A heated discussion and the feeling of worthlessness make to Rainbow Dash the following question: Why was I born? What is the meaning of my life? How Equestria would be if I had not been born? Perhaps a better place?
The lunar princess help this pony with her questions in the simplest way.
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*Give me a speck of something that makes sense.
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This is going to be good! I can't wait! Reminds me of a fairly odd parents episode actually!
...why is Dash being so...poetic? or whatever, it doesn't seem to fit her character
3870889 Dash is a little shaken with the discussion she had with the girls.
3877969 ...what discussion?
Also, jeez you need an editor
that doesn't make sense
Where I've underlined: there should only be a space after the period/full stop and comma, there should be none before.
This is a great story but it suffers due to bad grammar and editing. Post this fic in a editing group and you should, hopefully, get someone to edit for you.
You need an editor.....badly!
I simply loved this.... no words to describe.
There is lot of instance were you use the wrong pronouns for Applejack. ("his" instead of "her")