• Member Since 24th Sep, 2015
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BombShelter


If you're looking for sarcastic humor, you've come to the right place!

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It all started, or ended really, about two months ago. They came in the night, an unrelenting force that wanted nothing but to watch us suffer.

They took everything from us, including those close to our hearts. Now those same ponies are trying to destroy the very things they wanted to protect. What little we have left, we protect with our lives.

I had one thing left, but now... she's gone.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 17 )

First story I've ever read of yours. I now realize why you have 151 followers, and maybe 152 if I like your stories.

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Thanks for checking it out! :D This is my first kinda darker story, so I'm not really sure how it'll be received by everyone

SCOOTALOO!! NOOOOOOOOOO–(gets swarmed and ripped to pieces)!!!!!

oh man that was heart breaking, this should totally be a series. I would read every chapter! A hardened Rainbow Dash with little to no emotion left in her protects those that are left with what little she has and with no remorse.

If your looking to write a dark story this would be the hook for sure! I would love a story like this! :pinkiehappy:

guau, woah, wow, dude, that was... heavy... I didn't expect anything of that seriosly, this was sure a good dark story!!!

Nice story man great job :)

See? This is why you shouldn't doubt yourself.
No matter what you write, it is always excellent.

Who the hell is "They"?

Great story! Do moooaaar :p

this reminded me of a scene from The Walking Dead Season 2.

NO SPOILER WILL BE SHOWN HERE.

Good job on your sort-of-first dark story! You sure do know how to get the feels out of someone!

I gotta say... Very good story with amazing details! kudos to you.

More chapters pls. :)

Amazing work! :pinkiehappy: Especially considering how short it was. We need more stories like this here at FimFiction. :raritywink: By the way, I just can't get over this: "I spot a house with it's door open, and make a mad dash for the entrance." I know it was unintentional but it still makes me laugh! :trollestia: I would appreciate it if you commented back. Thanks!

PS: I would consider only tagging the characters in this story as Rainbowdash and Scootaloo. No pressure though, your decision!

PPS: Following You Now!

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