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  • 18w, 1d
    Apparently people really need my stories.

    I took them down a while ago due to some personal issues I was working through. It's childish and doesn't make sense to do so, I know, but at the time, it made me feel a LOT better.

    I just resubmitted three of them today- Rainbow Factory, Pegasus Device, and Turn for the Worse.

    These will be the only stories available on this page. I will not be writing anything else for MLP fanfiction. I'm sure most of you already know that, seeing as I haven't written anything for shy of two years *anyways*.

    If you need to contact me regarding Rainbow Factory, don't. Here's the rules:

    1. I don't give a fuck what you do with it

    2. I seriously don't care

    3. Yes you can write a sequel where you destroy it in a crossover with your normal series

    4. Seriously holy shit I have never cared omg

    5. Just don't copy it and pass it off as yours because that's a general scumbag thing to do no matter what the content is

    6. But asides from that holy shit I just do not fucking care

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    15 Percent off on all CWC Merchandise!

    Yes folks, that's right. Spreadshirt is offering 15% off on all products in the Rainbow Factory/Pegasus Device merchandise store. Also, I've added more designs since I've last advertised.

    Check it out! It's only for a limited time. Use the coupon code WITHLOVE at checkout!

    http://cwcgiftshop.spreadshirt.com

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  • 66w, 4d
    Rainbow Factory turns two years old in two days.

    I should do something special. No idea what though...

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  • 86w, 1d
    Stay tuned for a new story!

    Good news, guys.

    TarbyRocks is almost finished his Carousel song. For those of you not in the loop, the 'Carousel' comes not from Rarity's shop but from a small series of grimdark pictures wherein our favorite little ponies are speared by some sort of evil merry-go-round.

    While Tarby and I have both taken our inspiration from these pictures our own way, we found they're related enough that we're going to do a duel release. That's right, you're going to have a song and a story based on the same concept.

    Sound familiar?

    I'm excited to release it, too: Despite being only a short story, I think it's going to be one of the best fictions I've written. Even if only the quality is the best, I love the plot as well, and I think you're all going to love it with me.

    Can't wait!

    (Psssst: I'm also starting to etch out ideas for Fall From Grace to continue. Good things come to those who wait...)

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    Free Shipping on CWC merch~

    So you guys remember I have a spreadshirt store where you can get Cloudsdale Weather Corporation merchandise, right?

    If you use the coupon code EASTER2013 between now and March 22nd, you can get free shipping up to $9.50 worth when you order two or more products.

    And yes, this discount applies internationally.

    Check it out! =D

    http://cwcgiftshop.spreadshirt.com/

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#1 · 152w, 2d ago · 3 · 15 ·

First.  <3

#2 · 152w, 2d ago · 5 · ·

The original, from the actual author. Buck yeah :heart:

:pinkiesick:

#3 · 152w, 1d ago · · ·

YES!

#4 · 152w, 1d ago · · ·

Yay for the classic fic. Sure, I've read it before, but it's nice to know that new bronies can also easily find it. :pinkiesmile:

#5 · 152w, 1d ago · · 1 ·

ohgodohgodohgodohgodohgodohgodohgodohgodohgodohgodohgodohgodohgodohgodohgodohgodohgodohgodohgodohgodohgodohgodohgod

#6 · 152w, 1d ago · · ·

Very nice, even after the second read. I had to blast Silva Hounds remix of the song while reading it

#7 · 152w, 1d ago · · ·

Excellent, I've already read this on Fanfiction, but finding it here is... nice. :scootangel:

Great story, all my star are belong to you

#8 · 152w, 1d ago · 2 · ·

In the Rainbow Factory,

where your fears and horrors come true.

In the Rainbow Factory,

where not a single soul gets through.

#9 · 152w, 1d ago · · 1 ·

ugh... gory isn't my thing, but still better than that cupcakes shit.

#10 · 152w, 1d ago · 1 · ·

This was horrifying in the best way possible :pinkiecrazy:

#11 · 152w, 1d ago · 1 · ·

Best dark fic ever. :pinkiecrazy:

#13 · 152w, 1d ago · · ·

>>91225

Hehehe.  Don't worry, you can send your Shub-Niggurath back to the Forest with a Thousand Ewes, because that first was Aury-approved :3

#14 · 152w, 1d ago · · ·

One of the better Grimdark fics, for sure. Good work.

#15 · 152w, 1d ago · · ·

To bad it didn't have Picture at bottom but still Fav.

Now to listern to Rainbow Factory again.:moustache:

Ice
#16 · 152w, 1d ago · · ·

I read this on EQ the other day

#17 · 152w, 1d ago · · ·

Was wondering when this would be posted.

#18 · 152w, 1d ago · 1 · ·

:pinkiesad2:I, I, I, I....

Congrats, you made it. I lost the last bit of sanity i had :pinkiecrazy:

#19 · 152w, 1d ago · · 9 ·

You're a terrible person. And no, that's not a setup for an "edgy", "hipster" compliment. I think I might literally dislike you as a human being.

#20 · 152w, 1d ago · · 11 ·

No, I take it back. I retract the "might." I really do dislike you as a human being, maybe even as much as I dislike Kkat.

#21 · 152w, 1d ago · 1 · ·

>>91279

Well, for that comment I dislike you.

This man is not a terrible person, he is a god among men.

If you don't like him becuase of this story then, tough, if you don't like Gridmark then why I you view this?

No sorry, I don't dislike you, I hate you. You are now on the list.:moustache:

Ice
#22 · 152w, 1d ago · · ·

>>91305 your just as bad as him now enjoy contimplating that fact.

