It's been three whole years today... Three years since they left; Since my friends died...
But that will never happen again.
~Rainbow Dash
Rainbow Dash: Fastest flier in all of Equestria, one of the two top students in The Wonderbolts Academy, Element of Loyalty, and friend to many.
That was three years ago. Three years ago that her friends died in what was supposed to be a tornado to help her and Lightning Dust clear clouds to improve her scores in The Wonderbolts Academy.
For over three years, she's lived with the shame that she helped killed them.
But today, she plans to create something that will save anyone from the same fate: The fate of falling to their deaths.
It's nearly finished... By tomorrow at most. By that time, I will have finally created Zero Gravity.
~Rainbow Dash
Parts of this, including the title, were inspired by Black Gryph0n and Bassik's Song: Zero Gravity. Go check both it, and all other songs they made by the link provided.
Just reading the description makes my heart hurt.
I am curious to see what you do with this idea, which I find to be very interesting. Some of the things mentioned seem innocently important for later on...
But, since it is early on this story and the concept could go in any which way, so I will be cautious in how much I like it. Either way, can't wait to see more!
My lord, you know how to strike me in the feels!
4984760 Did I hit a vital spot yet?
i must say it was really good
I WANT MORE... PLEASE WRITE MORE. IT'S SOOOO SAD. I LOVE WRITING IN ALL CAPS.
4986330 I SHALL WRITE MORE SOON! I'M GLAD YOU LIKE MY STORY! I DON'T KNOW WHY I'M IN ALL CAPS!
You have me intrigued. I'm not going to favorite the story just yet, but I'm giving it a thumbs up. Waiting to see more.
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Chapter rating: 4 dead Mane 6 members out of five.
4993179 Also, before anyone says it: I know I'm a monster for using that as a rating system.
4993179 You upvote, want to see more, but don't fave to know when the updates happen?
You have me confused...
4993244 I just want to see if the story stays at a consistent value. I have weird ways of doing things, and only favorite what I see as the best. But this is a great start, and based on your other stories, it WILL be good.
I have it tagged on read later, so I can check the story for updates.
4993265 Based on my other stories, hmm? Are you reading one now, or have you already done so in the past?
4993273 I've started reading "A new Stallion", and I'm interested in "The Fall of Twilight". It's epic so far.
4993299 Ah. I should probably warn you about The Fall of Twilight. It is marjory confusing, and has very quick and random plots.
Other than that, I'd consider it a good read to pass the time.
4993324 Please, I read the entirety of Eakin's Time Loop Trilogy. I can handle a little confusion and some major plot twists!
You're a great guy!
4993337 Thank you!
4993348 You're welcome! BUT, I think you have a 2nd chapter to write... Wink Wink, Nudge Nudge
4993390 I'm currently working on a new and slightly long One-Shot. I still need a cover art for it, but that should be in soon enough.
Once I'm done writing it, or when I decide to take a break from that, I'll get to the second chapter of this. I also hope you look forward to that story too!
So. Fluttershy, a Pegasus who most certainly can fly, died from a fall? A fall from condensed clouds that returned to normal, clouds which she can stand on, after the tornado passes?
5006613 Hey, I don't entirely understand it either. If you look back in the episode, she wasn't flying until caught by one of the pegasi in the Wonderbolts Academy.
Her wings froze due to shock probobly
5009034 Always a possibility.
While her project might help, it also seems like it might harm. However, I'll just sit back and see what this story turns into. I'll keeping read as long as you keep writing. You did a good job on what you have so far in my opinion with only a few spelling errors.
5327618 Thank you. I have big plans for this story, but I haven't gotten them all down in my head yet, and I'm also working on probably one of the most feel-giving (in my opinion) stories I would have written. Once I have that done, I should be picking up on this story or another.
You need an editor. "Benign" means "not harmful". I take it you meant "being"?
"Morn" is "morning". You meant "mourn", "to grieve".
What about Zecora?
5802185 I probably just misspelled some of the words. You're probably right about some of them. I'll look through the chapters and see what needs fixing.
Also, misspelling a few words does not mean I need an editor. I thank you for pointing it out, but for small stuff like this, just notifying the author is enough. I'll have them changed if they need to be.
Shit, that isn't the end, is it?
It better not be!!!
5910554 I still have other chapters to write. I'm not working on them currently, but they should be done sometime within the next month.
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good... this pleases me much
too bad this is dead.
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Still following just in case of a miracle, which I've seen.
damn this is really sad for rainbow dash, I feel bad for her
damn man
feck man this was very emotional