Her Shield, His Heart
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Best horsebando
8535883
That he is. Thanks for commenting, this tale needs more love.
9955429
The rest of the story I mean.
9955458
Y'know, I think I should have split it into two different stories. The tone shift was...jarring.
9955830
No, the two are too connected for something like that. Rather you should change the tones. Make the first part more mundane and lighthearted and the rest more serious and heavy. Try to bring the two extremes closer together.
9957076
But the first part is light and its the second part that goes dark.
9957200
Sorry. But my point still remains. Try to bring the two extreme's closer together.