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BombShelter


If you're looking for sarcastic humor, you've come to the right place!

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During a horrible accident, you are severely injured. You wake up in the hospital, only to find your best friends. One of them has a deep secret that they feel the need to reveal to you.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 29 )

Well... thats funny. My name is Johnny.:rainbowkiss:

I like it.

Awww, sad and cute. Once again, another great story to read.

cool little story here. Fun times also very adorkable

6905597 well your one lucky guy my name never gets use in any fanfic.....:fluttercry:

"I-I love you Rainbow..." You manage to get out. She looks up at you with an expression of both happiness and shock.

because he does, or because he want´s to gives her a chance? sometimes it looks for me like they only say that, because someone else confessed to them.

Your chest burns like a fire, not from the pain in your ribs, but for the burning passion you have for this girl.

Your stress and pain melts away as your lips meet, and sparks fly as your mind explodes with pure joy and bliss.

I admit I can´t just believe everything I see, but that was honestly pretty nice.
However even if some one-shots are pretty nice because of chapters like this one, but I would still prefer a sequel that continues after this point.

Deep secret? Please be Applejack. Please be Applejack. Please be Applejack.

(Marked to read later.)

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I hope so too but after reading the comments. .it bursts your bubble

That must best what is keeping

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Since my mind usually expects the worst ending (so that it is pleasantly surprised when it is a good ending), I imagined a portal opening and sucking him up back to Earth at the end.

Trust my mind to make a sad Alt. Ending

Comment posted by lunargaurd4ever deleted Feb 5th, 2016

very rushed halfway through. Its alright.

Ehem
That escalated quickly. not that i mind.

John, currently one of the most generic names in existence. I wonder if it was some devious plot of yours to use that name in hopes that many readers who go by the name of "John" are affected greatly by the second POV.

Great story.

a god short one shot or possibly a lead in to a hie story.

Everytime i feel like my heart burns, this was emotional.

WELL DONE !!!!

That was a sweet ending.

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