6765836 Thank you for your comment. I've always been told in my creative writing classes to show not tell. I was trying to convey a sulky, angry Cadence via dialogue ("I'll give you two words-fuck off") and her actions. However, I do need to work on adding detail.
Knowing Cadance I would actually think that she would be reluctant to share power with some sort of elected counsel. She seems to me like a bit of an autocrat who prefers to rule herself and maybe let her husband handle the military but she would want to care for her people herself and not delegate it to some random ponies that she doesn't know.
6875401 Not love no. While it may be occasionally necessary to deter a child from misbehavior that could harm themselves or others, it's not the most effective disciplinary tactic a parent could employ. It can also be incredibly hot when used as a bedroom activity between adults. (Really, I'm completely torn on the spanking debate. My ma probably unintentionally gave a spanking fetish, but spanking really DID keep me from doing dangerous stuff.)
6875452 I was never spanked as a child and I'm now quite torn about it. Some people support it quite feverishly and I'm unsure of what to think about it.
6912420 I have an explanation for Celestia's non-involvement (it has to do with not interfering in another sovereign's realm. Cadence is basically a "big mare" now and needs to request help before Celestia will grant it.) More explanation will be in the next chapter.
6918928 I'm not saying you should remove it but it started awkwardly. Why would they just start slapping each other when they are in such a serious mindset.
6694379 Considering how medieval Equestria appears spanking is probably quite common.
6765836 Thank you for your comment. I've always been told in my creative writing classes to show not tell. I was trying to convey a sulky, angry Cadence via dialogue ("I'll give you two words-fuck off") and her actions. However, I do need to work on adding detail.
Knowing Cadance I would actually think that she would be reluctant to share power with some sort of elected counsel. She seems to me like a bit of an autocrat who prefers to rule herself and maybe let her husband handle the military but she would want to care for her people herself and not delegate it to some random ponies that she doesn't know.
6800446
what exactly do you mean by that?
6816312 I took them down then I put them back up.
6816754
I really would want you to continue this. I really love the way you write Cadance and also your writing style.
6818373 Thanks. I think I will continue this once I get some more inspiration for it.
6820683
Maybe I can help.
What do you seriously think about spanking btw?
6875331 I hated it when I was a kid and love it as an adult. That and naps and mushrooms.
6875333
Seriously. You don't love people spanking children, right?
6875401 Not love no. While it may be occasionally necessary to deter a child from misbehavior that could harm themselves or others, it's not the most effective disciplinary tactic a parent could employ.
It can also be incredibly hot when used as a bedroom activity between adults.
(Really, I'm completely torn on the spanking debate. My ma probably unintentionally gave a spanking fetish, but spanking really DID keep me from doing dangerous stuff.)
6875452
I was never spanked as a child and I'm now quite torn about it. Some people support it quite feverishly and I'm unsure of what to think about it.
6912420 I have an explanation for Celestia's non-involvement (it has to do with not interfering in another sovereign's realm. Cadence is basically a "big mare" now and needs to request help before Celestia will grant it.) More explanation will be in the next chapter.
6918915
She doesn't need to do anything. She would just be there to provide moral support. Cadance still is very young.
6918928
I'm not saying you should remove it but it started awkwardly. Why would they just start slapping each other when they are in such a serious mindset.
6919019 (Next chapter will explain it all, promise.)
6919032
how so?
btw: are you into roleplays?
6919045 (I'm not going to tell you, just read the next chapter to find out. Oh and Twilight shows up too.) And yes, occasionally.
6919072
I don't mean online roleplays but roleplay as a sexsual game.
I confess I wasn't paying the closest of attention and thought you meant that she detached her wings.
I am not a smart man.