When tragedy strikes Twilight she turns to the only place she can.
Requested by the winner of my first Fic Giveaway : milk rain
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Hoofprintz
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I can fix her.
Tbh this was better than what i had in mind. I loved what you did with it's perfect. Great story and thank you for writing it.
I don't feel bad for this
Oh my god... is that named by the famous song, I can't fix you that one song made by The Living ToomStone?
That description /picture reminds me of a video I saw once... which I forget the name of.
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Do it!
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Thanks so much! I'm really glad you liked it! I was worried honestly.
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Could be. Milk picked the name.
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Don't you hate when that happens?
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I can confirm :]
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You did not have to feel worried it was great. Tbh if i tried writing this story with the plot i had in mine and my bad writing skills it would have been a disaster ☠️
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Idk about that. I haven't gotten a chance to fully read one of your fics yet, but I have glossed. The one I was looking into was pretty funny, ngl.
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Let me guess? bug horse.
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No, actually. Domain Expansion. Big JJK fan so I was curious.
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Nice
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D'oy!
How couldn't I "remember" a title like THAT?!
It's called "Remembrance".
Jesus fucking christ, this spiraled out of control.
Gives me these vibes:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IgTgIuevjng
Especially the snow globe at the start
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What a freaking compliment! I've loved that video since I first saw it. Thank you so much!
So I might be a little confused here. Did she keep Rainbow in the Lantern instead of trying again or did she put her in Scootaloo?
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She kept Rainbow's soul in the lantern so that there'd be no way for her to leave her, essentially condemning Dash to an eternity of hellish limbo considering Twilight is potentially immortal.
Ok interesting
Wow, so Necro-Twi gets away with her crimes...
Tiny, tiny, quibble:
and
Those two statements don't quite jive to me, ya know what i mean?
Was there some clue that i missed as to who she murdered? I know Twilight said "some random mare" but i'm not hugely inclined to take that statement at face value. Nopony is just some random pony, they are counted every single one.
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Understandable quibble. Difficult in the sense of a 5 is harder than a 3 but you could still complete 100's with no issue.
The mare was definitely someone to her husband. Noone as far as canon goes though. Twilight took somepony she wasn't familiar with nor had any ties to her or the girls. Thank you for reading and commenting!
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Thank you!
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Thx for clearing it up for me. I figured it was that or the other. Interesting, I wonder if anypony else would come for her after this. I'm sure Scootaloo would say something to someone.
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I think someone could find out. Scoots is young so maybe not her. Perhaps either Princess could find out. I'd bet on someone like Zecora though.
I don't want anything bad to happen to Twilight, but I wish for her to stop this, it could make an interesting sequel.
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Agreed. Thank you for reading and commenting!
TWIDASH ANGST OMFGGGG and by you as well. I finally won. I will be reading this as soon as I am less tired. Excited.
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Thanks for the enthusiasm. I hope it's to your liking.
Twidash!
This is quite odd, some memory things going on here. Also a very flawed perception of reality?
It's creepy, it's like Twilight is trying to hide some dark secret. Like a guilty pleasure or she's doing something she shouldn't do.
That answers a bit.
Ok, this is terrifying.
Finished the story, love the unreliable storytelling.
Ugh, this was a terrifying read. I almost think that Twilight might have killed Rainbow for some reason, but some bits of dialogue allude to something else. But the story keeps on bringing up "their house" could it be the ponies she chose to take the blame for Rainbow's death? Love this 8/10
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So this was my first fic giveaway winner.
After her ascension to an alicorn Twilight was targeted by essentially terrorists. She and Dash were in a relationship and in Dash's home when an attack happened. Dash saved Twilight but was trapped inside. Explosion. Death. Etc.
Thank you for reading! I think an 8 is around what I'd give this story as well. Again, length is an issue for me imo. I think there's so much more to explore as far as grief and madness but I didn't want to spend ages on this fic.