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Damien Darkside


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This one was especially enticing for the senses. Even with the various fetishes it contains.
Have a good read, everyone!

-Zeph the Editor

Sweet, sexy and silly. A wonderful one shot.

Exactly how I like my Pinkie clop, very messy.

Normally prefer standard ponies as opposed to Anthro but this was exceptionally written ...very HOT:rainbowwild:
Side note ; there are spells to transform -temporarily - into Anthroponies ...normally lasts between ten minutes to five hours (earth time ) so yes ... Lyra gets hands ...
~Atlas


I thought Pinkie was married to Discord .?
Oh
Wait .....
Multiverse. ...right ...
~Gyoza

Huh, Pinkie Pie clop? Well, I can't say I...
(Edited by Zephyr)
...I'll check it out right away!

[Exit, pursued by a bear]

........prepare for the fappening:ajsmug:

She just had to say that at the end.

This was pretty funny, well done.

That's not how you icing! :pinkiegasp:

I've got the weirdest boner

This was so frickin' funny!!!:rainbowlaugh:

Nice way of making an old concept feel fresh. You made bold strokes on putting as much personality in the narration as you could muster, and it shows in a good way. A nitpick, though: Pinkie is no stranger to overthinking things. She has a Batcave under Sugarcube Corner, for crying out loud.

In all other aspects I think of, you aced this. In-character r34 is always hot, no matter what fandom you're in.

7124146
I second this.

I always tell writers "character first, story second", even if clop. Well-written characters essentially drive the story forward and allow the readers to relate better to the story. In clop, detailed characters bring more feel. You can just ask yourself, "What would the characters think and do in this situation?", then write the answer, creating a more fleshed-out story, followed by adding details, plot devices, twists, etc. to progress the story as planned or make it better.

This was sweet, DD. I really like your humans. Keep writing. I want to see what you'll write next.

Never has a story so easily showcased what it means to be in my "Pass the Peanut Butter" bookshelf. Good one champ.

Holy baked n' glazed buns!

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:rainbowwild:

lol should call her Kinkie pie.. xD hahaha btw love the one with Octavia.

Artist here, would've really appreciated it if you asked permission before using my art for your story. From one content creator to another, could you at least use an actual source link for it? :twilightsheepish:

"Thank Celestia they weren’t actually ponies. Who would want to fuck that? "

Stopped reading, downvoted. Stop trying to kinkshame me when writing porn about a children's cartoon.

>rimming
why is this at the top of the featured box :pinkiesick:

Thanks all for making this the top featured story within 4 hours! It means a lot.

7123265 I prefer comedy over super serious stuff. Even in Candy I did a little bit of humor. Pinkie HAS to have comedy in it.

7123335 The shit we put up with eh?

7123482 You don't go halfway with fetishes and form, you gotta go ALL THE WAY. Why have anthro transformation when you can just go for anthros? Glad you liked it.

7123609 Not who you are but who you know right?

7124129 Best fetishes are the ones you don't know you have.

7124146 I thank you for your input! I try to keep it as real as possible and I honestly felt like I had to "tone down" Pinkie a bit. Not in her personality but a little bit on the "lol so random" in the show.

7124434 I concur. Although I am always down for some light reinterpretation of the characters (such as making Twi a bit more dom) I don't like it when they completely change a character just for their story (Celly being a tyrant). Glad you like my humans, they are technically you! :P

7124477 I know what you mean at the same time I hope you mean something different. Ya nasty.

7125331 Sorry about that, thanks for sending me the link. It is sourced now.

7125516 Honestly I thought that the whipped cream part would turn people off. Guess I am that good. Got foalcon to break the featured box so that;s a thing too.

7125555 Rimming is literally the most disgusting kink I could ever try and make go away.

You have some very tasty ideas, but unfortunately all this 2nd person human/anthro confusion crap just drives me away. Was the same with your foalcon; lovely idea, but just can't stand the format. I'd really love to upvote/fav/whatever this, but just can't. :pinkiesick:

The bat pony mare who’s chest you had violated when you flailed around had a Scottish accent and swore like an entire group of sailors.

*Shakes head with a smile* Stella... Nice to know she gets around.

