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That was both funny and sexy, and captured Pinkie's personality extremely well. Her dialogue was just perfect.
610378 HEY IM GONING TO LOVE AND TOLERASTE THE FUCK DUCKS OUT OF Uiambrony.steeph.tp-radio.de/mlp/gif/cb1dd51d-c28a-4ee8-ab06-e7993ecca67e.gif
...You captured Pinkie Pie Perfectly
I don't like one shots, but this one is so well written I can't NOT thumbs up
Too bad it was so short though.
Seriously this captured pinkie pie better than I have ever read in a clopfic. You need to do more pinkie pie/clover stuff. That shit was hot.
This was indeed hilarious and adorable. Sexy and all the other stuff I could possibly say.
Pinkie's Dialogue was possibly the best outta this fic. You nailed her spot on!
Well, that's yet another thing on my "To Read" list. I swear, this thing is getting far too big. But I will read this later and let you know my thoughts, Tokamak.
Good oneshot; you managed to capture Pinkie's personality perfectly!
Also Clover Field is a pretty lucky stallion
Pinkie Pie is perfect in this! Everything about the way she talks, acts just screams Pinkie! And the writing itself is also very well done. Not overly descriptive, but doesn't leave gaps in the story. Overall, a great read.
That last line... this was hilarious.
"I'm not that kind of mare"
.... I just...
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Wow! Thanks everyone for all of the feedback! I am, of course, tickled pink at all of the praise, but I'm also very thankful that so many of you have pointed out specific things that you liked. This helps me make my future works even better, for all of you!
This is pretty good. You did a good job showing pinkies personality. She was funny and I thought her... "order of operations" was interesting. She/you brings up a good point. Maybe I AM that kind of pony. Anyway I enjoyed this and it was a good length.
Dat ending!
Wow...
Very nice clopfic you've got going on here. Ima look through your stuff for moar.
613369 I've only got two series so far. One is cloppy in places, the other not at all. But I think I'm going to do more of this sort of thing also, since it's going over so well.
Absoulotley amazing! just wow, pinkies lines were spot on, that clover guy was a great OC and the sexy stuff were so good i nearly jizzed myself
AMAZING! i just can't express myself enough dude, i really hope i'll be a writer that is good as you, i wrote a romance/clop similar to this, only much longer and with my OC and RainbowDash, but my GOD is this better. once agian, AMAZING! 
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I'm glad to hear the OC works! I'm always nervous pairing an OC with a canon character... even though all three of my published stories do that. None of them are meant to be ME... it is just easier for me to make an OC to pair with an existing character than to try to shoehorn characters together.
You really nailed Pinkie's character perfectly (pun intended)
Great work!
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Hah... that last bit seems to be going over VERY well.
Pinkie Logic!
Dat ending...
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I'm amazed by how accurate Pinkie is in this. Most can't portray her quite so...perfectly.
Loved the ending!
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"Im not that kind of mare."
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"I'm not that kind of mare."
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OH MY GOD. THAT WAS FRIGGIN AWESOME
That was awesome!
I just love OCs with realistic personalities. The only thing that bothered me was how fast Pinkie Pie asked for sex. Well, it's Pinkie Pie, so it's an exception.
Oh my god YES GAME THEORY IS AWESOME!
1392192 lol I can totally agree with you there