Discord is the kind of creature who thinks he does not need anyone. His friendship with Fluttershy is just a scam to remain free. On a beautiful Wednesday morning something different happens, something that can change his thoughts forever.
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This was a great story, it had a couple of errors but they didn't take away from the story.
English isn't your first language, is it?
It doesn't bother me, but there are a lot of grammar rules lawyers on this site who'll downvote you for bad grammar or incorrect word choice unless you make it clear that English is a second language for you. (If you are a native speaker, then yeah, you need to work on your writing, because you're making mistakes in writing that native speakers don't make in speech. But if you're ESL, it's perfectly understandable.)
3854412 Yeah....Stupid grammar Nazi's!
Im sorry but....the grammar is pretty bad. I'll understand if english is not your native language but try and get an editor or a pre-reader, prefferably one thats english/a good writer/ grammar Nazi, they'll help correct and point out mistakes.
a lil oc some grammar issues but otherwise good
not bein a grammer nazi, but loved it.
H-hey, now. Don’t get me into another ship..
Ahaha