What if Blueblood had his eye on somepony else and simply could never make the move?
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HaHAHA o my god that was crazy i have to say your starting to become one of my favorite comedy writers
I can't say I didn't like it. Though Moarboar wants MOAR!
“ What is - eeep!” Twilight squeaked as she leaned over to look at what Twilight had left, realizing what it was a moment later.
^ you mean "what Pinkie had left". Good fanfic, I laughed and d'awwed and snickered at Pinkie Pie. I'll make sure that my friends haven't poked a hole in my condom before sex from now on.
haha that was awesome
Wait... she poked holes in the condom?!
That's gotta be one of the cruelest things you can possibly do...
Oh dear lord. I lawled so hard. There were a few grammar and/or spelling mess ups, but it was a really good laugh. Thanks for that.
Oh lord, spare me. I can't stop grinning.
SEQUEL PLEASE!
Pinkie, you're so evil.
45452 Aw thanks, man. Your mah best reviewer so far.
45458 Typo is fixed. Thanks for the spotting! And beware, beware your friends! For they care not for the fallout of contraceptive based pranks!
45476 Could you mail me them? I'd like to fix them. I ain't a great proofreader.
That... Was...
WHY?! PINKIE PIE?! HOW COULD YOU?! And PRINCESS CELESTIA?! Just who ARE you right now?! Trollestia or Molestia, because you're being both!
Quick technical question though: how did Twilight find out that she was pregnant so swiftly? Was/is she assuming the worst just in case?
Anyhoof, while that was a... * was of getting them together (Not the plot! One is referring to what Pinkie P and Celes had to resort to to get them together.) Trevor is now creeped out a little, and will be careful around his friends... (Not that they would EVER do this, and not that Trevor would EVER have relations with a mare w/o being married to them first. Yeah, one is old-fashioned like that...)
Anyhoof, great story overall! One will have to look to see if there's a sequel, or other stories by you. *Heads off in search or more disturbing epicosity!*
~ Magical Trevor, Minstrel of Equestria
45730 You are asking how a magic user knew she was pregnant after having unprotected sex? Because I'd like that answer myself. It was mostly PLOT that informed her.
I'll agree that the comic timing and writing was quite well done.
The celeb intentionally seeking to torpedo an evening actually fits rather well as an alternative explanation. I've taken to reading all your postings. Far better than most of the stuff I see posted.
I did spot a couple of typos, and but nothing distracting. Do I get bonus chapters if I point them out?
Well isn't that cute...BUT IT'S WRONG!!! Funny story, but a little fucked up when Pinkie sabotaged the rubber and took pictures of the event, not to mention Trollestia or was it Mollestia (can't really decide on which one she was during the of this fic) wanted to see the pictures.
Peace Out.
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Ah, but was it her plot or Bluebloods plot that informed her?
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I have to say, i only found this site on thursday, but i've read many things on it already and you are quite honestly my favorite comedy fic writer and one of only two people who I have watched so far
49428 Well, my manicial friend, I am glad I've done you for a few laughs! I hope the site treats you well and my works continue to amuse for a long time.
“ Okay, I guess the magazines don’t talk about that anymore.” said Twilight, shaking his head. I couldn't stop laughing at this or the ending.
75336 Thanks for catching the typo!
1.... what did his hydrophobia have to do with anything?
2.... Tapestry incident? Is this a reference to another fanfic?
79162 This was a fanfic I slammed out back when I was first getting into fanfic. I didn't think about any part of it much, I just wrote.
Ahh, noodle incident.
Still.... hydrophobia? Was he supposed to be afraid of the puddle on the floor, or something?
79934 Yes. My dad is hydrophobic. He'll walk to the other side of the room if someone spills a drink. I figured I'd toss that in because I didn't think anyone would ever read this.
Hm. I had no idea it could get that severe.
OH MY GOD!!! TWILIGHTS LETTER!!!!!! MADE ME FEEL LIKE I HAD STOPPED BREATHING!
Oh and Prince BlueBlood is Celestias Nephew
That was Fast She only just finds out that he likes her and shes allready pre...... dont make me say it
Silly Twilight BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!
That is all
Because nothings funnier
Because nothing's funnier
OMG, I wanted to write this same story sooner or later... Stay out of my mind!
On a second thought, I would have written it way worse than you did, so please continue
Oh my stars, dat ending. Bravo altogether.
It needs a sequel
1227826 AGREED. WE NEED MOAR~! *dying laughing from this story* Oh God, what would Twi and "Bluey's" foal look like? :D YES WE NEED MOAR~!
Needs a Pony Ask Blog Theres somepony named asktwilight-sprinkle on tumblr, who needs a funny premise.
1457709 The foal would obviously be powerful and beautiful.
1724563 ROFL. True, dat.
Wow those errors
OMFG DAT ENDING WAS HILARIOUS!!!!!
Now I just gotta get my friend to do a dramatic treading of this for me lol
Well, as long as she didn't just plain rip the tip off, you should be fine, as long as Twilight's tight enough, it should just stick to the ins-WHY AM I TALKING ABOUT THIS?!
Yeah I would just love to see my best students sex pictures! -facehoofs- They are all so mean! And one last thing! WHY PINKIE PIE WHY?! Anyway great fanfiction can't wqit to read yo others!
80014 hey that ending is a good way to make a suqple buleblood and twilight find that pic and the plans of what pinkie did and they make a plan for pay back
3476866 there met be a fic on the sex part
Oh, HELL yes.
SEQUEL!
that was funny at the end,
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It's Pinkie Pie, don't question it.
Ultimate in dick moves there.
Pfft.
What, Cadance didn't have a hoof involved in this scheme??
Anyways..Amusing?
sequel would be fun