so new, that i comment.

I'm I suppose to like the OC? Because I don't.

At least they seem to love each other, though, even if they kinda just meet.

871839 What?

874079 You're supposed to like/dislike whatever you want to. I don't write stories to make people fall in love with the characters. Yes it was awfully rushed, but meh...

Personally, I quite enjoyed this. For a few different reasons.

Love ya, Lucey~

I'd never think it would be possible to make the party pony lay down an let a stallion have his way.

Why nopony told me that my picture got there? :V

879320 Sorry, Tetra. I didn't know you had a FiMFic account.

879363
Yes i do :V i can see everything... will read this.. someday..

Hmm...How come I have feeling Dash was watching them like, , "That's hot as hay!"

881819 Oh, that is rich!

882606

You brony/mare, I challenge thee to write another sequel/ending thing about that, Rainbow Dash watching, their exchange.

Oh you.

874079
It's Carmine.
Well. his OC.

1098507 Yay? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png

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Car loves Pinkie, so that's why this is here.
Meh, I'm just letting you know.

Good clop, and more importantly had a nice feely ending.