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Scootaloo is Rainbow Dash's biggest fan. She loves Rainbow Dash so much that she's even devoted a fan club to her. Scootaloo loves Rainbow with a passion. At least, that's what Ruby Reaper thought. But when Scootaloo stumbles into the clubhouse one day saying that she 'murdered Rainbow Dash', Ruby thinks she's joking.
She's joking, right?
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This leaves me with so many questions.
Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat
This fanfic is so bad that it's perfect. Please continue
Pretty gued.
I'm sensing a distinct lack of Lesbian sex.
Why is that?
maybe get rid of the I.
edit: sequel!
confused af but interested, moar pls
I liked it, but it could do with some proofreading/editing.
No comma.
she had been dumped
Comma after fur; lowercase S for she.
I were a complete idiot.
Comma and lowercase again.
Comma after please.
Comma after here.
Comma after that.
Comma and lowercase again.
Comma after upset.
Comma after anybody.
Lowercase S in she.
Comma after mother.
Comma after insane.
Comma after him.
Also, backfired.
Comma after me.
Comma after sick.
Comma after course.
Comma after monster.
Comma after insane.
Lowercase S.
Comma after bad.
Comma after useless.
Comma after else.
It's a question, so use a question mark.
Comma after suffer
Lowercase S.
Lowercase A.
Comma after her.
Commas both before and after sir.
Commas after spells and after flank.
You could avoid most of these issues by reading the section on dialogue in the fimfiction writing guide.
Also, the short description acts as a spoiler for Ruby being Scootaloo's sister.
Damn you Scootaloo!
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I take everything she got from Rainbow Dash was a lie considering that she was begging for death at that moment she could have just being telling Schootaloo what she wanted to hear to get her to stop torturing her!
~Leonzilla
7902801 Thanks. I did have a proofreader/ editor but I guess he didn't catch everything.
This was a nice story. With evil Scootaloo. But waaaayyyy too fast paced at the beginning. Unless this is Scoot's normal behavior that Ruby's used to. Gimme moar!
Meh.
Fast, no good reason for Scootaloo to be that crazy, even in the exposition.
Cannibalism?
Cliche.
A knife for torture? How'd Scootaloo get the best flyer in Equestria into a position where she would be susceptible to such wounds without escape?
Meh, overall.