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  • Pegasus Device
    In the sequel to Rainbow Factory, can two foals survive the secrets of the Corporation?

    53,500 words · 28,327 views · 913 likes · 44 dislikes
  • A Turn for the Worse
    An archaeologist mare risks everything to be legendary in her field, and gets much more than she bargained for.
    7,144 words · 627 views · 35 likes · 2 dislikes

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Comments ( 851 )

#1 · 135w, 1d ago · 3 · 12 ·

First.  <3

#2 · 135w, 1d ago · 4 · ·

The original, from the actual author. Buck yeah :heart:


#3 · 135w, 23h ago · · ·


#4 · 135w, 22h ago · · ·

Yay for the classic fic. Sure, I've read it before, but it's nice to know that new bronies can also easily find it. :pinkiesmile:

#5 · 135w, 22h ago · · 1 ·


#6 · 135w, 22h ago · · ·

Very nice, even after the second read. I had to blast Silva Hounds remix of the song while reading it

#7 · 135w, 22h ago · · ·

Excellent, I've already read this on Fanfiction, but finding it here is... nice. :scootangel:

Great story, all my star are belong to you

#8 · 135w, 22h ago · 2 · ·

In the Rainbow Factory,

where your fears and horrors come true.

In the Rainbow Factory,

where not a single soul gets through.

#9 · 135w, 22h ago · · ·

ugh... gory isn't my thing, but still better than that cupcakes shit.

#10 · 135w, 22h ago · 1 · ·

This was horrifying in the best way possible :pinkiecrazy:

#11 · 135w, 21h ago · 1 · ·

Best dark fic ever. :pinkiecrazy:

#13 · 135w, 21h ago · · ·


Hehehe.  Don't worry, you can send your Shub-Niggurath back to the Forest with a Thousand Ewes, because that first was Aury-approved :3

#14 · 135w, 21h ago · · ·

One of the better Grimdark fics, for sure. Good work.

#15 · 135w, 20h ago · · ·

To bad it didn't have Picture at bottom but still Fav.

Now to listern to Rainbow Factory again.:moustache:

#16 · 135w, 20h ago · · ·

I read this on EQ the other day

#17 · 135w, 20h ago · · ·

Was wondering when this would be posted.

#18 · 135w, 20h ago · 1 · ·

:pinkiesad2:I, I, I, I....

Congrats, you made it. I lost the last bit of sanity i had :pinkiecrazy:

#19 · 135w, 20h ago · · 8 ·

You're a terrible person. And no, that's not a setup for an "edgy", "hipster" compliment. I think I might literally dislike you as a human being.

#20 · 135w, 20h ago · · 10 ·

No, I take it back. I retract the "might." I really do dislike you as a human being, maybe even as much as I dislike Kkat.

#21 · 135w, 20h ago · · ·


Well, for that comment I dislike you.

This man is not a terrible person, he is a god among men.

If you don't like him becuase of this story then, tough, if you don't like Gridmark then why I you view this?

No sorry, I don't dislike you, I hate you. You are now on the list.:moustache:

#22 · 135w, 20h ago · · ·

>>91305 your just as bad as him now enjoy contimplating that fact.

#23 · 135w, 20h ago · · ·


The difference is:

1. I am judging on hwat he said, not a story about fictional characters.

2. He is worse.

3. I don't really care if I as bad as him.

4. I don't love and tolerate people, becasue that achives nothing.:moustache:

#24 · 135w, 20h ago · · ·

Well hiya, Aurora! Nice to see your stuff here. <3

#25 · 135w, 19h ago · · ·

Oh shite it's here. :twilightoops:

#26 · 135w, 19h ago · · ·


What do you mean by that my good sir?

Slowely sips tea.

#27 · 135w, 19h ago · 2 · ·

Oh EM GEEEE!!! You are the terrible person who wrote this?! :flutterrage:

It's the most scarring grimdark that I've read. (Yes, worse than cupcakes.) Poor Scoots...

Okay... Fine, it wasn't that scary, but your grimdark actually has an emotional attachment that extends beyond just ruthlessly murdering my beloved ponies in a combine/thresher/industrial machinery/etc.

P.S. Wow, nice to finally see it on FimFiction...

