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Erisn
If a Slenderman falls in the forest, does anyone care?
Erisn
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Very interested already. Seeing your previous works (which were amazing IMO), I have high hopes that this will be just as satisfying with how the story is flowing and how the characterization seemed solid on RD. Well done
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Very happy to hear you say that. I'm keeping this story hidden until I get to chapter 3 or maybe 4 so I have a buffer -- but I do greatly appreciate the comments you and other proofreaders are giving me. Let me know if you find any flaws and I'll do my best to fix them.
Wow, not going to lie, that was fucking badass on Fluttershy's part. I absolutely love this idea and are disappointed that it hasn't been done before. Can't wait to see what's next.
I really like this story so far, Rainbow is like a guardian. One that's part spirit and part corpse
, but a protector no less. I also like that the ponies are still terrified of her, despite the fact that she is no threat to them. I've seen some stories where a pony dies and comes back from the dead, and most of the time, the ponies are simply confused, shocked, or afraid for a short period of time. After the second time Dash came back, most of them ran away from her. They may or may not get used to seeing her come and go since it's a lot to take in. This gives a more realistic concept on how ponies (and people) would probably react in a situation like this.
Great story, just curious what do you mean by hidden story? Does it say "Story does not exist" for people that the story is not shared to? Or is there a password?
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I had this story hidden behind a password until just now so I could write the first three chapters and get a bit of feedback before submitting it. Now it's out, I'll update it like normal.
Ok thats really gory, Gorier than I expected. By accident I thought she was gonna get like run over or crushed I wasn't expecting her to tear herself apart jeez.
7234923 I thought the same thing.
Love this already can't wait for updates
I love this so much can't wait for an update.
Leave a comment and give it a big fat thumbs up and I will see you in the next chapter bye-bye! - Changed DanTDM good bye.
Now this one I really like so far. Damn but that's some intense writing. Character voice couldn't be better either.
The weird thing is that I can see how this can happen!
So Rainbow has the ability to bring back the dead by using a "Sonic Rainboom". Oh my gosh, that's disturbing! Within the range of the "Sonic Rainboom", there will be dozens of corpses walking around. Nopony is going to feel safe anymore!
Will Rainbow Dash be beating anybody up in this story? Will she be reaching Unstoppable Rage levels of anger? Will she be giving out any No Holds Barred Beatdowns?
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Dunno~. Rainbow Dash as a dead pony is pretty careless in that she literally cares less, but is there a Berserk Button she's got to press? And who would press it? Just pray that any changes in her psyche are good plot points and not Character Derailment.
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True, true. This could be a thing that exists. Or you could check back in a few hours for the next chapter and challenge your assumptions. Like, in a huge way.
7277502 Hmm, alrightly then! I'll wait and see how this goes.
This is intense. O.O I wait eagerly for the next chapter.
THIS IS OMG!
Well, I was somewhat right about the corpses...I also kind of expected RD to be praised for her "heroic deeds" sooner or later.
Oh boy, things are going to get even more interesting...
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SQUEEEEEEEEEE!!!!
The dead rise, so the living fights against them...
The Gaurdian of Harmony rises from the dead to fight the dead...
And the dead are crushed.
But there is a new threat on the horizon.
Not sure what that was about, but I deleted it. I don't delete comments in general, but that seemed like a totally unprovoked attack on other users for no good reason. Not here, thanks.
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What exactly happened? I left this site for 45 minutes, and saw a reply on this, so when i checked it out, bunch of comments deleted. So, was he randomly attacking me, or what?
I have no idea what happend. Just trying to figure out what did.
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Either it was him being in a bad mood, or attacking your comments in a comedic way that didn't sound very comedic to me. There was bad language involved so I deleted it because it read too much like a personal attack in my mind. It's done with, regardless.
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Thank you for the clarification.
Wow heavy stuff right there... I mean... Wow no words can describe this.
First I love this and second, whoa drama in comments section... I praise you writer for keeping a safe place to comment and share our oppiniona
7279799 Yeah sorry about that I was just tired so, sorry.
7282151 I mean it was almost midnight so I was a bit of a bad guy.
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Just don't let it happen again. We make mistakes when we're tired.
Well I guess they need the help from Umbrella Corporation. They could bring in some trained. U.B.C.U. Or the U.C.U
(Umbrella biohazard containment units) (umbrella countermeasures unit)
7282460 I'll try.
7280809 I agree. I found the description of Rainbow's death shockingly graphic but the whole dilemma caused by it and her return from dead is also very powerful.
Because a lot of the themes are heavy in this story, I've decided to change the theme to Mature. Don't think too much about why that might be. Next chapter's up, by the way.
7331338 One detail I'm confused by. At one point Starlight is called an alicorn, but she's later said to be a unicorn. Which one is she?
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If you're refering to the line:
That's a rumor circulating around Equestria, rather than actual fact. But if I called Starlight an alicorn by accident, let me know.
7332102 Yes, that was the line I was confused about. Thank you for clarifying.
PROBLEM! PLOTHOLE!!!
IF STARLIGHT GLIMMER DOESN'T HAPPEN UNTIL THE DEAD START RISING AND RARITY'S HUSBAND AND ALL THAT, HOW IS HE HERE!?!? sorry for caps.
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The caps lock seems excessive, but you make a good point. Let me change that to Cheese Sandwich.
Stories like yours is exactly what keeps me lurking around here. Keep up the grand work my creative friend.
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And here I thought no one read my stuff. I guess I've got to keep writing now. Thanks for the words!
Revenge dash revenge hahahahah
Well, things got real bleak real fucking fast.
EEEEEKKKKK!!!!!
This chapter was bone-chillingly amazing and freaky and I'm awaiting the next one! Good job, writer!