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DarkPhoenix111


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One night Twilight Sparkle is about to head up to her room for some alone time with books from her "special stash" when Pinkie Pie bursts into her home, afflicted with a strange malady that causes her to convulse and scream out the names of desserts randomly. A fanfic series with "naughtiness" as its main ingredient, this story deals with the sexual lives of the ponies without being graphic. This series also introduces my OC Sultry Unicorn, owner of "Hot-to-Trot Bookstore and Novelties."

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Looks cool!

*Tracks for later reading*

Can't tell if Twinkie or

Oc shipping...

Or.. SpikeDash *meep*

Cheers
~iraqlobstah

Is that some TwiPie? I'll track it and see :moustache:

not sure if this is "so bad it is good" or "so good it is awesome."

for now, I'll assume the latter, apologize for the tvtropes link, and track this.

It's well written and interesting. I enjoyed it.

Not a bad story and a nice way to make the story a bit more mature without having to go into details. But the only complaint I can make on it is you seem to lose track who you were referring to a few times in the text.

You mentioned Luna when you meant to say Zecora and mentioned Zecora when you meant Sultry. So just keep track of what characters you mean to use because in any other story that would get rather confusing.

We unicorns are awesome! *wink* :twilightblush:
Funny story. Spike sold it though. :moustache:

This was a very silly story. Great for a laugh.
Can't take it too seriously due to the massive logical disparities within.

disliked because clop.

>>Sounds like a plan! ;)

Actually, I wanted to write a story showing how they met in the first place. I might have to do that someday . . . .

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"Not a bad story and a nice way to make the story a bit more mature without having to go into details. But the only complaint I can make on it is you seem to lose track who you were referring to a few times in the text. "

Are you referring to part where Twi says, "Luna knows I hate to disturb..."? The "Luna knows" part was an oath, taking the alicorn's name in vain. The one being disturbed was Zecora. I hadn't mentioned Sultry yet. :twilightsmile:

when zecora said "..... sexual" i pissed myself laughing:rainbowlaugh:

SKITTLES TASTE THE RAINBOW!, ... should Rainbow Dash be worried :pinkiegasp:

If I were Spike, I probably would've been a lot more upset about missing out.

Snerk* very cute and silly. Nice reference to Velvet and the crop too.

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