#23 · 152w, 1d ago · · ·

>>91324

The difference is:

1. I am judging on hwat he said, not a story about fictional characters.

2. He is worse.

3. I don't really care if I as bad as him.

4. I don't love and tolerate people, becasue that achives nothing.:moustache:

#24 · 152w, 1d ago · · ·

Well hiya, Aurora! Nice to see your stuff here. <3

#25 · 152w, 1d ago · · ·

Oh shite it's here. :twilightoops:

#26 · 152w, 1d ago · · ·

>>91347

What do you mean by that my good sir?

Slowely sips tea.

#27 · 152w, 1d ago · 2 · ·

Oh EM GEEEE!!! You are the terrible person who wrote this?! :flutterrage:

It's the most scarring grimdark that I've read. (Yes, worse than cupcakes.) Poor Scoots...

Okay... Fine, it wasn't that scary, but your grimdark actually has an emotional attachment that extends beyond just ruthlessly murdering my beloved ponies in a combine/thresher/industrial machinery/etc.

P.S. Wow, nice to finally see it on FimFiction...

#28 · 152w, 1d ago · 1 · ·

So YOU are the one who made this? Wow, this is really the darkest I've ever seen of Rainbow, as well as the worst logical explanation for why she has a rainbow mane and trail. But nevertheless, this was expertly done. Very enticing to read and it leaves on a note that finishes the story, but still leaves questions up for speculation.

Hope to see more works from you, mate. :pinkiesmile:

#29 · 152w, 1d ago · · ·

>>91376

He's not terrible.

#30 · 152w, 1d ago · 1 · ·

>>91405 Silly filly, I'm just joking, I know he's a literary genius.  And by terrible I'm referring to dark.

#31 · 152w, 1d ago · · ·

wow.

#32 · 152w, 1d ago · · ·

>>91418

Good Job, It would have been very unfortunate if one of your animal 'friends' were to have an accident.

Very unfortunate indeed.:moustache:

#33 · 152w, 1d ago · · ·

>>91442 *Innocently :pinkiesmile: * Yes, it would indeed be a shame...

#34 · 152w, 1d ago · 1 · ·

What a story, Mark

It creeped me out! (In the good way):pinkiegasp:

It's really fun!

Scary, but fun!

:pinkiecrazy:

#35 · 152w, 1d ago · · ·

>>91111

This shouldn't be on Fanfiction. Mind linking me? Whoever posted it there is not me.

#36 · 152w, 1d ago · · ·

And for that matter, Rainbow Factory should only be available on FIMFiction and Google Docs. If anyone finds the whole story, and not just a link to the document, please show me ^_^

I'm fine with the publicity I'd just like to make sure the proper attribution is there. :eeyup:

#37 · 152w, 1d ago · 1 · ·

I guess you could call it...

...A RAINBOW IN THE DAAARKKK!

#39 · 152w, 1d ago · · ·

Annnnnnnndddddd this is the reason scootaloo is better than rainbow now.  


Real Rainbow Dash: LET ME OUT PERVERTED MOTHER BUCKERS! CELESTIA FUCKING HATES YOU TWISTED FUCKERS!!!!!

#40 · 152w, 1d ago · 1 · ·

What did I just read?

:pinkiecrazy: :twilightoops: :pinkiesick: :fluttershbad: :rainbowderp: :raritycry: :rainbowwild: :raritydespair: :fluttercry:

#41 · 152w, 1d ago · · ·

It might just be because it was about foals, or it might just be because of the incredibly horrible RD, but I found this more disturbing than cupcakes.

#42 · 152w, 1d ago · · 3 ·

>>91305

Hipsterism ill serves anyone. But least of all someone that loves to think their own property is clean and pure as the driven slush. I know you just want to be cool and ironic, drinking your Pabst for a laugh and listening to music you hate to be a snob. But do it in your underground clubs with your other anticonformist friends. :facehoof:

#43 · 152w, 1d ago · · ·

I will never look at Rainbow Dash the same way again.:raritydespair:

#44 · 152w, 1d ago · · ·

At the part where Rainbow Dash reveals herself at first I was like :derpyderp2:

Then i was like, "NOOOOOO! NOT RAINBOW DASH! WHY?! WHYYYYYY?!?!:fluttercry:

From then on with Scootaloo crushed and Rainbow Dash spiraling further into her insanity that almost made me feel sorry for her, I felt... I felt...

:applecry:

Something like that.

Honestly, I don't particularly like stories like these: gory, character destroying. However, this is much better than cupcakes. This holds something sincere and heart-wrenching that isn't simply a Cupcakes shock value trollfic. I appreciate and respect your story a lot more.

#45 · 152w, 1d ago · · ·

Ghost thinks this is funny.

Flare thinks this is completely horrible.

Absinthe doesn't care.

I don't really know what to think.

:pinkiecrazy:

#46 · 152w, 1d ago · 1 · ·

Read the story, then went to check out your profile for some more works by you... Then I realized you murdered your OC/Alter Ego pony in the story! Why man, why!

Fantastic job mate, the dark in MLP is enhanced greatly due to the usually colorful and happy atmosphere of the show.

#47 · 152w, 1d ago · · ·

well atleast scootaloo died with dignity

#48 · 152w, 1d ago · · ·

Can't really tell if it's better than Cupcakes. Cupcakes makes me grin in a creepy fashion - this leaves me slightly moved. Especially the last line.

As to being scarring... Fallout Equestria stands strong as the most scarring grimdark fanfic out there for me, as that was what desensitized me to ponies being combined with gore and suffering.

#49 · 152w, 1d ago · · ·

>>MeTaLGuArD

Which doesn't change the fact that FoE is my top favourite fanfic of all time.

#50 · 152w, 1d ago · · ·

God.... this story and Cheerilee's Garden.

Just wow... Both tie in the first place of the Grimdark for me!

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