7125458
Not sure if sarcasm or a genuine reaction.
Don't be so harsh, dude!

Um.

One thing made this fic worthwhile for me, as I ordinarily despise HIE stories,

That thing?

Is Stella!

Upvote via amusing use of foul-mouth'd Bat Pone.

The Cakes were absolutely wonderful bosses

so , they are easy to kill and have an awesome drop?

7125559 Welp I did warn you

7125583 to each their own, I don't take it as an insult. I enjoy writing and reading greentext stories from 4chan's /mlp/ section. It has influenced my style of writing substantially and I thoroughly enjoy writing this way. I would highly recommend Megapone, Flutterpriest or Flammenwerfer for other stories that are of this caliber but with third or first-person views.

7125731 I ran the idea past Flammenwerfer and I pretty much have a carte blanche on the use of Stella on my stories. Though I run by with everything with him so he can laugh or add to it. He loved the beginning of this.

7126332 And I thought you were Artyl for a few second you son of a bitch. Stella is best OC.

7126856 Yeah you get a profitable business if nobody finds out you killed them.

Only problem

PINKIE WILL KNOW :pinkiecrazy:

God dammit Damien... I think you made food my favorite kink.

7127434 Nor did I ever mean it as an insult, on the contrary. I respect you as a good, witty writer, and that's why I wanted to leave the comment. If I just wanted to hate on you, I could have just pushed that thumb down button. You write good stuff, but it's just not for me.

I don't particularly enjoy Megapone's works because he writes too much populist/cancerfics for my tastes, but Flammen I've been following for a long time now, mostly thanks to Stella. Gotta take a peek at Flutterpriest.

Sooooo, I was reading, then I got to the description of all the other mane 6...sorry, I mean the mane 5. Couldn't help but notice you left somepony out.
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Not enough to halt my reading, so far, but...

Thank Celestia they weren’t actually ponies. Who would want to fuck that?

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Applejack has all those apples to buck.

Okay, I know that wasn't supposed to sound sexual, but...

I’m so covered in sugar that you could shove a stick into me and sell me as candy!”

Epic foreshadowing?

“Go nuts.”

“Yeah I’m a cream filled Pie now thanks to you!”

This was a very fun read.

Totally not sorry for this one guys

Half of my upvote goes to this...
The rest of it goes to how bucking hilarious some of this was.

7126856 game logic makes the geek community go round my friend :moustache:

:trollestia: this made me moist.

7126205 Zeph why do I keep finding you on the kinkiest stories?... You just SHOW up with your profile picture...
Makes me realise how kinky we used to get >_>

7213414
Oh my, those memories...
I can't help it though, Dame is just a freakin good writer - and I'm his Number One Editor! That's like being Spike but being actually useful. While being cool.

....

Scratch that, I'm not cool :(

7213488 Why would you say that Zeph?... You're like one of the coolest people I know ^^
You should realise how much I admire you... You're the type of person I can find strenght in...

Sweet mother of Christ. You just earned yourself a like, favorite, and follow my friend!

I gave this story a try.

I could put up with the rimming and anal sex. I could tolerate the 69 and spanking. I could stomach the banana split cliche and food play, and I managed to trudge through the completely inappropriate use of whipped cream.

But I'm sorry to say that I could not handle the Pinkie Pie philosophy

7/10 would not clop to again.

naked apron aww yeah! That's my fetish
Thumbs up!

That was awesome and cute.

Scottish accent and swore like an entire group of sailors

Stella! Wait, how was he able to out-run her?

Sombrero guy

:rainbowlaugh:

into her stomach

:rainbowhuh: I'm sorry, but I really gotta question this...


Otherwise, this was a nice lil romp story. Also helps Ponk is my favorite. :pinkiehappy:

For a mare who spent too much time face-first in a bowl of icing, she sure could sound smart with completely made-up words and concepts.

... yeah, I think I'd get along with Twilight more, in the end. ;]

I mean - what do you mean 'why'? >_<

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Stella! Wait, how was he able to out-run her?

I thought that was her! :D

Thank Celestia they weren’t actually ponies. Who would want to fuck that?

I can think of a few people.....

*Looks at reader*

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