#28 · 135w, 19h ago · · ·

So YOU are the one who made this? Wow, this is really the darkest I've ever seen of Rainbow, as well as the worst logical explanation for why she has a rainbow mane and trail. But nevertheless, this was expertly done. Very enticing to read and it leaves on a note that finishes the story, but still leaves questions up for speculation.

Hope to see more works from you, mate. :pinkiesmile:

#29 · 135w, 18h ago · · ·


He's not terrible.

#30 · 135w, 18h ago · 1 · ·

>>91405 Silly filly, I'm just joking, I know he's a literary genius.  And by terrible I'm referring to dark.

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#32 · 135w, 18h ago · · ·


Good Job, It would have been very unfortunate if one of your animal 'friends' were to have an accident.

Very unfortunate indeed.:moustache:

#33 · 135w, 18h ago · · ·

>>91442 *Innocently :pinkiesmile: * Yes, it would indeed be a shame...

#34 · 135w, 18h ago · 1 · ·

What a story, Mark

It creeped me out! (In the good way):pinkiegasp:

It's really fun!

Scary, but fun!


#35 · 135w, 18h ago · · ·


This shouldn't be on Fanfiction. Mind linking me? Whoever posted it there is not me.

#36 · 135w, 18h ago · · ·

And for that matter, Rainbow Factory should only be available on FIMFiction and Google Docs. If anyone finds the whole story, and not just a link to the document, please show me ^_^

I'm fine with the publicity I'd just like to make sure the proper attribution is there. :eeyup:

#37 · 135w, 17h ago · 1 · ·

I guess you could call it...


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#39 · 135w, 16h ago · · ·

Annnnnnnndddddd this is the reason scootaloo is better than rainbow now.  


#40 · 135w, 16h ago · 1 · ·

What did I just read?

:pinkiecrazy: :twilightoops: :pinkiesick: :fluttershbad: :rainbowderp: :raritycry: :rainbowwild: :raritydespair: :fluttercry:

#41 · 135w, 16h ago · · ·

It might just be because it was about foals, or it might just be because of the incredibly horrible RD, but I found this more disturbing than cupcakes.

#42 · 135w, 16h ago · · 3 ·


Hipsterism ill serves anyone. But least of all someone that loves to think their own property is clean and pure as the driven slush. I know you just want to be cool and ironic, drinking your Pabst for a laugh and listening to music you hate to be a snob. But do it in your underground clubs with your other anticonformist friends. :facehoof:

#43 · 135w, 16h ago · · ·

I will never look at Rainbow Dash the same way again.:raritydespair:

#44 · 135w, 15h ago · · ·

At the part where Rainbow Dash reveals herself at first I was like :derpyderp2:

Then i was like, "NOOOOOO! NOT RAINBOW DASH! WHY?! WHYYYYYY?!?!:fluttercry:

From then on with Scootaloo crushed and Rainbow Dash spiraling further into her insanity that almost made me feel sorry for her, I felt... I felt...


Something like that.

Honestly, I don't particularly like stories like these: gory, character destroying. However, this is much better than cupcakes. This holds something sincere and heart-wrenching that isn't simply a Cupcakes shock value trollfic. I appreciate and respect your story a lot more.

#45 · 135w, 15h ago · · ·

Ghost thinks this is funny.

Flare thinks this is completely horrible.

Absinthe doesn't care.

I don't really know what to think.


#46 · 135w, 15h ago · 1 · ·

Read the story, then went to check out your profile for some more works by you... Then I realized you murdered your OC/Alter Ego pony in the story! Why man, why!

Fantastic job mate, the dark in MLP is enhanced greatly due to the usually colorful and happy atmosphere of the show.

#47 · 135w, 15h ago · · ·

well atleast scootaloo died with dignity

#48 · 135w, 15h ago · · ·

Can't really tell if it's better than Cupcakes. Cupcakes makes me grin in a creepy fashion - this leaves me slightly moved. Especially the last line.

As to being scarring... Fallout Equestria stands strong as the most scarring grimdark fanfic out there for me, as that was what desensitized me to ponies being combined with gore and suffering.

#49 · 135w, 15h ago · · ·


Which doesn't change the fact that FoE is my top favourite fanfic of all time.

#50 · 135w, 15h ago · · ·

God.... this story and Cheerilee's Garden.

Just wow... Both tie in the first place of the Grimdark for me!

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