.
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Much like in 28 Pranks later, she has a limit. Granted, it's not as high as what she gives, that's just how she is.
If you told me back in 2019 that I'd be visiting a website in which people write fanfiction of My Little Pony of all things, finding a fan fiction like yours & actually enjoying it to the point where it started making my Wednesdays exciting,
I'd tell you that you were out of your damn mind.
Given how 2020's been? This story has surprisingly been a highlight for me. Thank you for making great story that I can follow along to. Can't wait to see how far it'll go & what it's conclusion might be.
By the way, I think our harem boy Chris might legit be falling for Starlight. I sense some bad omens on the horizon. Damn that light lavender pony & her charms.
Forget about AJ being the most "human" pony, Starlight has snatched that title for me both in words & actions.
Hell I've seen her facial expressions via screenshots from the show & man can she emote like crazy. Some faces she made are not too far from what a human could make. The animators probably had so much fun lol.
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Well, this story has gone through some small changes as the story has progressed, and its overall tone in some ways, which I think has made it more engaging. But, as another friend of mine once told me, in not so many words, "It's not really the subject that makes a good story. It's how it's written." So, it is what it is, but I know what you mean about the idea being a little crazy. I was the same way with another story or two on this site that I couldn't put down and weighted excitedly for the next updates to come out for.
I think he's a little sweet on all of them, but he certainly has an attachment to our over-stimulated GlimGlam. As for the bad omens... well, Chris is lucky to have that charming light lavender pony.
I think both AJ and Starlight are the most relatable characters, and probably the most human. AJ for her sensibilities, and Starlight for how heavily flawed she is. Especially in her earlier episodes where she was dodging difficult tasks that made her self conscious, fearing her inner personal problems more than physical danger, and almost always trying to shortcut her way, thinking if she did something different, it would be more than enough to do what was actually asked of her.
Changeling seem to be the best to chose. They can mimic humans
Yet again Changeling waifu is the key
Herding in the key...
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i get the feeling you really want to see some human on changeling action take place.
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Well, if you ask Twilight now, she'd probably agree. Even Chris kind of just... got pulled into it.
Well... It kinda would give them a human at apperance at least... Also Changelings can be whatever you want them to be. Chris for instance would have every female Waifu he could ever wish for ♡
Pony have to few Stallions? Changelings can become the Stallions they desire. What ever the wish, Changelings provide
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Sadly, there's a lot to get through before the first changeling will end up rearing its head. Although, you're not wrong about the changelings being able to turn into any body they wish for any one they want... just might take a while for any pony to allow that to happen.
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You might notice I went back and cleaned up some of the chapters a bit. Lots of formatting issues corrected.
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I'd be worried about Discord wanting to do something to screw with me to the point I got hurt. Pinkie... a mild annoyance at worst.
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Also, asking because I'm curious, on your rereads have you picked up on any new details or caught hints of how things were going to develop as you go over it?
Just wondering how well my subtle hints and foreshadowing has worked.
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From somewhere beyond the limits of Celestia's reflection.
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Probably sooner rather than later.
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It would have been interesting if there had been some humans discussing monogamy and the division issue; time, resources, love, which comes with having more than one partner.
It also would be interesting to see how the story would be influenced with staunch hardliner line-in-the-sand anti-xenophilic humans which under no circumstance would choose an erotic/romantic relationship with any being which wasn't human. They wouldn't mind being friends with ponies, but choose to not enter into romantic/erotic relations with them.
About re-reading and see things coming:
(spoilers dont read on your first read trough)
Yes and no. Relations between universes are still very mutch like a puzzle with to many parts missing. In the other hand we now see Harmony as a treat that needs to be dealt with in time. Normaly i would recommend 'talking to Harmony' but this entity is as mutch a treat as the other villains. Its skills to:
- It manipulate individual memorys and knownlage
- Its wispering of ideas and suggestions
- Its population and overall history control
- A script following wile not caring of its consequences
I would say they need to bond, strengthen them, deal with a treat or two to have a better understand of how magic works on them and others.
What i now noticed: They all talk about Harmony and stuff but not one mentioned the 'Tree of Harmony' in any capacity...
chapter 70 comment:
wait, so i hadn't considered Equestia being the world that moved closer to the human world and away from the other worlds that the mirrors link to. (even if that is true and not just a false theory) of course this comes from a charcter that does not know as much about the darkness situation as the reader does (but also knows alot more about magical theory than the reader does)still not much into the Pony of Shadows being the cause of the summoning. unless the POS did do the summoning but made more mistakes than Trixie, inadvertanalty shifting Equesteia in his spell and effectively snapping its anchor to it designated place of existence in the multiverse (much like snapping the stem of a fruit when you pick it from the tree) thus beginning a series of events that slowly distablise the fabric of its existence allowing it to fade away (much like said fruit will rot away once it is picked.)Many POS making the same mistake (hence Trixie's many dreamed realities) and bringing the humans there, however the humans are slowing down the degredation by bringing markers from their own reality (themselves, items, even concepts and ideas) which provides links and threads to the new realities that equestria is close to. The more differnet markers the humans bring the longer they can make the reality last. Such threads replace the core of equestrails reality (harmony) with the humans (order) which is why harmony is considered to be a negative element in this situation as its continued existence is what is driving this reality to extinction. Just a simple little theory i puked out just now. Afterall it is completely possible for the grand scheme of the villian to be completely off kilter and is just one giant cock-up. You can't just assume they are competent.
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Damn, the mistakes I make typing comments always need to be edited afterwards. Strange I see them mostly afterwards.
I suspect auto correction upon sending a comment, but also how mutch I apperently improved over the years.
Cant to Can't , do to due etc etc.
Just like I see typing mistakes now instead of back than.
But mostly it is pretty mutch spotless, especially with these giant chapters 👍
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Can't remember the details from last time, rather the highlights. Very nice and mysterious, yet I hope they get to kick his remaining main body ass eventually.
In some Fimfiction stories they even save the ponies known as Stygian
Perhaps a way how lost to the darkness consumed creatures can be saved?
Twilight rescued Celestia in form of Daybreaker after all in one vision of the past.
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Great humor and character development 👍
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I don't get hung up on spelling error or too many grammar mistakes. I can generally guess what the person is trying to say.
That would have to come much later. They don't even know where the main body is.
I'm familiar.
Not sure if The Pony of Shadows would want to "saved" or convert to good.
Something to consider, I suppose.
All part of the job... hobby... Whatever this is that I do.
Peter... luck fool, ripping into him by other will be priceless. A well earned jab or three for starting fashion with his preference
Wait...Didn't Cutter originally orce the issue when finding Trixie for her to be getting a summoning to Celestia or do i miss remember it?
Just as Chancellor Palpatine once said:
Unlimited power!
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He doesn't appreciate how good he has it.
I don't understand your question.
Egh... They all have their limits.